#Stories chat corpse discussion
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Spearmaster: Vampire
Gourmand: Scarecrow
Rivulet: Rotisserie Lizard
Artificer: Piranha, wearing glasses
Hunter: Hunter (hunter t-shirt)
Survivor: Batfly
Monk: Batnip
Saint: Sabertooth
Smelvin: Pumpkin
Courtesty of @outer girder
Costume list

what about smelvin
shit forgot about Smelvin
fixed 

Punkin

whatever
yummie words
It’s my turn after this, isn’t it?
wait i just saw this, what is it about?
It's a silly group writing game
wow, that sounds fun, is there still space?
We mayyy have a couple extra slots I can get you into
Let me work my spreadsheet magic 
any chance you can quickly explain it to me in your own words tho?
just so im definelty on the same page
It's telephone, but writing basically....at least that's what I kinda thought of this as lol

we must save smelvin
he got lost :(
any pointers that everyone is working with?
It's about the main scugs (DP + Base game), OCs can be added/murdered at will
Smelvin is Gourmand's son and the macguffin all the characters are after
All the scugs are wearing silly halloween costumes
Costume list
Spearmaster: Vampire
Gourmand: Scarecrow
Rivulet: Rotisserie Lizard
Artificer: Piranha, wearing glasses
Hunter: Hunter (hunter t-shirt)
Survivor: Batfly
Monk: Batnip
Saint: Sabertooth
Smelvin: Pumpkin
Courtesty of @outer girder
Anyway, I added you in at third 
I hope the assigned days work for you
what days will that be?
go to the spreadsheet in the pins
those were just the empty spots for any late joiners
ahhhh
i sure hope i didnt just squeeze in there
but since Funky already started you got moved to third instead of second
ohh, okay
Celestium's time didn't change, just the position in the story
I'm sure they'll understand
and i will only get to see their chapter and not the first one, right?
@dry sequoia if not, i have no issues switching back, just let me know
yeah 
it's like telephone, except you're continuing the story as best you can
any word limit?
or any rating rules? like, im not plannign to add gore, but just so i know
none, though shorter is preferred
not going above 3k should work? or should i stay shorter then that
no rating limit, just keep gore so I don't need to rate it E on AO3
(if it's posted there)
I did 1.7k so
ahhh, okay
arounf 1-2k is ideal
got it
lets hope i dont ruin the entire thing then
im guessing i will write the entire downpour scug group interacting when its my turn?
we can kill them off👀
Imagine killing off all but one and it ain't even chapter 3 lol
so is it like in game lttm and all the scugs are just sharing the time line or is it some sort of modern au and lttm is just an actual house?
well, i could
but just imagine
you kill someone off
the person after the next didnt get the memo and just makes them reapear for no reason at all
true telephone experience
No joke depending how it comes when it gets to me
real
Its a compressed timeline and they're all exploring Looks To The Moon sorta
collapsed moon?
yeah
Moon, but haunted house
(also, just saying, I did heavily foreshadow an early Spearmaster death
)
maybe i will do that too

oh god, i just realized, me, the person that only writes dialouge between three characters of which two cant talk, having to write dialouge between like 8 different characters
help
just split 'em up
wont be confusing later on at allll
or what I do: focus on two or three having a side conversation and only show the outcome of the big group conversation
tbh, i still cant imagine anything i would write at all, i will just wait until funky is done and see from there
make it difficult for celestium to continue
And they just reappear later
lmao
By falling through the ceiling
pffff
someone said something mean about smelvin so he throws a bomb at them
Literally like the SpongeBob episode
With squidward going through that flying dutchman thing lol
oh lawd
"Artificer! You're back!"
i forgort what episode 
any set prounouns? or can they just change with each chapter
gourmand is a proud father
i support that headcannon
all the scugs are involuntarily genderfluid
i just realized, is enot not on the character list?
well i know what i will do then
i wont add any ocs, only beacuse i think it might be even more confusing than everything else already, but as for enot...
Watcher being the creepy old scug that speaks in riddles would be cool
maybe smelvin is hanging out with dumpter and being lost together 
They're chilling with Moon
Smelvin is the Macguffin, yes
lmao, i will make them find smelving chapter three, have fun writing a story then
/j
Escaping with Smelvin (the labyrinth has re-arranged itself) 
they lose him again 
They decide to exorcise the ghosts in the structure
i will just turn moon into jigsaw
she can like, make a hologram appear from herself as she has smelvin kidnapped and then the traps begin 
maybe ill write the ending with actual correct dialogue for the second time ever 
(i have never watched a single jigsaw movie)
me neither 
And smelvin is the one that controls the labyrinth
he was born with secret powers and cannot control them (he is silly)
ill post art progress later 
wait is there a visual thing for smelvin
like what color is he
white like surv
White scugpup

