how to improve this model? (DELTARUNE CH3 SPOILERS)

[marsh remnant]

ik it looks kinda shit, but it's one of my first entity models

reference: ||https://www.spriters-resource.com/fullview/273312/||

[marsh remnant]

@tribal silo you would def recognize this mf

oops, ping

[west matrix]

put an @ then said oops ping

[marsh remnant]

I wanted to make it silent and I forgot

@silent <- this thing

[tribal silo]

Pretty good actually, tho horns and head look a bit weird

[marsh remnant]

Yeah, how can I improve those parts?

[tribal silo]

sec let me try to show you

kinda like this

[marsh remnant]

Oh yeah, I wanted to add that, but I forgot-

[marsh remnant]

Nice 👍

For the head?

It kinda changes from animation to animation, I'm trying to find a general solution

[tribal silo]

Can't show right now, I'll probably make my own model for the Knight

[marsh remnant]

Alr, when you'll make it, can you show how you made the head?

[tribal silo]

Yeah

I'll ping you here if you won't mind

[marsh remnant]

Alr np

[tribal silo]

@marsh remnant still WIP

I probably did too much polygons for this

it probably won't fit your style

but you can try something like this

Also I did this eye/mouth thing on bottom side of head and it's separate from head

[upbeat obsidian]

Looks really great imo!

I'd suggest maybe extending the visor/eye downward just one pixel onto the sides of the head cube

And maybe also make the sword three-dimensional? I dig the simplistic style you were going for (cleaner & more efficient in most cases), but the shapes and edges you can achieve with 3D blades can add so much to a design

[marsh remnant]

Thx

[upbeat obsidian]

Yw :]
Happy to see a fellow Deltarune enthusiast in here

[frail isle]

How did you give it that white outline, it looks great

[frail isle]

It is an entity for Java or Bedrock

[frail isle]

@marsh remnant

[marsh remnant]

java

[marsh remnant]

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