#Omniforge/Manhattan
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i dont think so okay


left for 5 seconds
oh I never
followe dup
on that message
left for 5 seconds 

??? who is this SILVERKIN
its me
guh
manhattan
is
alive
but barely
looks to omniforge
omniforge is alive... i think?
the writing has not been fruitful
my muse abandoned me
Ug uh uh uh
Uhhh
My muse came back
But she took me by the scruff and shook me and told me to not writr about manhattan or omniforge
So i didnt

I do not feel like a storyer anymore
Honorary storyer 

Okay so i hallucinated myself a 3rd fic of yours??? 
Was i thinking the wild west AU???
WHAT 3RD FIC
maybe????? But that was never a fic 
I vividly remember past me thinking "yeah crispy has 3 fics" wtf 

The prophecy 
The prophecy 
The prophecy 
you guys are scary
Idk if i managed to fabricate memories and gaslight myself or did i straight up just did a prophecy 
The prophecy 
HOLD ON 
NO
IM GOING TO LEAK
OH WAIT
WE WERE SUPPOSED TO SEND LESBIAN CRABS
REMEMBER?
PETERRRRR
COME BACK
do it
do it
do it
Oh no i'm feeling very eepy all of a sudden 
thats what i thought punk 
Okay y'know what fuck you

humph
whats it to you?
what are you doing?

piotr
piotr uh
piotr what are you doing

fuck you
Manhattan supplementary material i bet 
sighs
true...
youre going to get a warning

im also going to get a warning i feel

I'm an idiot 
What was VA created for, after all? 
VA is just my oc stuff
I did a couple of oneshots i guess
Yeah so basically a 3rd fic 
Okay, call me a prophet, then 

The prophecy 

crisoyscooper what was your inspiration and/or creative process for the minecraft mod loader
:)
This one tumblr post
Let me pull it up
I actually saw the tumblr post
And then i was like
Lets make a rw fanfic
h o w
wait why are you naming it like this 
Because
Curseforge
Omniforge


oh 
mmm you remind me
I need to see if tumblr spared me
nope 
nine days, two tickets and a followup (from me) and they're all ghosted 
Hey cabbages
How old do you want the art to be
Like
When i first first started
oH I FORGOR
Okay
or whichever you're more comfortable with

These were from when i was like 8-9
@kindred condor this was my ice-silk wof oc 
These were when i started using procreate, about like 3-4 years ago maybe
Man, it's already really good 
Crispy you look like you were born with talent in all things creative
I'm jealous hehe
These were like 1-2 years ago
uhhh it took a really long time lmao
These were 2024
I really like the last one
But i ran out of motivatoin lmao
wow you're whole timeline is a much different style than I am trying hmmm
idk if I want to try something else until I can art well
Idk i wasnt really going for anything lmao 
You dont need to art well to try new things
Trying new things is how you improve in the first place

This was literally my first digital drawing 
You’re already starting out better then i am


daaaaaamn
no ive been here 
WAIT CRISPY

CAN YOU
What
SEND THE
What
What







finding it
Fine
in crreations
But it

womp
WHAT
Go look for it bitch
better than my art probably 
Nuh

Oh yeah most of those drawings up there were done with my finger cause my brothers broke my apple pencil lmao
bro
wait
literally
i think all of my old sketchbooks
are ogne
gone
i think i ate them or some shit
all of my old arts on pixilart

you can have poorly drawing
in webfishing
Youre just avoiding showing old art
BRO
Mhm
I DONT KNOW WHERE MY OLD ART IS


guh
lemme go look in the depths of my closet
see if i have an old sketchbook there
does this suffice?? 
guh
why is it sideways
how should i know
i dont know
btw this is #1293765993901850718 not #art-discussion 
And a rainbow
yeah
OH MY GOD ITS RAINWORLD
WHAT
YOUR FIRST RAINWORLD FANART
I dont care
WHO THE FUCK IS THAT GIRL THEN??
OH MY GOD
MOON

SEHS BLUE HAIR
THE DRESS IS GREEN
I probably have some salvageable sketch I can find if I ever figure out where by book thing went
MOONS DRESS IS KINDA GREEN

... better than what i could draw 
Anthropomorphized lilypuck from rain world
i was destined to play rain world.. 
my first sketches were so horrifying 
I have one sketch for cheese
hmm the only good one I might have shared on my original account at some point so I can't use that
oh I have no idea which ones I can show without revealing I am secretly batman
hmm
help?? 
Nevermind 

omg sorry im so late but AUHHH what a cutie
I'm gonna read ALL of omniforge now even if it makes me sad