it didnt 

damn

its comin

i decided to let it be extra imperfect and not mirror tool the majority of it
Excellent
most art programs have an autosave thing
krita autosaved at the sketches and hadnt saved after then before it crashed
Angst Machine, Karessra, how's progress going?
Chicken riv 
yeah
Torkey 
torkey
I could probably tweak what I have right now and pass it on. However I want to add more to it
they desire the good 
(also, I had to move your timeline up a little bit to get Karessa in, sorry)
all good
everything went to shit today
might have to step down if i cant find time to write
@elder cloak i have a problem
my work place scractched my day off for next week and also gave me work for the entire day on Monday, i have no idea if i will manage to finish my section with all that suddenly comign down on me
is there any way i can already get chapter two on sunday so i can already start then? if that wont work i will try but im not sure i will be able to finish
i can try to finish today
that would actually be really great, tho pls dont stress it
if you want to change sth afterwards, also just do that, i can adapt to that if you do
That would be against the spirit of the corpse (imo), we can always change it in the editing phase
but also, don't stress if you can't finish at all
if i can start saturday evening and write through sunday, i should be able to finish
thanks a lot really, that helps a lot
monk be comin along
im on my bullshit again (silly)

you can swap with Celstium or anyone else if they agree to it
i think. it is complete

sent it to T13
im almost done with the lineart
i just have saint and smelvin left for the main cast
then i have to whip up a simple background
THEN i can make the smaller image for a cover

smelvin lines 

nvm i aint doing tiny image
i accidentally merged all the characters and closed out so its permanent 
I’m going to force little Smelvin to take off his pumpkin suit.
uh
yer phrasing is just odd i mean
SMELVIN ALERT

survivor still looks like batman 
nanananananannanaanannanana batflyscug
vaguely piranha referenced
it's the fish
@elder cloak what color do you think roasted lizard meat is?
I was just thinking it'd be exactly like rotisserie chicken's color
I just put in lizard because I thought chicken would be too out of universe lmao
(it's whatever color you want though lol)
hunter is just sick of everyone's shit




Torkey 

Wait, what?
i forgot why i said that my bad
No, it’s fine!
brain too full of eepy
two more questions before i begin writing, what is pebbles' status and is this a post rarefaction cell moon or not?
👀
pebbles is standing and that's all we know (so far)
Rarefaction cell or not is up to you
difficult
your not making this easy for me
i will also interpretate that as a challenge @outer girder 
-# if i find time
Don't sweat it :)
Am I smelling some calloutpost? 
...
i havent thought about that
but now that you say it
I mean, I guess you could always add the art on after you hand the chapter off (just tell me if you do so I can add it to the compiled doc)
perfect timing, i was just looking for references

tho now that i have my notes down, i can actually start with the chapter itself
lets hope i dont already accidently disregard everything that t13 wrote so far...
i already made a prounons sheet to at least stay somewhat consistent 
lets just say that most of my headcannons got shot dead before i even had a chance
is it like canon rain worl areas or can i add like a sidewalk n shit that aint dilapidated
it's all in collapsed Looks To The Moon
(but it's haunted oooOOooo)
it's alright, my sillies got obliterated too
-# i know by who 
i cant draw that 
It's a mystery oooOooooOOo
(the ghosts of systems' past?)
(or just a ton of literal echoes)
(or void worms?)
i will definetly hint stuff, what celestium chooses to do with that is that, but i dont just want to confirm stuff, im trying to not let everyting fall apart at chapter three already
just put them in front of a spooky haunted house 
that'll get the vibe I think
like, im the first one that writers with knowledge missing, the responsibility is there
thats what i intended to do but almost drew a sidewalk leading to it
lmao that's alright

