#omori-manga-📖

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native spruce
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Do yall think omocat drew some panels

night ice
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idts

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atleast thats what i got told here when I asked

tulip skiff
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Bandage on top of jacket is so real

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Also

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I just realized

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We are 3 chapters in

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Well over 100 pages

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All thats been done so far is

The whole intro sequence
Faraway night 1
Half of faraway day 1

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this is gonna last AGES

night ice
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especially when its 1 chapter a month

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one piece has a contender guys 🗣️🗣️

night ice
vale crypt
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Bro is heavily disappointed

tulip skiff
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I just realized

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Fucking imagine if nui based maverick on like

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His old sprite

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Instead of the ingame battle sprite

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So thats why hes white

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Considering the headspace map is based off an old map from 2019 i would not be surpriced if omocat just dumped him the entire development dropbox for art references

thin halo
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Can someone send me the pdf of chap 3? Plsss

slate sierra
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2024 made this word so dirty

tulip skiff
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As if omocats lack of quality was a 2024 issue aubrey_neutral

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fuck i read world

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as if thats a 2024 issue either aubrey_neutral

winter mantle
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where is that?

native spruce
pliant kernel
tulip skiff
night ice
night ice
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and avoid popup ads

tulip skiff
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Dude

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Just upload it on google drive

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Or google doc

native spruce
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i don't see how you could slice through a jacket and cause bleeding

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without tearing it

tulip skiff
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Fair

thin halo
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Ion wanna type it all out

night ice
slender valve
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i just finished chapter three, and honestly, i kinda loved it

pliant kernel
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What manga panels should I color from chapter 3?

tulip skiff
pliant kernel
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Oh dear basil_cry

night ice
pliant kernel
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I might actually haha

night ice
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that panel is literally fresh af

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i like that the artists go out of their way to feed the shippers lmaoo

harsh ledge
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Only way to save the manga at this point is ship baiting

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+t eggtroll

tulip skiff
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its their last hope

harsh ledge
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They already stopped caring on every other front

night ice
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that could work

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omori turns into a romcom

pliant kernel
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Yeah :D (not me shipping a rare pair no one knows about)

night ice
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cuteee

tulip skiff
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The arm is SO BAD lmfao

pliant kernel
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Which one basil_cry

tulip skiff
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Just joking about basil arm lenght

pliant kernel
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Ohh yeahhh

tulip skiff
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You can notice it a lot more with a colored background

pliant kernel
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Sometimes the arm length can be a little funky

night ice
tulip skiff
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Btw what color would you make this bg im curious

pliant kernel
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Hmmmmmmm

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I'd Probably have to mess around a little

harsh ledge
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You might as well draw a whole new background at this point

tulip skiff
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Would prob be easier to do nuis job and make a background tbh

night ice
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curtains

pliant kernel
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Maybe either
One, keep it white or maybe red?

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Possibly orange

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Orange with red maybe

pliant kernel
harsh ledge
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The closeups can have that but the first panel on the second page NEEDS a real background

pliant kernel
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I love coloring in backgrounds

harsh ledge
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There is so much white space

pliant kernel
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Yeah I feel like it had some potential to be really cool looking if it had a background

tulip skiff
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unfinished fucking page idk aubrey_neutral

pliant kernel
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I get it, I draw myself, but maybe some windows and curtains could've been nice

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Maybe some of the ceiling peaking through

harsh ledge
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Why did Nui skip doing the one thing he’s consistenly good at? Does he care?

pliant kernel
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Idk, I'm really loving the way they draw backgrounds, so it's a shame they didn't do that

winter mantle
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WHY DID THEY SKIP WHEN OMORI GOT MISSING AND HIS HUG WITH MARI?! 😭

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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they only have 48 pages

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Also

winter mantle
tulip skiff
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Sunny throwing a can at kim is longer than the entire church scene

pliant kernel
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It's okay I got enough dopamine from this panel

tulip skiff
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Just saying

winter mantle
pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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Idk this chapter is so brutally fucked

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This is my favorite panel

harsh ledge
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Unless you’re a sunburn maniac the chapter will be ass for you

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+t maritroll

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
winter mantle
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Kel is so silly

pliant kernel
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I really love how they show how Sunny can't run though

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Or really fight either

winter mantle
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Lmao

tulip skiff
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They cant do fights

winter mantle
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In head space he go like rightarm omori_bruh

tulip skiff
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If someone threw a punch at him he would shatter into a million pieces

winter mantle
winter mantle
pliant kernel
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Also I'm not sure how other people feel about this, but

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I'm not sure what to make of when they show Omori sweating at the end since he normally doesn't show emotions really

winter mantle
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Ok i can‘t do it

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LMAO

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WAiot

tulip skiff
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No

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omori is NOT SUNNY he should not be SHOWING EMOTIONS

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Thats HIS THING

winter mantle
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IKR

tulip skiff
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He QUITE LITERALLY CANT FEEL AFRAID

pliant kernel
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I think maybe they should've made him sweat a little just to be subtle