I forgot where I was

this is me after reading chapter 6
TRAUMATIZED





I forgot what happened chapyer 6
Artificer trauma
Oh lmao
MY GOODNESS I can't believe this is your first writing
You've got THREE PLOTS going on at once right now

NO THAT'S GOOD
#1 taking 3 plotlines without having the ability to handle them

Guh
AND IT'S BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLL
Soon itll be more like
- Riv and arti
- Linguist and jasper
- Nsh and inno
- Spearmaster
- Srs
- Lttm











Whos there
Tree
I see you
Stop going against me or ill burn you with a match

What would you do if I started talking shit about SiTS?
I would burn you slowlu leaf by leaf

oh
I missed the last part of chapter 6
Whered did linguist come from
did I miss something
Therefore I must burn you leaf by leaf

Barks
everything makes sense again

NOO LINGUIST IS UNCOMFY???? NOOOOO
Ok so. Spearmaster and rivulet gotta team up and turn into a bed. Put linguist on top.
Make a pyramid for the bebe
im gonna send it if you burn tree
CHEESEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
what
what chapter is that?
6
Cheese 
monksil
where is this from??
yeah
What
my server
it

Yeah





I can smell
the
warriers influence
I read like a chapter from those books a long time ago
I can smell it






this is the name given by someone who's read a lot of cat books
when did LINGUIST get the brain implant





Bro is really good at picking up languages

Yeah partlyvwarrior influcne but i changed it to match scav culture
SRS was NOT gentle with the sluggercat 




WHERE's the anesthetic
WHERE'S the trained surgeon
🪦
wait
oh
I meant
NSH




the double newline transitions are a lil confusing for my small brain
I need to comment less frequently

No i like your comments
I like when people comment while reading
Its my favorite thing ever
If you stopill cry
Who did i kill bro
express train to lizard's mouth
||gentle fawn||
ture
|| dontcwant people to step into here and see soilers ||

||

would someone speaking in sign language have a hard time speaking when crying 
||
bro 😭😭😭😭😭
Wind blew through the cliffs, creating an eerie whistling sound.
MMM the descriptions are 🧑🍳🧑🍳
My only critique is that the book isn't totally temporally consistent. We zoom around time and space every double newline and then.
||spearmaster doesn't sleep|| 
I'm going to get lost in the double newlines
I've gotta sleeper. Onto chapter 8 tomorrow 

This is what im talking about eheh
||Chapter 10 is horrifying
||
||Windbreaker is definitely the sluggercat I’d like the least so far. He’s useful but he’s so condescending.||

||Sparmaster crazy||
||bro thinks he’s artificer||
||in front of the CHILD who was RAISED by scavengers||
😭 😭 😭 😭
||That is MANY layers of evil||
||???? Trans iterator???|| They’re robots what is the implication of this
??.??
||Don’t really have genbder I thought||

They have the concept of gender
Thats why you usually refer to moon as she
And pebbles as he
Because they have set pronouns
Thats why suns have they
Olay but
Is it better for spearmaster to die of starvation
I can’t tell what you’re replying to it’s all [spoiler] 
Click on it to teleport to that message then click on the message
I mean. Trolley problem.
Trolley is headed for one person. But they’re the main character, so do you instead switch it to a trolley of 8 people.
………..no
Spearmaster is morally wrong imo
True. What were they doing on the trolley tracks. SMH.
"Looks like I need to work on covering my 'tracks', eh, detective? But enough talk! It's time for you to choo-choose who lives, and who dies!"
"Choo-chew on this!"
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Familiar indeed 




OG trolley was harder to solve because all of them were tied down and vulnerable I think 
Nuances
Oh my god 
||https://youtu.be/6D60BvUxqIg|| chapter 14 for some reason???????
I am
Totally lost
By these events

Thats a joke chapter
No look
Spearmaster
Is a creature
They are
A purple
Slugcat
Slugcats
Eat food
Their goal is to survive
If they died of starvation who would care for linguist?
They have children but spearmaster also has a child

Hey look buddy
Cows and fish have children and eat food
I eat them anyways
Fuck cows and fish
Theyre tasty
There are no morals, just consequences 

