Tomb of the Crescent Moon

[idle anchor]

Ooooo sounds very cool! Will give it a read after work 😊

[solid yacht]

Please do let me know if you have any reactions to the doc. I'm looking forward to revising it with the upcoming Patreon packet.

[idle anchor]

I haven’t made it as far as I would like sadly, but I have some more reading time tonight/tomorrow, I’ll certainly let you know what I think!

[idle anchor]

ok first read through: I like it! fun concept and I love the ways you've added complexity without making it hard to understand! I think the tomb layout section had me slightly confused, but the maps help clear that up right away. The only other thing that I'm getting stuck on is the time raider numbers and locations, which weren't totally clear to me, at least on this first read. It also feels like maybe the time raiders should have some greater plan or at least an escape route, eg some kind of spacecraft or teleport pad, but overall I think it looks really fun!

the final boss known as scheduling may keep me from actually running this for some time but if I get a chance I'll def feed back about it! my players love moon motifs haha

[solid yacht]

that's useful feedback - thank you!

[solid yacht]

i love your idea of a greater escape plan, although i think the Time Raiders need the crystals to power their ship/transport. that being said, i didn't want to sci-fantasy things too much in this adventure but i think that's something a Director could easily add on their own! Maybe once the Timescape material has been officially released I can make a part two which leads to the outer worlds.