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If they wanted to do that

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Or just do nothing at all

winter mantle
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what worse is his first word is „Gulp“

harsh ledge
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I don’t really think Nui understood the game well enough to be able to do things subtly anyway

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+t ietroll

night ice
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oh god LOL

harsh ledge
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He’s got as much grasp as a Basil PFP that only knows the game through playthroughs and fanart

tulip skiff
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kenway can characterize him better and he literally made rewritten

winter mantle
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WAIOT

pliant kernel
harsh ledge
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The truth may be hard to bear

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+t politetroll

night ice
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😡😡

winter mantle
tulip skiff
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Thats just HILARIOUS

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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But to be fair kenway cares more about the source material than nui

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And thats quite the fucking statement

night ice
winter mantle
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hero_talk
aubrey_pout Because… OMORI is afraid of Heights!
omori_bruh Gulp

pliant kernel
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I was honestly thinking about redrawing the manga a little

night ice
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mods are made in rpgmaker right?

harsh ledge
harsh ledge
tulip skiff
harsh ledge
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You got the skills

winter mantle
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Gtg

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Ashley left the chat

night ice
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what programming lang does it use

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if it does

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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its mostly blocks but its fucking weird

night ice
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damn

winter mantle
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Waiot btw what app do you guys use to color the manga?

tulip skiff
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Iirc it uses js for plugins and plugins for scripts

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Actual rpgmaker work is blocks

night ice
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yea writing the entire shit in blocks must be ass so that has to exist

tulip skiff
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+t spaggetticode

night ice
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i could program for people when im free

tulip skiff
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I hate this tag

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+t spaggeticode

night ice
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lmfaoo

tulip skiff
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Ok

harsh ledge
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+t spaghetticode

harsh ledge
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It’s with an h lauren

night ice
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LOL

tulip skiff
pliant kernel
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"Erm actually"

night ice
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AHAHAHAHA

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where's the glasses

tulip skiff
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anyways play rewritten its so good

night ice
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👆 🤓

tulip skiff
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Its peak omori joke mod

harsh ledge
slate sierra
tulip skiff
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Lmfao no

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The coding aint THAT BAD

harsh ledge
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Alex’s code is peak ass

tulip skiff
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Note that omori had a developer of rpgmaker itself on the team

harsh ledge
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Who was later kicked out

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+t suitroll

tulip skiff
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fair

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Tho she mostly did plugin work as far as im aware

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And the plugins are functional

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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No questions asked

pure salmon
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💀

slate sierra
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😭🙏🏻

pure salmon
tulip skiff
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Thanks

pliant kernel
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No way basil_cry

harsh ledge
pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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and aubrey has 6 toes

pliant kernel
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I was so close to redrawing Hero's whole hand while coloring this panel since at first glance, I had no idea what was going on

night ice
pliant kernel
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Idk to me it just looked like a little nub hand

night ice
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make this a sticker RIGHT NOW

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lmfaoooo

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this fucking manga ICANT

night ice
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LMFAO

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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This entire thing aubrey_neutral

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Nui draw a human looking human challenge

inland nova
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hero_ecstatic Nice of Mari to invite us over to a picnic, eh Kel?
kel_grin I hope she made lots-a-burgers!

harsh ledge
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He has Sonic OC ass feet

inland nova
harsh ledge
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And the upper body of a starving African child

tulip skiff
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Btw

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Please

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For the love of god

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Color maverick right

inland nova
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Pale Maverick

pliant kernel
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If I color in one of those panels, I'm giving him color

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Cuz they did him dirty

inland nova
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Pale Maverick

Literally white, even

pliant kernel
inland nova
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totallynotmari No way, we have the same skin color!
the_maverick BEGONE SPOOKY GIRL

tulip skiff
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pliant kernel
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I've totally been using the manga panels as reactions to things

pliant kernel
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Gotta say this was definitely my favorite one to color since I love the backgrounds

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The backgrounds need more love from ppl

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if only the whole manga had backgrounds... Clueless

pliant kernel
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If only

tulip skiff
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If only chapter 3 had backgrounds

pliant kernel
tulip skiff
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I love how hard it is to say something genuinely possitive about chapter 3

pliant kernel
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Uhh it feeds the sunburn shippers

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Which I personally don't mind

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But I do need more backgrounds

tulip skiff
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A sunburn confirm would be so funny

inland nova
tulip skiff
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The entire sunflower fanbase being taken off their 2 year long copium supply and getting a fucking L would be hilarious

pliant kernel
harsh ledge
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+t artistictroll

native spruce
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Kel's back 💀

tulip skiff
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GOD

harsh ledge
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Then we’d have an actual civil war in the fandom

inland nova
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Forget backgrounds, this manga needs a back

native spruce
native spruce
harsh ledge
inland nova
tulip skiff
pliant kernel
tulip skiff
native spruce
tulip skiff
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Paper kel

pliant kernel
native spruce
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like as soon as this happens they'd cause drama

tulip skiff
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I am going to call it

native spruce
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then we can weed them out

tulip skiff
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Everyone loves the manga