Are you vegetarian? 
Spear cant talk with scavengers
And spear wasnt heartless about it too
They felt bad
But they were hungry
Me explaining to the police that murder is ok because I don’t speak Spanish:
But theyre not humans
Wait..
My lawyer defending me under the grounds that I don’t speak Spanish:
But that wasn't a necessity 
Is an animal
Who killed
Another different SPECIEIS
Or they will STARVE to DEATH
And leave THEIR CHILD
To helplessly SURVIVE the HARSH mountains
Species doesn’t matter if they’re intelligent?
theyre intelligent yes
Okay theoritcally
What if spearmaster didnt eat that scavenger
What would happen
I think you gotta play Spearmaster
/silly
Spearmaster
Dies probably
Out of the kindness of their heart
Decide
Oh
That scavenger has children and can talk i cant kill em
Spearmaster is an animal
They dont have those same morals; they prioritize survival
Is being able to process and communicate complex thought not what makes something conscious and intelligent?
If spearmaster was truly an animal he couldn’t speak words
But thats not an excuse to starve to death, especailly for an animal
But their goals are different
People have different goals
Then spearmaster does
Spearmaster wants to survive
…that’s not an excuse to kill 8 people?
Not work a 9-5 job in an office
What???
Who said they killed 8 people?
They killed ONE scavenger
Food pips
Maybe they had food storage from previous cycles
Starvation cycle
Spearmaster food pips can hold 6 pips for a cycle
Really? I dont remember
Okay starvation cycle then
Still
Theyre trying to survive
Thats kinda
The whole point of rainworld

Crazy right
I mean. I’m not saying there’s something wrong with writing a character like that but I’m not going to agree with those morals
Well cause youre not a purple slugcat in a harsh world where everything tries to kill you
Antihero
Have you ever played rw and then a scavenger just kills you out of nowhere????
That scavenger doesnt even eat you
That scavenger is a ruthless, bloodthirsty, inhumane beast according to you
Spearmaster’s situation was way more justifiable
In that they had a purpose for killing that scav

you can have that be your characters reasoning that’s fine. But I don’t agree with it.
Well if you were writing it what would you say? /gen
I don’t think you can write that in a morally correct way
You’d have to do something else
Or accept that the character has less than ideal morals
Sometimes between life and death in this world being “morally correct” isn’t the same as “correct”
Spearmaster’s morals are perfectly sane and intact imo
Antivillain
You don't have to agree to read the story, just as you don't have to agree with people to coexist with them
I got to chapter 16

I have no idea where it’s going next
I am confused as to when ||hunter joined artificer||
But it was very fun to read!

Flashback
Oh
At some point double new lines stopped being used to indicate changes in time and perspective
…not related to my confusion with hunter
guh
Yayayay level 52
Anyways
It a formatting issue when i transferred it to ao3

I hit 51 today i think 
Lmao skill issue
Girl stop yapping 
No
I actually have been slacking on my yapping

I should probably hang here more
LOL
I have plot questions
||did you make up windbreaker (think I remember that right??) for this story or did you already come up with that||
More of a character design question I suppose
I made up windbreaker for this story
usbsjshe you are an infinite spout of new ideas and creativity
In what order did you come up with the ideas? Did you decide to make a silly storyline of spearmaster and rivulet first, write that, then decide to add ||the linguist||? Is the whole thing planned out already? Were certain parts made first then refined?? I desire to know the prescise order of ideas
uh
here lets see
|| i wanted a fp x srs fic where srs gets fp and they become roomies and theyre like in love ||
|| spearmaster gets fp out and rivulet is there because its rivulet's time peroid ||
|| and i like moon ||
|| then linguist was kinda spontaneous ||
|| then their whole trip to grey wind was also made up like on the spot ||
|| most of the story is planned out now in misc order ||
|| but before i was just writing whatever interesting came up first||
||the central plot entirely resolves around gay romance??||
||I thought revival meant bringing FP back to life somehow||

Clipped
||I’m not really into romance stories tbh but I’ll do it for the sillies
||
|| yea, shipping fics iare a bit overdone and probably gets a bit of a bad reptuation but whatever go my sunstone ship fic ||
stalker's tango ||It's hard to explain what exactly is so great about the writing. I think any attempt of mine to write something similar would make me cringe looking at my own words, but you manage to put everything together in such a natural way!!!!||

Thamks you.... Ough
I think youre writing is equally great thi
Tho
Just thaat from the writers persepctive
Its always easy to be judgemental
I had not mentally prepared myself


The writing is very good but my brain feels attacked

I am traumatized
Horribly traumatized

"rough relationship" tag doesn't begin to describe this

I'm stuck at the bottom of the thread I tried climbing up but I fell back down. I can't read the lesbian...
Read the oneshot, damn 
How do I go back up! Fuck! I didn't wanna be down here!
Oh wait no the. Read thing is somewhere else
Ugh

||moon's so mean to her slugpup
||
||he's not stupid he's just silly||
It IS interesting 👀
relationships can include general ones too 
I caught up on Manhattan btw
there was a shocking lack of nuclear bombs
unless you count when SOS got really angry
If it has an & then its platonic/general
If it has a / then its romanti
Which slugpup ?
Oh linguist lmao
They them linguist
?
why is there a question mark
I dont hnderstand the question
WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME
/silly
Linguist uses they them

