#[26/1/12] How would you minorly change each part's story to make it more DRAMATIC?

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chilly abyss
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make all the music louder

hoary raptor
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Make Giornos barrages last 2x longer

jagged garden
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Part 1: vampires get more buff

Part 2: pillermen unknownly use hamon but can get injured by it

Part 3: stand user's stands are stronger

Part 4: longer time to discover Kira

Part 5: Giornio is partly a vampire (limits his time in sun)

Part 6: Pucci failed to get C-Moon

Didn't read 7, 8, or 9 yet

obsidian stone
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diavolo wounded trish instead of buccciarati and they had to kill diavolo to let her live more

frank salmon
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Give Polnareff his legs back

chilly vortex
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George joestar never got in the crash

swift bloom
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Instead of having the rokakaka being a rare fruit, they are just apples

simple mesa
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Add another villain to pt 4 that can bring people back from the dead, and had decided to work with yoshikage, the previous pt 4 villains were brought back to life in a final battle between the two teams

radiant ether
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Dio never stole tha stone mask from Jonathan's dad's desk

mystic echo
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Dio, can go into the sun

rocky fossil
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Josuke finds Kira in 2 days

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But make it the same length of episodes

wispy drift
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Make the jeorge joestar fanfic Canon

fossil halo
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no jotaro in part 4

grand crescent
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Give speedwagon WoU

sturdy anvil
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okuyasus older brother doesnt die and kira has an accomplice that okuyasus brother and koichi and hair lady and tonio and rohan can fight

cloud sail
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I think nobody here read it said "MINORLY change"😭😭😭

vapid onyxBOT
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@cloud sail, your Stand Rank is now 7!

tropic heart
tropic heart
cloud sail
sturdy anvil
sturdy anvil
cloud sail
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Thats tuff

flint zealot
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Speedwagon has a Glock

astral thunder
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Joseph fighting alessi

turbid talon
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make jonathan french

gentle patio
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JOSEPH SHE 12

round stratus
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Speedwagon has a stand

devout rock
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Jolyne was on like death row or something and with every wrong she did her sentence got closer and closer or something 🤔🤔

lime bane
midnight brook
cunning beacon
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Making Joshu die on part 8

midnight brook
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what

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nooooo

cunning beacon
midnight brook
cunning beacon
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Or solo wonder uf u alone

loud bay
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Fugo´s original cut role getting brought back.

midnight brook
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the pillarmen are actually mexican now meaning that the whole part is in the yellow filter

cunning beacon
cunning beacon
midnight brook
cunning beacon
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But joseph trade the colors

midnight brook
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when the pillarmen are exposed to the sun they dont turn to stone

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they turn into stale taco shells

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makes it more heart breaking btw

cunning beacon
cunning beacon
midnight brook
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yeah i made a mistake

cunning beacon
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Lmao,but is not a bad change

vapid onyxBOT
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@cunning beacon, your Stand Rank is now 5!

wet idol
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kira likes feet

vapid onyxBOT
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@wet idol, your Stand Rank is now 5!

wet idol
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YEAHHAH

river kernel
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Josuke has 5 brain tumors

trim hearth
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Kira has everybody’s address

floral kayak
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JOSUKE, THERE ARE TWO KIRA'S. But why do one of them have a notebook?

polar wharf
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josuke and jotaro also go to italy with koichi, and tonio is also a gangster

cunning beacon
pulsar iris
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Make Fugo do something

vapid onyxBOT
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@pulsar iris, your Stand Rank is now 2!

rain matrix
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Johnny joestar and ceasar doen't die

lime bane
lime bane
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(peak comment btw)

whole plover
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Okoyasu is smarter

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and Kira is actually Jousukes step bro

lime bane
lime bane
whole plover
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Or make joseph actually come back younger or some shit

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Okayaso swipes koichi's balls

scarlet pine
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Make Kira have a feet fetish instead

shut steeple
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Death 13 appears again in part 5

rocky fossil
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Remove AC/DC

visual light
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Nintendo

lime bane
lime bane
gusty halo
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a zeppeli would appear in part 5

stark ruin
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spin gyro's ball

torn breach
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Fugo actually betrays the team

topaz dagger
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Part 5, give the characters arcs

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Actually no

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Part 5, have ANY duo battles instead of 1v1's and tag teams

mortal kraken
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Make the carriage driver in part 1 a better driver

thorny harness
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The Norioh gang would accuse each other for being the killer

lime bane
silent tiger
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Make Jotaro learn Hamon and more vampires in Part 3

quick lantern
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Jolyne and Jotaro get one quiet father–daughter moment.