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But when a ship confirm happens

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SUDDENLY it will suck

native spruce
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tbh i couldn't care either way

tulip skiff
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they will start cherrypicking art. Nui. Story

native spruce
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it sucks alr

native spruce
tulip skiff
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they will be so pissed off that they will suddenly CARE

pliant kernel
native spruce
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what's going on with his tongue

tulip skiff
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their fucking bubble will be poped and they will start thinking critically

pliant kernel
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Although I will say that if they were hinting at a sunflower confirm I'd probably stop reading so i can't say anything

native spruce
native spruce
tulip skiff
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nah they would just be dissapointed

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Lmfao

pliant kernel
native spruce
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im not even an artist

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this is above my paygrade

harsh ledge
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+t suitroll

pliant kernel
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Had to get rid of the line going through her hand

native spruce
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I CAN FEEL IT THEY'RE WATCHING

inland nova
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LE GASP

native spruce
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also i don't hate the pose

harsh ledge
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People doing recolors are gonna have plenty to correct this chapter

native spruce
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i just dislike how many times its been used

night ice
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WHY DOES MARI LOOK SO YOUNG HELP

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why have they done this

native spruce
tulip skiff
native spruce
pliant kernel
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As someone who draws a little, I don't mind the posing. The perspective is really impressive in my opinion

native spruce
native spruce
native spruce
pliant kernel
harsh ledge
native spruce
tulip skiff
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anyways

harsh ledge
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You can’t just go on with this otherwise

tulip skiff
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I love how this chapter confirms cops and jury exists

harsh ledge
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The lack of care is insane

tulip skiff
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So the truth scene is gonna be MORE stupid

pliant kernel
native spruce
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that's why he was never convicted

pliant kernel
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I'm a little nervous for the truth scene

tulip skiff
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Anyways

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Miss candice scene in general is just

pliant kernel
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Since the whole thing was said without words, yet it was understandable

tulip skiff
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So bullshit

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If you dont want to draw the inside of othermart just

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Avoid her

native spruce
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wait

tulip skiff
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Jesus christ

native spruce
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HOW MANY BLANK PANELS

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dude i will literally import spriteart from the game

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harsh ledge
tulip skiff
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And then kel says the most out of character bible verse ever

harsh ledge
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Rest are just blank

pliant kernel
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Well time to draw in my own backgrounds

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Yippee

native spruce
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WHAT

native spruce
slate sierra
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what was bro even doing entire month

harsh ledge
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I am so sorry

tulip skiff
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Mfer what is this

native spruce
tulip skiff
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Also kims hair

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Lmfao

pliant kernel
native spruce
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top left would be red

harsh ledge
native spruce
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etc

slate sierra
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most out of character moment was Sunny when he actually done something

native spruce
native spruce
harsh ledge
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Yeah some of the sentences also feel unnatural

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Wouldn’t be surprised if the translation isn’t the best

native spruce
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this is why

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you should read stoy's version

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@prisma mirage

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aka the mangadex version

tulip skiff
pliant kernel
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I kinda have no idea what is going on here

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But I think that's just me

tulip skiff
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Also in a last ditch attempt to ruin any impact of any reveal ever

native spruce
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how much coverage am i getting that its the first google image result

tulip skiff
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Kim saying that aubrey is on the church has nowhere near the same impact cuz you see her all sad after the park scene where she just comes off as a mean girl angry at sunny. Instead of a mean gang member that just bullied a random kid and wants to fight you for the sake of being cool

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I have no reason to believe she cant be at church cuz all she did is get mad at stuff shes mostly right about

native spruce
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yk

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i might as well make an abridged parody

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but the manga itself

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IS a parody

tulip skiff
native spruce
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so what's the point

native spruce
tulip skiff
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And rewritten is fucking amazing

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Well chapter 2 is no longer about the manga its a more general joke mod

tulip skiff
native spruce
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oh

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what if i ported rewritten's dialogue to the manga

tulip skiff
tulip skiff
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Its not 1:1 whatsoever

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native spruce
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repanel

pliant kernel
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Also I think it's actually interesting that we get to see Hero, Kel, and Aubrey's reactions to Basil disappearing

tulip skiff
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+t omorimangabutbetter?

night ice
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what the fyck

tulip skiff
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fanart of a mod of the manga adaptation of omori

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So real

native spruce
tulip skiff
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Then just

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Do it

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Its not gonna get better so you might as well catch up to chapter 4

native spruce
tulip skiff
pliant kernel
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I would redraw it but I takes a lot

native spruce
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this might be a neat side project tho

exotic agate
pliant kernel
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Help that is

tulip skiff
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Rewritten is amazing

native spruce
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yeah might as well do it

exotic agate
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Real

tulip skiff
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"They are plastic flowers
MOM knows damm well you cant take care of real ones
...wait didnt she steal these from mcdonals"