it's about the halloween vibe
-# kill everyone!!!
damn now i have to relocate smelvin
okay, enough stalling, back to writing i go

good luck!
the art is arting

should i shade all the characters too? 
i like sending progress

hows it lookin so far storyers?
very nice


minecraft away
Hey, Frosmoth!
How good is Smelvin with combat?
I will simply assume "not too good".
How fast you guys write 
Same 
me too
this is easy writing though
low stakes with a clear lead in hook, no regard for what comes later, and minimum restrictions
Amany finished before they we're planned to start
lol good
amany finished before trash compactor was supposed to finish lol
quite literally two for the price of one
im out of ideas to continue c2 of atw but thats too off topic for this chat
considering that Amany was a last second addition

don't be afraid about being slow; we've gained almost an entire week of extra time to spend
the wawa returneth 
I am powerless, I recognize now
Stress toy
made to vent the silly forces on the spreadsheet
evidently I fight nature itself in fighting the silly
lmao
i mean
its just for like
writing support between us three
n stuff
idk

we alr have stories discuss for that at this point im just rambling
I'd ask Anton I suppose
I'm down tho
Anyway, I have commissioned the silly zone
so that all the silly can occur without removing from the spreadsheet
I’ll take something I said out of context.
“While I keep you holding on the spear bit, here’s my 5000 word dissertation for my thesis on the psychology, specifically, fear response of sluppies, and by extension, Smelvin.”
Spoiler!
/j /lh
||The overseer eye in the background tho
/ref||
Spoiler!
/j /lh
smh
i will just put the image in the chapter then
You can't escape! /ref
depends on if i have a time limit or not and my current motivation

Thy end is now! /ref
Wrong Prime soul.
i literally wrote 15k words in 3 days once so idk
I'm going to ultrakill you machine
May your "L"s be many, and your bitches few. /ref

How about this for a trade? I'll beat you into a f**king pulp and you give me my arm back /ref
Man, I should rewatch youtube 


got smelvin'd
yeah celestium's still editing and stuff
so you're up very soon
and Drymm is on deck
thats screenshotted in a way that looks like its a windows 7 window



wdym by this actually? (not negative)
Welp, I'm just giving my boi a time if he save smelvin, something would bound to happen 
there's a running joke about who's going to add and remove the most OCs (by killing) from the corpse
that's okay lol
well i
you already did your part 
0/0 for what? (I'm having a senior moment)
0 added ocs, 0 removed ocs im guessing
im just waiting for celestium to finish up tbh
they're asleep right now; they'll probably edit when they wake up
oh
I could send you the chapter but then you'd have to read through my mountian of annotations
(me and celestium are editing junkies)
just do it
Gonna have a K/D ratio with them 
lmao
anyway, now Drymm's next and Cy's on deck 
we're cooking chat
almost halfway done before we even planned to start lol

As you said, very low-risk writing.
Probably really easy writing, considering we can just make it crack.
And crack is the easiest thing to write. The less attention paid to it, the more crack it is.
I think T13's approved my thing, I'm basically done with editing.