snow bay
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More romantic tension

violet rain
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Same old jojo but araki never forgot

fathom cloud
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Make one of the villains in part six be the user of a reincarnation of the original World stand.

tawdry orchid
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Instead of pucci speeding time he slows it

broken prism
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Ceasar being actually Smart in his fight with wamuu

lime bane
lime bane
lime bane
fathom cloud
# lime bane

Bro is criticizing EVERYTHING like he has a better idea

lime bane
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And yeah, I have 2 better ideias

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(fugo vs the gang and Alessi vs Joseph would be so much better in jjba)

cunning beacon
cunning beacon
lime bane
ancient otter
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Gappy has 1 ball instead of 4

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because 4 is badluck

lime bane
eager wadi
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change giorno's hair color to blue 🤔

lime bane
eager wadi
lime bane
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He has one photo of his father I think

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(didn't show his face but it's still something)

winged zenith
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Kira survives part 4

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make hol horse a stardust crusasder

lime bane
eager wadi
lime bane
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What difference would he make in part 10?

eager wadi
winged zenith
lime bane
lime bane
eager wadi
winged zenith
eager wadi
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some movies like blended starring adam sandler and drew barrymore

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very good example

lime bane
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Hmm, ok, I think this is valid

eager wadi
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however a villain I REALLY want is based off someone called La Fiera I think? in the rookie

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she's a mother and she leads the cartel's drug division in the show

winged zenith
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in part 2 I want ceaser to have a baby so the bloodline continues and we could see ginoro with a zeppeli jobro

eager wadi
lime bane
eager wadi
lime bane
winged zenith
random widget
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1: give Straizo more screen time
2: kill Joseph
3: kill Joseph
4: kill Joseph
5:
6: Tonpetty returns

cunning beacon
cunning beacon
random widget
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my hatred made me skip over the word “minorly” in the question title

cunning beacon
random widget
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Huh

midnight brook
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Bro

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Just make everyone Mexican

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Instead of the Nazis in part 2 it’s the cartel

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and also like instead of Pucci it’s Goku now

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But everyone will be chill

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Cuz they’re Mexican

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Happy ending yo

lime bane
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He's gonna be the next Araki ArakiThink

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(I'm starting to think HE IS Araki itself)

midnight brook
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Nah I ain’t araki

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I’m the great Rohan Kishibe

lime bane
silent tiger
cunning beacon
midnight brook
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Heh gotta fit the profile no?

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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I was too invested

scarlet pine
midnight brook
scarlet pine
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I would be tagged as an creep if I was on prt 4

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🗣️

midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
lime bane
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Make Rohan Kishibe write "You don't have Hand Addiction anymore" on Kira

scarlet pine
scarlet pine
rain matrix
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Ceasar doesn't die

lime bane
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Joseph dies= END OF THE WORLD

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(yes, that was a JoJo reference in Jjba)

rain matrix
vapid onyxBOT
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@rain matrix, your Stand Rank is now 3!

midnight brook
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i need his body all of it

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i cant wait to see what might be under those nvm im not gonna finish that

scarlet pine
midnight brook
scarlet pine
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I think he has a hourglass body

midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
lime bane
scarlet pine
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I need him

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😭😭😭

midnight brook
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threesome

scarlet pine
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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and record obviously

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cant let that go to waste no

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infinite material

scarlet pine
midnight brook
scarlet pine
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He's gonna be bratty i know

midnight brook
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hes not indecisive

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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he will make a decision fast

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or lowkey he could just use heavens door to make us forget everytime he picks one of us, and then we experience it over and over again

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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it would feel amazing

scarlet pine
midnight brook
scarlet pine
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😛

midnight brook
scarlet pine
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but hey

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I don't ming

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Mind**

midnight brook
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Rohan will always be my king

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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no other character tops

scarlet pine
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You mean our

midnight brook
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our king *

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hey i just thought about it. Lets be friends

scarlet pine
scarlet pine
midnight brook
lime bane
scarlet pine
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This feels like cheating to Josuke but Rohan is my first king out of all

lime bane
scarlet pine
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is rohan older in thus spoke rohan kishibe?

