Dec 15 - Production Feedback Stream | FWLR's Garage | Page 1

lavish loom Dec 3, 2023, 1:06 AM

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Production Feedback Stream Submissions
Friday at 5:00PM AST!
(<t:1663963200:t> in your local timezone)

If you'd like to submit a track for feedback:

Name the 320kbps mp3/wav file "Artist Name - Song Title - Date of Stream" - Example: FWLR_-_How_We_Win_-_5-20-22.wav

Post it to this thread as a downloadable file (not a SoundCloud link!) before 5pm AST the day of the stream.

Try to provide feedback for other submissions! All feedback is appreciated - help your fellow musicians learn and grow!

The thread will be locked when the streams begin, so make sure to submit before the deadline and follow the guidelines!

silk timber Dec 3, 2023, 8:11 AM

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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeo

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gamers

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the nuts

keen swan Dec 3, 2023, 3:42 PM

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nothing on the 9th?

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damn

tacit kindle Dec 3, 2023, 11:38 PM

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lavish loom Dec 4, 2023, 7:42 PM

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keen swan nothing on the 9th?

Nick is going to be out of town, no stream this week.

keen swan Dec 5, 2023, 2:58 AM

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lavish loom Nick is going to be out of town, no stream this week.

alr

dreamy smelt Dec 10, 2023, 8:16 PM

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next juniper Dec 10, 2023, 9:08 PM

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jade lake Dec 11, 2023, 11:43 AM

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hoary wyvern Dec 12, 2023, 1:04 PM

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azure vault Dec 13, 2023, 2:51 AM

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title fix

cursive wing Dec 14, 2023, 2:41 AM

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I feel like the brightness of the piano I had in this before people suggested I lowered the velocity was what made this track stand out a bit more.

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btw @tropic nova I feel like I've followed you in this trend of leaving something special at the end of the track.

tropic nova Dec 14, 2023, 10:58 AM

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cursive wing btw <@431464134396084224> I feel like I've followed you in this trend of leaving...

that's what I'm talking about 🤝

keen swan Dec 14, 2023, 11:02 AM

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FR

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caps

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fr

keen swan Dec 14, 2023, 11:06 AM

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cursive wing I feel like the brightness of the piano I had in this before people suggested I ...

needs a pad or some vox synth layered in the background

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bass is also too loud

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just a little

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and its the wrong octave

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i like what you're trying to do with the delayed clap effect, but the clap is just not bright enough for it to have any effect

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i think the clap needs a longer tail

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yeah you definitely need some gothic vox pad

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there's also a weird distortion effect around 2:50

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wtf lmao the ending

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its too far back

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LMAO WHAT

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cursive wing Dec 14, 2023, 12:41 PM

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keen swan needs a pad or some vox synth layered in the background

I also feel like I may have ruined everything by putting a limiter on the master

keen swan Dec 14, 2023, 12:41 PM

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cursive wing I also feel like I may have ruined everything by putting a limiter on the master

yeah

sinful violet Dec 14, 2023, 10:22 PM

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pastel pine Dec 15, 2023, 3:12 AM

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fervent quail Dec 15, 2023, 11:44 AM

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tropic nova Dec 15, 2023, 3:59 PM

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onyx nest Dec 15, 2023, 7:04 PM

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vague zenith Dec 15, 2023, 8:44 PM

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tropic nova

https://tenor.com/view/cyberpunk-meme-cyberpunk-meme-majmun-televizor-gif-22292688

Tenor

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Kind of expected this type of city of dreams 😄

tropic nova Dec 15, 2023, 8:44 PM

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oh I got tracks for that city too haha

slate folio Dec 15, 2023, 8:47 PM

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ocean vale Dec 15, 2023, 8:48 PM

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I am going to re-sing my vocals on this.

slate folio Dec 15, 2023, 8:50 PM

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slate folio

Wondering if my approach to the buildup is alright (i know its really unfinished and more of a sketch though)

woeful forge Dec 15, 2023, 8:51 PM

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i may submit mine spontaneously

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its super unfinishede tho

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so pls dont kill me

opal lark Dec 15, 2023, 8:52 PM

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ill do my best

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but i am a violent person

woeful forge Dec 15, 2023, 8:53 PM

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😭

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i might include the extremely unfinished intro

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just to give an idea

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mmmmm

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its too unfinished i lied

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whats the dayte

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nvm

vague zenith Dec 15, 2023, 8:54 PM

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opal lark ill do my best

Can i submit very short WIP? i kind of literally just started and need some help with drums

slate folio Dec 15, 2023, 8:54 PM

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opal lark but i am a violent person

hope im not gonna get it too bc of my unfinished song lol

woeful forge Dec 15, 2023, 8:55 PM

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here i

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tried to improve on things from last time

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and added more

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i dont know if my changes were what mr fwlr meant or if i did them right but well see

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still no melody on the jersey part

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i am not good with melodu

slate folio Dec 15, 2023, 8:59 PM

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Was really lost on what I should do with this project i feel like its good but I dont know how to even start with a drop for this or a buildup

hollow dirge Dec 15, 2023, 9:27 PM

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opal lark Dec 15, 2023, 9:37 PM

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dear diary,

today John told me that my goals in life were completely unachievable for someone like me. Normally I would totally disregard a comment like this, but I don't know... it just really hit home. Maybe it's because I was already feeling quite down about my ability to be a crab fisherman. Maybe it was because my whole family told me I would never amount to anything in the crab fisherman world. All I want to do is be a crab fisherman and fish for crabs. Speaking of which why do they say fish for crabs. That's weird. Am i fishing or crabbing? anyway fuck John

hot spear Dec 15, 2023, 10:08 PM

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