Celestium's part is officially awesome
everyone is so fast in typing
Time for me to depart 

i chose last slot so i can stew on it slightly more
i am unable to write anything for shits and giggles
i have to take everything somewhat seriously
We’re gonna finish before October at this rate 
stories can be very productive sometimes
I dished out 900 words in less than 2 days.
Mostly in one, “minor” edits in the second.
lol yeah

I can space out the AO3 posts for maximum (not much) attention 
chat should i make my chapter 450 words or make it like 1k words
Let's go in the middle: 725
alright
Current projections if we keep at our current rate, place us finishing on the 5th to 6th
👀
In that case, we could start releasing chapters leading up to Halloween
spooks to the moon part two is now officially possible
Lmao, we may think about that when we finish the first one
Then wait a year to release it
spooks to the moon, part two, now exploring pebbles as smelvin has gone missing ONCE AGAIN
A vulture grabed him as soon as they leave, and takes him to 5P
smelvin
perfect
Smelvin has taken away 
All of my ocs must die
/j
that includes my iterator who has nothing to do about that
Thanksgiving corpse 
Feasts To The Moon

Fuck it, Christmas themed too/j
Are there gonna be krima? 
I suppose that’s possible
Gifts To The Moon
All the little scuggies give Moon gifts
Aw man, there gonna be lot 
These are just a Joke right?
Right?!?!
Yeah lol
man, that's gotta be a lot of work
I mean, it’s been like one day of work per writer so far so it’s mostly just work for me lol
spooks to the moon 2: smelvin's quest to save dumpter

Dumpter 

this time featuring arti as an EXTREMELY worried parent
then after Cy it's Epochs
After Epochs
<~~~
I don’t know how much disrepair it’s in, but when I was the one writing, it was mild.
I did seed something, though.
I like how we haven't even reached October yet 
So Drymm went hyperspeed, finishing in literally four hours
they're magical like that, I suppose
how many until me turn? :3c
we're halfway now
so at this rate like half a week 
so Cy's up now, which means Epochs is next, then Anton
Nah, it's all thanks to the power of writer accountability chat 
they are a dentist so I suppose they do gotta be precise with their hands
I gotta reiterate I'm not a dentist dentist, that requires like a PhD 
now trends point to us finishing on the 1st
you're cooler than a dentist dentist 
because my dentist won't discuss Rain World fanfiction with me
did we settle on pronouns for the scugs?
involuntarily genderfluid
lmao
do whatever
got it
decided by the will of the Gods
(us)
(
)
dentist payday 2 /j
Steals teeth
Uhh yeah that's totally what it was 
not again
(payday 2 lore is bullshit
)
You've gotta tell me about it sometime
/nf
I don't even grasp it fully but it's a shitshow 
Wait what even is this tone tag 
Wait - it's not forced, right??????
Uhh maybe later, it is slowly getting late now (not late enough for sleep police tho
)
I am a geriatric, you must forgive me for not being up to date with the slangTM
Can't find any info on it 
I'll just assume it is 
What the fuck, I swear it's real, I've seen people use it 
new mandela effect just dropped /j

🫵
Okay well Cy finished up too

so @inland lotus tis thy turn already
I sent it along so he'll see it when he wakes up
i just updated the spreadsheet

let us hope that wroting block won't block me 
unless that wasnt right
you'll be okay fren 
its low stakes stuff
plus we're ludicrously ahead of schedule
indeed

Am I the person who took the longest with my part lol
I think I took longer lmao
Well yeah but you're the event organizer
Exactly, you had to give the original prompt
doesn't matter because everyone not only started early, but more than half are gonna finish before we even originally planned to start lmao
We were all eager to get into spooky season 
No spooky month 
If we get this done before October, I can post a chapter literally every other day the whole month lmao
though I will need a volunteer to write a foreword at some point
I can do that, what would need to be included?
honestly at this rate i bet we'll get this done before sept 30
- The general context of the game
- the rules
- the initial prompt
- anyone you want to credit/dedicate to
- and I'll compile a list of links to all the writer's fanfics (plus their blurbs)
oh, and also describing your expierence with this/ a little on how you felt it went would be good
and it'll be posted before chapter one
Epic
waitwaitwait
you're telling me that
because i wrote monk getting killed
i get profit?
hell yes
You what
shh
You get three kudos on Ao3 
yeae 

you what
shh
shut it
no witnesses
aight homeboy, you cool
good
better stay that way, otherwise...
you're next.


