#2 YoE New Grad
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further those self rankings are subjective
“Improved functionality of…”
- Remove the period and just say “… e-commerce marketplace by allowing users to bookmark products… using Angular.”
“Allowed client to customize SMS …”
- what benefit did this have? why did they have u do this?
“Improved client hosted storefronts”
- using anything in particular? doesnt sound like a particularly strong bullet
also not a fan of the whole “Bolded item: bullet point”, the bolded part doesnt seem necessary especially since youre explaining everything in the bullet point itself
“… to dramatically decrease page load times..”
- any numbers to actually back this up? how do u know it was dramatic? how do u even know it decreased?
“Implemented an interactive…”
- using what?
- remove the period and just add a comma. “… calendar user interface, enabling stores to easily…”
please find another word other than implemented, u use it too much
“Implemented improvements to…”
- using what?
- any numbers to back up the claim that this increased efficiency?
“Developed a progressive web application…”
- using.. what??
“Created a central admin portal…
- Too many unnecessary periods. Just say “Created a central admin portal, using Angular, for employees to manage client data.”
“Developed an ionic…”
- using …???
do ur projects in this type of format. You have the space for it.
dont need the mini bullet point titles imo
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