#Graduated in April, looking for any feedback!

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random moss
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Been applying like crazy. I've been pretty confident in my resume, but I haven't gotten any interviews aside for places I have referrals for. With that in mind I'm wondering if there's some improvements I can make. Appreciate any feedback!

bright hearth
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pretty good resume id say

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put some metrics in your exp if you can

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second project might be a bit weak

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would try to remove the fluff like "Collaborated ... "

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give examples of tasks that u automated, would try to be more explicit

random moss
bright hearth
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wouldnt highlight the links in blue, including links to your projects is wtv imo

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1st point of your first 2 exp might need more explicit explanations i feel like

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cuz for example the shopify one well it doesnt add much, its taken care of by the second point

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stuff like that

random moss
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My manager recommended I include the link, which is why I did it.
I agree the project links probably don't add much since it's unlikely they're clicked, but I also don't see them hurting.
Reworded quite a bit to try and keep things clear, showing the impact, and what tech was used. Thanks for the feedback.

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I do feel like cutting back on the using _____ on the end of most points, for examples like that, how do we feel about repetitive language in a resume? In a cover letter I would definitely try and use synonyms or even reword stuff completely.

bright hearth
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ok at least i would make their font color black