Need Feedback on my new project description

[wet gale]

since quality bad

[desert knoll]

scraper and porfolio might be too simple

design exp takes too much space

your twitter project isnt separated in bullet points really, but i guess you were lacking space

same with the next 2 projects

[wet gale]

yeah it’s a space issue

[wet gale]

yeah i might switch them out with other projects i’ve done

Overtime I’ll be working on more advanced projects that will replace those simple ones

I’m applying for data analyst intern stuff

I keep the design stuff because it helped a lot in the interviews because they ask out of curiosity

[molten spoke]

what kind of roles are you applying for? if you are applying for swe intern related roles (as this is a cs career hub) i don't see the value in adding non-computer science related roles to experience section. Anyone else have any opinions on this?

Also, your bulletpoints do a decent job at explaining what tools/languages/libraries you use to build the projects, but reading off the first bulletpoint doesn't really give me a clear and easy and concise idea of what that project's main goal was.

it's like you mix in the keywords in the first bulletpoints and the techniques that you used so that the main purpose of the program becomes harder to get to.

for example: "built a script to scrape information from expedia using python and beatuiful soup". what kind of info? Who was this project for? did you do anything with that info for analysis?

[wet gale]

Data Analyst

[wet gale]

All my projects are personal projects, on some projects there's an article on my foundings and conclusions about the info but I dont have space to explain the whole world

My projects will be more understanding knowing that it's a data related field

[wet gale]

@desert knoll @jagged jewel I would like to say thank you for all resume help, this wasn't the first time i posted in here, I got my first internship offer today

[sullen oxide]

i see it as being a someone instead of a nobody

Shows initiative

also tutor roles show that you know the subjects enough to teach someone else

[wet gale]

I kept the roles also because recuiters ask me about them and those experiences helped me explain my soft skills which I am not reallysupposed to add

Me working with a dating app is a good convo starters also so its stuff that attracted more attention

so overall i kept it because it worked