#Seeking newgrad Data Science and SWE positions

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proud cargo
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Hi there, I'm posting a friends resume and he's looking for primarily data science positions, and if he can't get those then SWE positions. Doesn't seem to be having too much luck and yesterday applied to a place and got rejected in 24 hours.
He's a newgrad and just finished university this month.
Any and all criticism is greatly appreciated!

golden estuary
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if he gets rejected like that its usually a criteria thing rather than a resume thing

proud cargo
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Could you elaborate? it means he didnt pass enough criteria, rather than his resume being weak?

golden estuary
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yeah

proud cargo
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ah okay ill tell him that

golden estuary
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like he needs a visa for it or wtv

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or hes graduating too soon or too late

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stuff like that

proud cargo
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ah i see

golden estuary
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resume wise :

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id remove warehouse operator, replace it with a project

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its JUnit

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"developed a website" needs the technologies used

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the photoshop bullet point is fluff

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"agile and scrum environment" is fluff

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the second bullet point for TD is also fluff

proud cargo
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what would u try to replace the fluff with then

golden estuary
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talk more about the platform that he developed

proud cargo
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anything else? how about the projects or skills section

golden estuary
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2nd bullet point of his 2nd project is also fluff

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some of those languages arent languages

proud cargo
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o true

golden estuary
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being 4th or 5th in achievements isnt that impressive, but i guess its better than nothing

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if he has more projects id remove the 2 other exps

proud cargo
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okay

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thanks

long lichen
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i would have languages and another section for frameworks

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since you have angular, react, junit

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just enough to have a section

icy cloud
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4th out of 100 can be impressive

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4th out of 20 is where it doesn’t make sense

long lichen
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You could be small and say

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4th/100