Looking for advice

[rustic gull]

Failed to get an internship and I graduate this August. What can I do to improve this resume?

I did create an inventory app, so thinking of removing the ecom or whole foods and just adding that under personal projects

I plan on attempting some ML / AI personal projects to heighten the quality, but besides that what can be improved? Be brutal please

[vagrant thistle]

Performed a full stack project..?

bullet sfor the car service arent that good

would use format of:
What you created, how you create it (technologies/languages), and any impact if possible (metrics)

[rustic gull]

Noted thank you, is there anything else?

[rustic gull]

yeah I figured this sounded lackluster

[vagrant thistle]

“Safely launched and shutdown project without error.”

text game isnt that great either, too much explaining what the game does rather than how you msde it

any algorithms? design patterns? databases?

[rustic gull]

Yeah that is true

[rustic gull]

Would you happen to know any links to a resume showcasing each section?

I think I struggle with the bulletpoints in the projects at least

[rustic gull]

Thank you!

[rustic gull]

Is it okay if I tag you in the updated version tomorrow?

[vagrant thistle]

sure