jan Amiton - kulupu musi suli pi ma Mewika | ma pona pi toki pona | Page 1

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:20 AM

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@grizzled hearth @zinc seal https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1200294165993504829/1200295373453926430/amiton.png?ex=65c5a92d&is=65b3342d&hm=b49e5af8f8ce3f1dce5bc2dc69aded21c3ceb4620a8d097a3c0468f4f60660fe&

grizzled hearth Jan 26, 2024, 4:21 AM

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I LOVIT JAJA

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dude

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imagine the whole hamilton siluete

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but the heaad is toki pona

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:22 AM

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OH I SHOULD DO THAT

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aw maybe i cant change the logo

grizzled hearth Jan 26, 2024, 4:24 AM

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waht do u use to edit?

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:24 AM

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oh photoshop

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i don't think it's going to let me change the logo

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oh yeah it just deleted the icon

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i think i might have ruined the thread

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can i delete it and restart it. is that possible and allowed

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nvm i think it's stuck without a logo

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that sucks

grizzled hearth Jan 26, 2024, 4:28 AM

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deft schooner i don't think it's going to let me change the logo

DAAAMN JAJAJAJ

grizzled hearth Jan 26, 2024, 4:28 AM

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deft schooner i think i might have ruined the thread

nah dont worry

grizzled hearth Jan 26, 2024, 4:28 AM

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deft schooner can i delete it and restart it. is that possible and allowed

wnat me to try it?

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:28 AM

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eh i don't think we should make another thread because i can't delete this one

grizzled hearth Jan 26, 2024, 4:29 AM

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but it dosent have picture despair

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:29 AM

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i'd have to get a mod to delete it or something

spark herald Jan 26, 2024, 4:41 AM

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i know i left this in pali musi already but

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mi sama ma mi li wile ala pini la mi awen e ken mi a!
(mi sa-ma ma mi li
wi-le a-la pi-ni la
mi awen e ken mi a)

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also if any songs need translating i love translating song

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i mean ofc songs will need translating

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but like ykwim

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:44 AM

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oh yeah i saw your message! i was going to send a link to this post but i messed up the post icon and i might have to replace it so i was waiting

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it's really interesting to see how different people interpreted the song

spark herald Jan 26, 2024, 4:46 AM

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i purposefully went for something a little less literal

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to fit more with the flow of the song

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i also prioritized grammar

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 4:47 AM

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niice

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i'm prioritizing flow in my translation too

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VjqBDaHCTcNGqSNIOWn46ASaWwxcdtJ2on4JZvgc8d8/edit?usp=sharing i have it open for comments

Google Docs

My Shot (toki pona)

spark herald Jan 26, 2024, 5:32 AM

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it's good

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 5:43 AM

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thank you so much for all the comments they're really helpful

deft schooner Jan 26, 2024, 6:08 AM

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i think we're actually going to transfer discussion over to a channel on a very new hamilton translation server i'm trying to start - i made a toki pona channel there with threads for each song, let me know if you want to join (it also has spanish and french channels so far but no one's in it, i chickened out a while back when i set it up and didn't invite anyone because i didn't know how to moderate it lol)

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not sure if i'm allowed to send the invite here, might count as advertising?

grizzled hearth Jan 30, 2024, 5:30 AM

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we have succesfully translated Wait of it and The story of tonight

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we are looking for people to rate translations for My shot and Helpless and lots of other songs! (and also singers hehe)

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Dm me if yall interested!

spark herald Jan 30, 2024, 5:31 AM

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i'd look some over

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tomorrow

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also i can translate if needed

grizzled hearth Jan 30, 2024, 5:32 AM

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spark herald also i can translate if needed

sure

deft schooner Jan 30, 2024, 5:34 AM

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i should clarify that our translations are not necessarily finished haha

#jan Amiton - kulupu musi suli pi ma Mewika