#Can I get a resume review please? (accidentally deleted original post)

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remote wigeon
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too much padding around the content

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for how to write your sentences

hazy rapids
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Thank you

hazy rapids
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Can I get a resume review please? (accidentally deleted original post)

maiden quarry
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your bullet points in general need work

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please break up your bullet points

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“Making each page mobile responsive” is a pretty weak bullet by jtself. Same with the first bullet of DB manager

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“Created user-friendly, and mobile responsive web pages using … enhancing the customer experience”

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“Created and maintained Microsoft Access databases to store and organize over 5GB of data.” or somethin

grim island
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ur top section says education but do u want it to say experience?

hazy rapids
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Oh yes thank you

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thats a mistake

hazy rapids
hazy rapids
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is this better please?

remote wigeon
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extracurriculars takes a lot of space

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your last 2 projects look really simple

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they dont look like a project per se

hazy rapids
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for the 2nd project should i explain more about what the methods do?

remote wigeon
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its just not really a project

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its looks more like a school exercise? something like that

hazy rapids
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its an assignment from school. i dont have anything else that sounds more impressive to add. i left a lot of details out of it also

remote wigeon
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hmmm ok, then i would maybe try to find something online in c++

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and in c for the other one

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or you can do 2 c++ ones

hazy rapids
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i have 1 more c++ project i can add to it from my github

remote wigeon
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ahh if you want frontend i guess do more frontend then

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the more varied the better though

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so another type of website