The biggest wawa ever 
Wawa 
chat are we back
I'm looking for everyone's fics so we can link them in the foreword 
you dont gotta link ssa btw
yknow what
you dont gotta link any of my fics if you dont want to
It's already being done
After-T13: Sunrise in The Scrapyard Funkytrashcan: Disconnected Looks to the Moon's structure collapses ahead of schedule. Five Pebbles was able to shut out her pleas for help until the bitter end, leaving him to work on his Solution in relative peace. Seven Red Suns' messenger is still en-rout...
it's a work in progress
alr
if anyone wants to do their parts or wants me to use a different fic go ahead and edit it 
@fossil grove can you pin that link please
thanks 
@frozen sleet can I have a link to your A03 account please?
I need it for the credits in the gdoc above
Before I went to sleep : 'oh, Drymm's turn already? Mine should start just right before the weekend then'
Now: 
Did I sleep for 2 days straight lmao 
your turn starts today 
(Cy and Drymm were ludicrously fast)
also, I linked marooned in the credits sheet
idk if there was another fic you wanted there instead
(check pins)
Literally 🔥✍️ ( from all that speed, but also the quality)
Not really, thank you!
just saying if we keep this pace up we can jumpscare the hell out of Banan
I have work today though so probably not 
Dinner, give me a few
alright
damm 
we're only gonna be 28 days ahead of schedule

Do i have a headstart? 
I most likely won't use up all those accumulated extra days! most likely


So I only have access to the immediate prior chapter right? (Cy's?) ( And where can I find that?)
this is insane
I sent it to you
idk if you have message requests enabled
Oops
Discord notification is hard to notice again 


im loving the smelvin corner
anyway now that Epochs is underway, Anton is next and Banan is on deck
we all love my silly scups
I just remembered.
Ah, well, too late to edit now.
Either way, have to work on a build.
smelvin keeps the pumpkin costume 
Good luck 
So... Am I gonna wait? 
dw, already started and with a direction
Not sure whether that will change later though. 


hows the smelvining going story nerds?
still in Epochs hands






hi?
-# may the writing bless me
can I join?
Also, hi 
I think we still have an open slot
welcome
probably gonna end up full-onn horror if I'm allowed tbh
dp and vanili scugs explore haunted house while trying to save my slugpup Smelvin
ye
you guys have been writing so fast we prob have time to write a 2nd book
lol
I can definitely get you in there
check pins
i gotta go afk for a min btw brb
yay!
are you currently writing a rain world fanfic?
hi im back
I've got some experience
hi back im da-
SHUT /hj
it's not a quality thing at all lol don't worry
I just need to know for the credits page
this thingy
It is either serious or crack or even both 
-# maybe
appleeatinggoat will work
it's crack
ah ok
(yeah the longest thing ive written is 700 words and im in this)
must restrain myself from traumatizing everyone
lol there's no rules
it started off pretty serious but the crack always wins in a corpse
i'd like to see you try
anyway, time to work my spreadsheet magic 
One rule, actually.
only to the extent that the server allows :)
okies
so a lil bit of horror
just a dash
for flavor
so do I just start right now? or do I like... get context
We must save scugpup 
you gotta wait a little
We have a schedule.
And next, it's mine to write 
And I have to make sure my scug will die saving the great Smelvin 
im gonna make sure dusk dies by the end of atw (maybe) (maybe not)
if we keep at current rate (very unlikely) you'll start on the 1st, but if we have an average of 2 days per writer from now to then, youll start on the 7th
a very very tall iterator superstructure
very tall
the legs are 980 slots tall
THEY ITERATOR'D MY SPREADSHEET 

/j
smelvin update
Huh, I wonder who put that there 
oh ok
also sorry for disapearing I had to do something urgently and it was too late after
sorry but I'm probably going to use all allocated 3 days here. Was planning to complete it today, but my day job knocked me out and I woke up just now with less than 2 hours to midnight 
Don't worry man, half hour until midnight 

alright, so if this is correct, banan is next and sylveon is on deck
oh, i am
Maybe they're asleep?
Minor proofreading.