It was in a questioning manner
my sincerest apologies lingist pleaes don't send the scavenger hoards for me (I keep forgor
)
No worries ehe
the crispy. the crunchy. what did you do to develop such writing skill. i want to follow in your footsteps.
I have read almost every teen fiction series
Artemis fowl
Keeper of the lost cities
all of them... 
Unwanted
Almost all of then
I actually rab out of fiction books
The good ones at least
So i reread them
what was artemis fowl about again. might have read it long time ago. i recognize the name,
Ive ready percy jackson 5 timez
Kid whos a genious and like these fairy people
Idk
do they rob a bank
Uhhhh
or like
Maybe
some other high security thing
I knew it 
Spy school is a good one
After ive read all of those i started readibg like
Classics
Animal farm, night. War and peace
Anne of green gablescall of the wild
Crime and punishment
waitwaitwait. does it involve a guy who was in a hospital and dying but he was also gonna go to jail so he replaced hiimself with a clone that can't think but they can't tell the difference because he was already in a coma
aw man

bro i dont rmember
by GEORGE ORWEL?????
Just read a lot
Yeah
No way. It's literally 1984
Lmai
crispy you maxed out your intelligence skill at like 8 years old
Now I gotta go back and do the side quests as an old man
hi drymm
hi drymm
I wrote a turtle book in third grade too 

I shoulda been studying classic litearture at the age of 2 instead of learning english 
Lunch over, back to work 

shoulda been learning to draw and write... this little menuvar is gonna cost us 51 years....
Crispy pick a book of yours im gonna read it >:)
one less romantical (?) than the last one
What
I like
Hm
Notes from a dead house
By dotchovetsky or whatever
Woah...
Mine was like
A war between two bee sister hives or whatever
Omf was the first serious one
I tried ( and failed) to write a ton of times before
I have a couple narritives from ela too ig
I meant one of YOUR books
but I’ll check out that one 
uh there's "gilded lily" but it's being extra scary about letting me click on it

Uhhh
Read the tags on that one lmao
Also you cant talk about it in rw server hehe

I don't think i have written anything before now tbh 
I survived better than I did with that other writing you did (only on a relative scale of course). I'm a weird guy 

woah manhattan chapter today and yesterday
im...productive?!!>!!!/1?!?!</1>?!?!!
crazyi think
i think i can handle manhattan cause
it has short chapters lmao
i have more freedom i think
i can make it however long sliver wants it to be
if sliver doesnt have a lot to say she doesnt


its a very short but nice chapter
get this man outta here
he has no right being that joyful
this guy is ok

This one sparks joy
This one does not spark joy
vibes
why did you make ||sos a religious leader figurehead||, what is thine inspiration
idk i like it
:true:
:powderthatmakesyousayreal:
oh yippee 


It was a silly chapter



the note 
One day all the Bennies will die! !! !!! ! ! lmao giggles in an evil manner as I look out the window
LIAR 🫵
Sighs uhhhhhhh
April fools fic
Yeah
There wil be one

Omg! D !!! D s s. Crispy fic real???????
Ehehah
Grrhrhrf
I
I dont
Know how to write bro

Idl the hell im doing here
Im tried
Tired
And raincord so many new people
Dont feel like home anymore

Winmdbreaker

beautiful art
🔥
@lavish dock creature
woah there

@vernal salmon it's time

😭
goodbye

yay
when the giant hunter head tells you to sleep you sleep no questions asked

👍
why is it STILL CALLED MANHATTAN
who-
oh hi sly
uhmmm manhattan because
you'll find out
maybe
never
lmao

its for me to know and for you to find out
Crispy knows 
BRO I WROTE
4 WORDS
OF OMNIFROGE
TODAY

THIS IS CAUSE FOR
CELEBRATION
I ACTUALLY TOUCHED IT
!!!!!!!
actully for realisies i think
i might try to pick it up again (?)

just to spit out another chapter from my
demonic bowels
spring cleaning for omniforge lmao
i actually want to rewrite chapters so
we're going to do that
@wheat wind are you happy now





linguist goes on many wacky adventures

who was it that makes writing longer
let drymm edit it
and come back with a full chapter
woah





omf



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