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The flavor text is different im talking from what i remember

native spruce
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who's n[8]

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i keep reading nate

tulip skiff
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Sunny technically

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Rewritten chapter 2 lore

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omori is n1

inland nova
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Lmfaoooo

tulip skiff
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This is some fucking vessel situation

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Joke mod actually has some peak lore

inland nova
native spruce
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oh im actually fast with this shit

tulip skiff
night ice
native spruce
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the incomplete ver of chap 1 should be on mangadex in a day or 2

hasty cliff
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guys someone have the omori manga in pngs?

native spruce
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i have chap 2 only rn

hasty cliff
native spruce
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oh and chap 1 actually

hasty cliff
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oka

native spruce
hasty cliff
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cant two page per one page

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native spruce
hasty cliff
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or send me a image with two pages and i will split it

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just need png of every page

native spruce
hasty cliff
native spruce
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nvm

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you want chap 3

livid jolt
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reading ch3 and i'm greeted with miss candice giving exposition

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bad exposition

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yea ma'am we know they stole it from you, the context is there

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edgy sand
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lyrically literally

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edgy sand
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I will reread the whole manga because I forgot everything in it

livid jolt
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mediocrity

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good thing it's free*

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cuz we sure as hell aint paying for it

serene juniper
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NGL I skim through the manga because I figure most of it is going to be rehashed game dialogue anyways so I miss some of the bad lines

livid jolt
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same

harsh ledge
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All my manga knowledge comes from the screenshots here

livid jolt
harsh ledge
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I don’t think I need to read the actual material on top of that

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+t suitroll

serene juniper
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We truly live in a vast forest...
(Note: vast forest is meant to be a pun since the end of the phrase sounds like omori in Japanese. She is saying "we live in an omori" in the Japanese version.)

serene juniper
dark viper
harsh ledge
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I’m pretty sure some explained ISaT to me as “Chrono Trigger but queer”

edgy sand
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iagree

night ice
harsh ledge
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And Chrono Trigger IS damn good

serene juniper
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Can't really get your exposition of Aubrey hanging out with delinquents normally when said delinquents get 2 panels with no dialogue

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(aside from Kim, of course)

winter mantle
exotic agate
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Tell me why

winter mantle
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Aint nothing but A missstake

exotic agate
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I never wanna hear u sayyyyy

winter mantle
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I WANT IT THAAAAAT WAY

exotic agate
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‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️

winter mantle
exotic agate
winter mantle
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YAYYYY

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I DID IT

exotic agate
winter mantle
exotic agate
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Real

winter mantle
vocal quarry
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Ok cause like, I’ve seen people complain about the art style but honestly I just wanna know if it’s a good manga tbh

exotic agate
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Uhh it's good but some parts change + no church fight

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But I like it!!

winter mantle
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And SKIPPED MARI AND OMORI HUG

vocal quarry
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Ohhh so it’s not exactly like game but it’s good

exotic agate
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Short chapters but still is good

winter mantle
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waiot

winter mantle
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Spoliers

vocal quarry
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OK TY SM, I JUST DIDNT WANNA READ IT IF I THOUGHT ITD TAINT THE GAME

TY ILL READ NOW

winter mantle
exotic agate
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Real

serene juniper
winter mantle
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CHAT LOOK I FINALLY DID IT

exotic agate
winter mantle
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LMAO

exotic agate
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AYAYYA

winter mantle
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💀💀

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I SPENT 3 DAYS TRYNNA DO IT

exotic agate
vocal quarry
winter mantle
vocal quarry
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ME TOO

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ITS IN MY SKIN

winter mantle
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ITS BEEN YEARS I CANT GET IT OFF OF MY MIND

exotic agate
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O

winter mantle
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LMAO

serene juniper
vocal quarry
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Dude I bought the game like two weeks ago and I’m still not done

winter mantle
exotic agate
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I have OMORI and DDLC stuck in my head for weeks now😔 (OMORI is stuck in my head more)

vocal quarry
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ITS SUCH A HUGE GAME

winter mantle
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LMAO

winter mantle
serene juniper
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You can't make a better piece of horror when you're cutting the main horror sequences from the source material

vocal quarry
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ITS LIKE A 30 HOUR GAME

exotic agate
winter mantle
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You gotta save those tears for the duet

twilit oxide
winter mantle
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LMAO

vocal quarry
exotic agate
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OHH

winter mantle
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kel_smile Kel.

vocal quarry
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I LOVE KEL SO BAD

serene juniper
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I don't think a single omori fan hates kel

vocal quarry
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I don’t trust kel haters

serene juniper
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He's pretty much just the bro character

exotic agate
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ALL OF THE CHARACTERS ARE THE BEST!!

expect AUBREY's mom and SUNNY's dad.

