Scavengers Takeover

[gritty crag]

Okay, so this would take place long after every iterators have collapsed and scavengers are free to rule the world. It’s basically going to be a political series where each scav nation will go against each other.

[twin shadow]

scav fics be popping off

[gritty crag]

[jade rose]

Hell yeah, scav fic!

[atomic jasper]

Ooh, very nice!!! Love all the scav names-

[gritty crag]

Thank you! They were inspired by the names found in the Ancients’ writings.

[hushed lava]

I quite like this! It's playing with some ideas I like a lot. But... it is kinda hard to both read and to give critique with an on-paper format like this, tbh.

[gritty crag]

Yeah, the problem is I can’t write on a keyboard for long because of a hand disability.

I’ll make the next pages double-spaced if it helps.

[atomic jasper]

That's rough... Maybe there's a program out there that can transcript the writing into typed stuff for you! And that way you can save it in online/cloud files to keep backups that are more secure n all~!

[gritty crag]

I’ll see if I can do that, until then, it’ll be pictures.

[gritty crag]

@harsh notch @grand rampart I need help. Give me name ideas.

[grand rampart]

hamburger

[harsh notch]

Eh

[grand rampart]

fr tho, what kind of names?

frog where did you go

[gritty crag]

Iterators-like names.

[grand rampart]

oh yeah crispy is better for that

[gritty crag]

Sorry, Anton pinged me.

[grand rampart]

my names suck

[gritty crag]

@harsh notch Get back here.

[harsh notch]

What

Vibe check me

Characteristics in mind?

[gritty crag]

She’s a scavenger that specializes in close ranged weapons.

[harsh notch]

Well

Personality?

[gritty crag]

Very friendly, overconfident.

Will pay for the first date.

[harsh notch]

Ah i see

[harsh notch]

Noooo

[gritty crag]

To give you an idea, her two friends are Flowers and Arrows and Iron Spearhead.

(The lore is that scavengers deciphered the Ancients writings and took inspiration from there to name themselves.)

[harsh notch]

O

[gritty crag]

(And since the Ancients’ name were too long, they took more iterators-like names.)

[harsh notch]

Shooting Stars? Crimson Embers? A Bud of Bloom? Bleeding Edge?

[grand rampart]

the names i thought of were eclipsing paradise, ceaseless memories, and… the other one
i suppose i also didnt put much thought into the names and didnt care to think of better ones
i just did the first ones that came to mind and told myself to think of better names later
spoiler alert, i never thought of better names

[gritty crag]

Oooh I like Crimson Embers.

[harsh notch]

Feel free to take like, a little part of it too

[gritty crag]

A little part of what?

[harsh notch]

Like, just inspo

Or just embers

Or smth

Cause sometimes i feel like people would get offended if i dont take at least one of their options

[gritty crag]

Ooh okok.

I thought you meant part of the name.

I’ll just take the vowels then. Io Ee.

[harsh notch]

KEKEKEK

[gritty crag]

Two and a half pages!

[gritty crag]

I made it double spaced, is it easier to read now?

[hushed lava]

It is! Your handwriting is actually very legible, much more so than most people I know

[gritty crag]

Thank you!

[hushed lava]

You could still think about getting some kind of scanning software, of course. I know they exist, and since you do have pretty clear writing, it would be pretty straightforward.
But, as to your actual writing... it's good. I like scav politics, and you're taking it in a neat direction. Do you explain what the term "Cheneba" is? Is it like the prince or something?

[gritty crag]

Oheneba means the son of the chief.

And I’ll try to get a scanning software, though I know I’ll have to correct stuff after because it doesn’t work well most of the time.

[limpid rover]

Ooo, this might be the farthest on the tineline a fic has gone

[gritty crag]

One and a half page.

[jade rose]

Cool
I'll give it a read later.
By the way, I noticed you don't have anything pinned here. If you want something pinned, feel free to ping me or a story helper. You can easily do so by @ story helpers

[gritty crag]

Yippee! I’ll await your opinion on it! And for now I don’t need anything pinned but I’ll let you know if I do!

[gritty crag]

Lore!

[wary garden]

I awaken.

[gritty crag]

Haaaaiiii Cele!

[wary garden]

Hello!

[gritty crag]

Finished chapter one!

[gritty crag]

I did not manage to bribe my friend into transcribing my story for me but I started putting it digitally.

[gritty crag]

I think I’ll do a prologue. I think I started the story a bit too much into the plot.

Three pages of chapter 2!

[gritty crag]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/63401242

@mental frost I finally posted it!

[twin shadow]