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Like seven years older

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Imagine having them both

midnight brook
scarlet pine
lime bane
midnight brook
midnight brook
midnight brook
midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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bro my internet is so bad.. it took so long to load my messages gng

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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Rohan having his own spin off is so cool cuz it feels so new

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like paranormal activities instead of stands is wild

midnight brook
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doesnt matter whether rohan is older or younger WE are all cracking

scarlet pine
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I don't mind any ver older or younger I still want him

midnight brook
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the closest person i got to rohan is yukako, cuz i like how they both kidnapped koichi

scarlet pine
midnight brook
scarlet pine
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Imagine if rohan had discord and he's here

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Watching us

lime bane
midnight brook
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hes watching us intently

lime bane
midnight brook
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i cant imagine him getting turned on by his fans

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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the rohan fangroup goes hard

midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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too aloof for ts

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but idc

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i need it

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we need it

scarlet pine
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we

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Does he like guitars 🥹

midnight brook
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Rohan doesnt come first for me, he comes last. WE ARE COMING FIRST

midnight brook
scarlet pine
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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we will finish in 1 minute

scarlet pine
midnight brook
lime bane
scarlet pine
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Araki has to tell us what is his type

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Like come on

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I have to be prepared

midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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apparently he based Yukako off his wife

scarlet pine
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I meant rohan

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😭😭

midnight brook
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oh yes

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i didnt understand

scarlet pine
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And every other character on DiU but mostly Rohan

midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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i just sent todo cuz ur message remined me of him

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but go ahead

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tell us!

scarlet pine
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Uhh

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Idk

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What's yours

midnight brook
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i was lowkey expecting you to just say Rohan

midnight brook
scarlet pine
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Rohan if he was a woman

midnight brook
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i dont even know this info myself

scarlet pine
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I'd tap that

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He would be mommy material

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😍

midnight brook
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we should all say we're gay cuz gay means happy

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and its fun to say

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it has only 1 syllable so its easy to say

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MAN I LOVE BEING GAY

scarlet pine
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I love being gay

midnight brook
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we are going so offtrack on this qotd

scarlet pine
vapid onyxBOT
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@scarlet pine, your Stand Rank is now 14!

scarlet pine
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But it's fun

scarlet pine
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3

midnight brook
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make rohan thiccer for dramatic effect whenever hes on screen

scarlet pine
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2

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1

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CLANKER

lime bane
midnight brook
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cligg-

scarlet pine
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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i did say i was aiming to be closer with God

lime bane
midnight brook
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IM SORRY

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OKAY

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I PRAYED TODAY

scarlet pine
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WE ARE SO SORRY

lime bane
midnight brook
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God please forgive us and out of your generosity give us Rohan

scarlet pine
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dies

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we been good 🥺

midnight brook
lime bane
midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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what we need in this world is Rohan and Jojo themed condoms

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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i just wanna insert jonathan joestar please

midnight brook
scarlet pine
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There's even scent(? ones

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Would you believe that

midnight brook
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crazy

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smelling the used condom is wild

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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yuck indeed

scarlet pine
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does rohan have a kink

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I mean

midnight brook
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we need pucci to start rapping so the story can be dramatic.

midnight brook
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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if araki has a fetish its safe to assume rohan has the same fetish

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though there is some bizarre ones like Johnny's bug bite fetish

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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BUT!

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he did say he wanted to draw beautiful men in jojo

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and he succeeded

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Rohan has won me over

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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oh nevermind

scarlet pine
midnight brook
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that bug bite fetish thing of johnny's is actually Araki's kink as well

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he used to get bit by mosquitos and he would dig his nails to make an X mark on the spot and that turned him on yo

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Maybe rohan likes licking bugs

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that tongue action tho

scarlet pine
scarlet pine
midnight brook
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i got spiders in my pants now

scarlet pine
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I personally think Rohan did read adult manga

midnight brook
scarlet pine
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I'll dress up as sailor moon

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Cuz he likes that

midnight brook
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rlly?

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count me in too then

scarlet pine
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i'll be

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Hm

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Sailor Mercury

midnight brook
scarlet pine
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Brb I have hm

rain matrix
last quail
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Have Lang Rangler checks notes steal weather reports hat revealing he’s bald, and doesn’t give it back for the rest of the part

fervent cargo
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magenta magenta lives and kills johnny and wins the sbr despite not being a racer

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/j

snow raven
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speedwagon dies

snow raven
winged zenith
minor sedge
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an explanation to what happened between the radio gaga flashback and the yasuho flashback that explains how toru became a “troubled soul who’s lost his way”

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we literally saw him investigating the locacacas in the radio gaga flashback so it’s hard to say why he waited all those years to start developing and profiting from them

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maybe he was waiting for better technology?

calm edge
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If it wasn't raining in the beginning of part 1 the carriage might have not crashed

queen tide
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introduce tooru as yasuho’s ex earlier into the story