vocal quarry
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Feels like a personal attack to hate on kel

serene juniper
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Kinda like the magician arcanas from persona but without the being creepy to women part

exotic agate
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💀

dark viper
vocal quarry
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Dude I hate people who hate on Aubrey just because she’s a female character expressing rage

Like I understand not liking her actions, BUT HATING HER IS STUPID, SHES A CHILD CHILL

exotic agate
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HE WASNT A BITCH!1!1 AUBREY became a jerk but it's okay cuz we still love her, and KEL js couldn't find a way to be friends with her anymore1!!1 and when they were children they were js bantering

serene juniper
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Aubrey is the most developed character in the game AND currently in the manga too

exotic agate
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FR

tulip skiff
exotic agate
tulip skiff
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Yea

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If you are actually speedruning it it takes about 5

twilit oxide
serene juniper
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The game is short if you skip unnecessary battles and know all of the puzzles beforehand

exotic agate
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Crazy

vocal quarry
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Guys I think I fucked my rout up why is Basil crunked

exotic agate
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HELP

tulip skiff
tulip skiff
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You dont need a lot of grinding either

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The game is easy it just dosnt teach you how to play

harsh ledge
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Almost all of the overworld encounters are unnecessary

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+t suitroll

twilit oxide
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real world contents is more interesting than dw

tulip skiff
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Thats not exactly a high bar to clear

serene juniper
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Headspace is interesting the problem with it is that it has nothing to do with the actual real world story

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So why would you care when you're not actually progressing the plot

tulip skiff
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Yea thats always been an issue

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Headspace is the most rushed out part of the game

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again half the game was remade on the last year

And most of it was headspace and the combat system

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Faraway has minor scene and dialogue changes and some unfinished stuff

harsh ledge
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We’re going back to november 2020 to force Omocat to delay Omori by a year to make the game better

tulip skiff
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Headspace has entire areas MISSING

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No deep well

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Deeper*

serene juniper
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Headspace would've been better if it were more reliable as a narrative device
A lot of things are so random that it can't tell us anything about sunny or the world around him before the incident
The best we really get is "he had happy friends and mari was alive"

tulip skiff
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Completelt different junkyard

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Completely different humprey

harsh ledge
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HS should’ve had better connection to what was happening in the real world

tulip skiff
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Completely different BLACKSPACE 1

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Completely different mechanics

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Almost completely different orange oasis

harsh ledge
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Otherwise it’s just a completely separate adventure chasing after a literal plot device

tulip skiff
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Something something 600 page google doc

serene juniper
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Two of the main antagonists (sweetheart and space boyfriend) are only mentioned once as pieces of media in the real world
And like in a photo album picture
They could've been a bit better if it was part of something the friend group really liked
Maybe they could've elaborated on it and made space boyfriend that Saturday morning cartoon that it was mentioned sunny and his friends would watch before he had to devote his time to recitals

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Well there's a lot of ways you could make it work
But it's negligible in the current game

tulip skiff
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why is this game a "masterpiece" again aubrey_neutral

serene juniper
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The horror is pretty solid when it wants to be and people relate to the real world storyline a lot

harsh ledge
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+t politetroll

serene juniper
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Never really got the "most accurate portrayal of mental illness" angle a lot of people go for though

harsh ledge
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The ones that did are disappointed

tulip skiff
serene juniper
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Fair enough
I don't have it as bad as sunny or basil so that's not my domain to speak on

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But it's not like omocat team was trying to make an accurate portrayal of mental illness
It just kinda happened I guess

tulip skiff
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omocat was damm able to write depression

serene juniper
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People love that

tulip skiff
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She dealt with it a LOT

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but illness

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Ehhhhhhhhh

harsh ledge
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The 2014 scenario was basically Omocat telling a what if scenario of what actually happened to her so

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Not in the final game though

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But I guess she went through enough stuff to have gotten some “inspiration”

tulip skiff
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the game has an acurrate portrayal of suicide and depression not because omocat did her research

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No shit the writing is acurrate

serene juniper
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in all fairness suicide is not hard to depict

tulip skiff
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Tell a war veteran to write about the war and he will prob be acurrate

serene juniper
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The depression stuff does hit though
Mostly in the hikikomori route but it works throughout the whole game too

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To give credit where it's due turning a dorky blog character into the representation of the hollowness and apathy that comes with depression is neat

shrewd oyster
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his middle finger looks like a shank

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is that even a finger??

tulip skiff
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Nui anatomy aubrey_happy

shrewd oyster
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they fucked up the stores too

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wheres othermarts window

shrewd oyster
harsh ledge
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The more you look the more fucked up it’ll get

shrewd oyster
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thats not bad

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alot of people draw

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wait wtf why is it like a stub

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why are the middle fingers so short

harsh ledge
# tulip skiff

Melting fingers is a style thing sometimes but those are not long enough

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To begin with

shrewd oyster
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id give examples of weird hands but theyre hiding the hands in this page

