#Graduated in April, looking for any feedback!
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pretty good resume id say
put some metrics in your exp if you can
second project might be a bit weak
would try to remove the fluff like "Collaborated ... "
give examples of tasks that u automated, would try to be more explicit
Appreciate it, did some shuffling and added some metrics where I saw fit.
wouldnt highlight the links in blue, including links to your projects is wtv imo
1st point of your first 2 exp might need more explicit explanations i feel like
cuz for example the shopify one well it doesnt add much, its taken care of by the second point
for the change.org, what did you modernize
stuff like that
My manager recommended I include the link, which is why I did it.
I agree the project links probably don't add much since it's unlikely they're clicked, but I also don't see them hurting.
Reworded quite a bit to try and keep things clear, showing the impact, and what tech was used. Thanks for the feedback.
I do feel like cutting back on the using _____ on the end of most points, for examples like that, how do we feel about repetitive language in a resume? In a cover letter I would definitely try and use synonyms or even reword stuff completely.
ok at least i would make their font color black