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smh

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its the one i have offhand cause its open in krita

shrewd oyster
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jesus

harsh ledge
shrewd oyster
serene juniper
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The pinky in the last one lmao

shrewd oyster
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wait nevermind thats sideways as hell

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i cant even excuse this atp its just poorly done anatomy

harsh ledge
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This too

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The right arm looks smaller too

shrewd oyster
tulip skiff
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She got so mad she dislocated her arm

shrewd oyster
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DAMN those fingers

harsh ledge
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Oh that’s where the claw hand comes from

shrewd oyster
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theyre doing my girl dirty

tulip skiff
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This one is crazy

serene juniper
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Basketball player with pretzel legs?

harsh ledge
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That page has unnatural dialogue AND an unnatural human

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+t startroll

shrewd oyster
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i just realized he swallowed his vomit right there

shrewd oyster
shrewd oyster
winter mantle
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Lmao

clear widget
harsh ledge
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(He gets bone marrow cancer and his leg gets amputated then he dies)

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It would explain the fucked anatomy

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+t ietroll

mystic kite
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hey all i havent read the latest chapter yet is it any better than #1 and #2

prisma mirage
prisma mirage
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except for One Scene

shrewd oyster
mystic kite
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😭

mystic kite
prisma mirage
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Sunny covering aub's ears actually

clear widget
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oh man gg

prisma mirage
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It's manga-exclusive

prisma mirage
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But then nui doesn't draw her hair properly lmao

tulip skiff
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Made something worse than chapter 1

prisma mirage
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It's glitching and melting in half the panels

tulip skiff
#

Somehow

exotic agate
#

KANADE PFP??2!2!2!

prisma mirage
#

Yeah laupig hates it

prisma mirage
tulip skiff
#

I hate everything thats not the issue

exotic agate
#

Damn

tulip skiff
#

This is plain fucking bad

shrewd oyster
mystic kite
prisma mirage
mystic kite
prisma mirage
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Like ik bro does Not Read

tulip skiff
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i am a hater but im not stupid

prisma mirage
tulip skiff
#

The horror segments peak

prisma mirage
#

Just copy and resize???

tulip skiff
#

The backgrounds are good

shrewd oyster
prisma mirage
tulip skiff
#

Passing the game to a japanese audience by a new medium is not a bad idea

harsh ledge
#

Chapter 2 was a marginal improvement over 1 but there were tons of anatomy issues

tulip skiff
#

Now

If you are gonna execute everything like ass

harsh ledge
#

3 takes a nosedive like Sunny does in the bad ending

tulip skiff
#

Thats a you issue

pulsar vortex
tulip skiff
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Also beta omori research

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omori wise at least

pulsar vortex
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i haven't rlly got interest in the manga but i have been thinking about the "vast forest" panel the past 24 hours

tulip skiff
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My favorite games are bad piggies and ultrakill my standars are nonexistent

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And i like bad piggies for the same reason i like omori

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Broken fucking mess but fun to exploit

pulsar vortex
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its actually so mind boggling how that got through but i ain't gotta complain it got me a few laughs

shrewd oyster
prisma mirage
#

anyway slightly off track but do yall fw this pic i took

shrewd oyster
loud cipher
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i just woke up

tulip skiff
#

This is the moment that i just went "THEY ARE LAUGHING IN OUR FACE"

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I just

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Snapped for a moment

mystic kite
#

OH THATS A QUOTE?

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LOL

harsh ledge
clear widget
harsh ledge
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Looks how bulgy it is by her arm

mystic kite
#

wow... we truly live in an otherworld town

harsh ledge
#

Was any clothing fold drawn correctly in this chapter

mystic kite
tulip skiff
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"I cant believe we got trapped in SWEETHEARTS CASTLE"

loud cipher
shrewd oyster
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wow... we truly live in an omori manga channel...

loud cipher
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lmao

harsh ledge
prisma mirage
tulip skiff
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....this is some sort of underwater highway!

shrewd oyster
#

THIS GOT ME

loud cipher
harsh ledge
loud cipher
#

what’s going on

prisma mirage
#

Yk i hv a feeling the translators knew it was shit so they just trolled throughout
Only reasonable explanation

tulip skiff
#

This place is so cool! Its like some sort of ORANGE OASIS

prisma mirage
harsh ledge
#

No way in fuck that’s making sense in any other language

loud cipher
#

oh

prisma mirage
#

Should hv used the 50 mp cam i forgot lol

shrewd oyster
#

my town is just tumbleweeds if only it looked as pretty as that

prisma mirage
loud cipher
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my towns full of psychos

empty zephyr
#

This oasis is full of sand, it looks so orange

tulip skiff
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man its raining in this town

prisma mirage
#

my friend is just a genius and knows all the good spots

shrewd oyster
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i love the rain i wish it was rainy where i lived

tulip skiff
#

anyways

#

The dialogue in chapter 3 is sow weird

loud cipher
loud cipher
tulip skiff
#

And you cant tell if its misstranslation or not

empty zephyr
#

That quote reminds me of the brainrot
Human I remember you're genocides meme

#

I swear it has the same timing

prisma mirage
mystic kite
prisma mirage
harsh ledge
#

(Actual quote in chapter 3)

tulip skiff
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Im sorry kel would not talk like this if held at gunpoint

prisma mirage
tulip skiff
#

Why did they even feel like having miss candice outside

prisma mirage
harsh ledge
#

Didn’t wanna bother drawing inside the store ig

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+t trolley

harsh ledge
#

Considering the overall lack of care this chapter

tulip skiff
harsh ledge
#

Thought White Space was in Sunny’s head? Nah Faraway just has places like that now

tame oxide
#

chat
im gonna be completely honest
i agree that the art might not be the best
or that the headspace stuff is...just happens sometimes...which is weird...
or that the pacing might not be the best
But i think despite these flaws the manga is REALLY good...and try to change my mind

tulip skiff
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We aint gonna force you to think the manga is shit

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We might kill you tho

harsh ledge
#

It’s insanely split here right now anyway

tulip skiff
#

Yea

harsh ledge
#

You either think the manga is shit or want to worship Nui and Omocat

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No inbetween

tulip skiff
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The fact that OMORICORD has a 50/50 split on the quality of an omocat product is basically one of a kind

#

SOMETHING went wrong

tame oxide
tulip skiff
#

Omoricord tends to be very possitive about omocat stuff

#

This chapter is really split

#

Even chapter 1 and 2 had the benefit of the doubt of "it will get better"

harsh ledge
#

And chapter 2 WAS better

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Barely

tulip skiff
#

But it just dipped in quality 3 chapters in

harsh ledge
#

But better

tulip skiff
#

Chapter 2 was not really better

#

Its just that nothing important was going on

harsh ledge
#

Emphasis on barely

empty zephyr
#

Personally I have my issues with the style but it is pretty in some panels
But the issue for me is the pacing, it does not give the reader the same setting as the game
Doesn't make them feel comfortable in the dream world, doesn't give them any time to understand the dynamics of the group as children, doesn't give much difference between the dream world and real world (therefore both have less impact since they happen at the same time)
The start just drops info which was supposed to be said way later
You have no time to get attached to the characters in any way
This chapter highlights to me how rushed 1 and 2 were and this 3rd is just as rushed

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Sorry for the wall yall

tulip skiff
#

The art was better tho

harsh ledge
#

We’re talking Omocat endorsed projects here

#

It’s as good as it’ll improve

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+t suitroll

tulip skiff
#

My main issue is that like

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All the emotional impact that omoris pacing and structure carefully crafted is getting FUCKED

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and it shows

empty zephyr
#

Exactly what I said yeah

tulip skiff
#

It really shows

#

I dont mind some different scenes

empty zephyr
#

It shows a lot
Especially where something as small as the steak being eaten in the morning can ruin stuff

harsh ledge
#

The most impactful thing in the manga will be Sunny when he hits the floor at this point

tulip skiff
#

But this is not the same story if you make omori emotional and sunny just a shy boy trying to help aubrey

#

The church scene is a literal 180

empty zephyr
#

Yep it's crazyyyyy

tame oxide
tulip skiff
#

Its not like "oh he didnt attack her in the church so it isnt a big deal"

#

SUNNY FOUGHT HER

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KEL FOUGHT HER

harsh ledge
#

That’s the issue

empty zephyr
#

^

harsh ledge
#

The fans mostly don’t like what is being done

tulip skiff
harsh ledge
#

And new people will have insane whiplash if they play the game

empty zephyr
#

It was advertised as an alternative way to see the story

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It feels different from page 5

harsh ledge
#

But Japan loves it regardless so all’s good in Omocat’s eyes

tulip skiff
#

Its trying to fanservice and be interesting whitout knowing how to do either

harsh ledge
#

And just as every other thing Omocat has a hand in it fucks up

tulip skiff
#

Its almost as if nui ane omocat have no real experience making a monthly manga

harsh ledge
#

+t suitroll

tulip skiff
#

I WONDER

empty zephyr
#

No introduction in the dream world, no making the dream world a safe space, not enough time understanding sunny's mind and layers of traumatic memory issues and avoidance

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There's a reason the game starts at night

tulip skiff
#

What even IS HEADSPACE anymore

tame oxide
tulip skiff
#

my expectation was like

empty zephyr
#

I totally get that tbh, I WOULD LOVE THAT

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But this manga isn't that

#

At least from a presentation standpoint to me it doesn't

tulip skiff
#

"Oh it will be a retelling but they will flesh out characters more"

harsh ledge
tulip skiff
#

I was asking for the BARE MINIMUM

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AND THEY DISSAPOINTED ME SOMEHOW

harsh ledge
#

Omocat Seal of Quality™️

tulip skiff
#

Nui dosnt care anymore

#

He just wants to get chapters done

#

This is gonna go downhill

empty zephyr
#

I am in no way an entitled fan I'm just confused while reading this because it doesn't really feel like the story it feels abridged, fast, and so many different details add up in a way that doesn't feel good

tame oxide
empty zephyr
#

That's funny tho Gsgsbsbhff

tulip skiff
#

didnt you say that the manga was good

harsh ledge
#

Actual rough draft as a panel

empty zephyr
#

Goofy aaa run

tulip skiff
#

But yea lmfao

tame oxide
tulip skiff
#

Creature

finite karma
#

Now that i finished reading ch3 lets now see what people complain about here!!!

empty zephyr
#

Yayyy

pliant kraken
#

wait new chapter dropped?

empty zephyr
#

Welcome to the corner! Lets all be civilized and understand that doing a manga like this takes a lot of effort combined from several people and that the manga industry is very different from what we might think it is

#

That said this chapter feels weird as hell

tulip skiff
#

combined from several people?

harsh ledge
#

There’s basically only one person here though

tulip skiff
#

Nui is doing like

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All the work

harsh ledge
#

Why do you think it’s this rough

empty zephyr
#

Yeah that's true

harsh ledge
#

No way in fuck this’d fly otherwise

empty zephyr
#

ok actually now that u say that, probably quality assurance wouldn't let this stuff fly

tulip skiff
#

Omocat is doing really important things like telling him the canon favorite cakes of the main casts

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And help coloring in promos

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And uhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

empty zephyr
#

Well there's quality assurance from omocat tho which is surprising

harsh ledge
#

+t ietroll

empty zephyr
#

It's published on what?

tulip skiff
#

1.2 STAR RATED APP

harsh ledge
tulip skiff
#

Thats REGION LOCKED

empty zephyr
#

Oh ONLINE oh lmaoooo

tulip skiff
#

Dont talk publishers

empty zephyr
#

No publishers yeah

#

I guess omocat would be the publisher

tulip skiff
#

eh yea the magazine is a different story

tame oxide
#

wait they releasing on magazines?

tulip skiff
#

A japanese one yea

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The us gets kmanga

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Everyone else gets pdfs from other people and no official way to view it

harsh ledge
#

In Japan it’s getting serialized in a monthly magazine

empty zephyr
#

Wait magazines means it HAS t9 go through quality assurance

tulip skiff
#

Because omocat went to art school not geography school

There is only 2 countries

empty zephyr
#

IT'S SERALIZED???? Wait why Is it this rough then

harsh ledge
#

+t politetroll

empty zephyr
#

That's what I meant by multiple people
The manga pipeline is very complex

tame oxide
#

who translate the manga tho?

tulip skiff
#

Omocat prob paid them out LMFAO

empty zephyr
#

I wouldn't be surprised if these errors were caused by other stuff other than additionally nui and omocat

tulip skiff
#

Knowing her

#

The only correction we have seen so far is changing "orange joe" for "milk" in chapter 2

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Which was a translation error

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Cuz headspace kel drinking orange joe is a GIGANTIC fuckup

#

Orange joe is a person in headspace

empty zephyr
#

Murder....

#

Anyway apart from what I personally find issue with I like the art in some panels

#

The map panel was VERY pretty

tulip skiff
#

Yea the art is fine when he fucking TRIES

empty zephyr
#

I can't wait to see more of headpsace

tulip skiff
#

Aka horror segments and the backgrounds

main bronze
#

none of you guys realised how ass the manga was?

tulip skiff
#

I wish he tried more

tulip skiff
tame oxide
tulip skiff
#

Im a day 1 chapter 1 omori manga hater

empty zephyr
#

This chapter makes the prior pacing issues even more glaring

main bronze
tulip skiff
#

Lmfao

#

I was expecting a retelling of the game with the same pacing

#

I was hoping too much

tame oxide
pliant kraken
#

ok i just finished it

empty zephyr
#

I was hoping for something good and this is good but the bad parts for me kinda outweighs the good

pliant kraken
#

it’s a big improvement over the first 2 chapters

tame oxide
pliant kraken
#

imo

empty zephyr
#

Yeah i agree with that

slate sierra
main bronze
#

i feel like the manga is trying to grab new fans instead of trying to please older fans so i dont feel like its gonna follow the game

tulip skiff
#

I mean yea but this is barerly omori anymore

harsh ledge
#

It went from creative liberty to creative assasination

empty zephyr
#

Oh right yeah the church "fight" was just canon fluff (that's the only thing I can think for why they would put it in)

harsh ledge
#

+t suitroll

mystic kite
#

i should read it to actually get my own opinion

#

it's just so much effort to read outside of USA & JP...

tame oxide
#

we could like

#

send it

clear widget
#

this is so funny

finite karma
clear widget
#

indeed it is good

tame oxide
#

yeah, has its flaws but good

#

am i right kel or am i right kel?

finite karma
#

You are right kel!!

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you are right kel!!

finite karma