How am I gone for 2 weeks and literally half of you have finished already?
Y'all are monsters
I'm a slow typah but I can write 
oh boy, im next
alr vex is on deck
the storyers
writerpilled storymaxxers
Cult of the Poetic Scribes
Spooky Moon 
Banished to the orb 
MOON JUMPSCARE
How's the project going, having fun?
I wonder which characters have perished 
probably all of them
/j
smelvin must persist
smelvin will prevail
How far along are we?
9/15 finished
Who’s it on right now?
Banan
I'm next
The halloween crackfic is getting good... should I be afraid 
You've got this 
@ocean relic @vital rover are you two planning to join?
It's no big deal either way, you just gotta tell me so I can add you to the timetable
we're two weeks ahead of schedule
idk I'm not really into writing, I just wanted to watch
ah fair
Yeah I'd like to, that'd be fun


October
Don't say boom without the m, worst mistake of my life 
Hah, I already stepped into Spooky Month before you guys do 
Oh really? 
How?! the first day start only 7 hours ago for me
I am now 4 hours away before the 2nd day of Spooky Month 
How do you find the timetable again?
My part has been delivered 
Nah looks like sylveon is after me?
right here
epochs was underway, so anton was next
so now that sylveon's part is underway, vex is next
dw we're still insanely ahead of schedule
if we were truly on schedule, this should have been my final day to finish up my chapter
The potassium has delivered her words 
i can put the spooks to the moon art in halloween gallery 
Should we troll #rw-halloween-gallery🎃 by putting this there when it's finished? 
i could draw ending art and also add a link to the completed story exactly on halloween 
yes you can (people already have in their chapters)
People already did art for their chapters?! Damn I gotta catch UP
/j
lol
it was Funky and Amany (you can ask them if you'd like to see)
so there was a time when 2/3 of STTM chapters had art
I'm gonna make Bandit with a family guy death pose 
(Idk art so maybe just the simple ones)
Whenever you guys were finishing a bit early, I thought I would get maybe a day or 2 of slack, not 10 whole extra days
Can you change the font size in AO3?
Bit tedious, you can.
I'll have to figure that out, so I don't put too much burden on T13
How to make serious art 
my art gets more silly the sadder i am but the more serious the happier i am, so idk how to help
Somehow I'm almost done already
:O
Dang already almost time for me?
Yes 
I'm not ready 😭
you will be ready when it is your turn
this is an order
im kidding im kidding
we're way ahead, take all the time you need
And also, be like Susan my dude, take your time as stack up for the push 
-# I lost many rank games as demoted back to gold
Ah if only that was accurate to his modern day gameplay 😔

It's more like, stack wave, build push, have level advantage, still lose trade.
Get dove under tower
Then suffer for the rest of the game
I still rather not take to long lol
😔
I mean, as I’ve said this is pretty easy writing
It’s wacky and you don’t need to worry about consistency or what happens next
Dude, I send an art, next is serious art (i hope) 
should i ping vex to let him know its his turn

Well, do it.
Actually, who's before him?
Syl needs to send their document to Vex for that to happen.
Wait, right, that.
That's his job.
@elder cloak 
Pretty sure they're asleep.


I already handed it off dw 

Patch Notes
Spooky Month:
Writing Speed changed from 30.5% to 41%
Spookiness, Crackness and Seriousness increased from 20% to 50%
Alright, another chapter down baby 
4 more needed
we are 12 days ahead of schedule
It has been handed off 
I'm so so excited for my turn lmao 
Dw fren you’re on deck so probably not even a week till it’s your turn
So fast 
im last so i get extra time to write 
we all did really, but you have the most for sure slack

extra extra
How's the writing over here? 
Vaitle hasn’t responded to me 

Cookin my chapter illustration
(will be keeping it somewhat sketched)




So I thought
This would be like 1300 words
I'm not even halfway done yet, and it's most definitely going to be long xd
I might have to cut out the third part I had planned, oh well.
danm, 1300 is the size of my chapter
I'll probably try and cut it down a bit...
I'm trying to finish this fast xd
lol apprecieated
dont need to, you have until the 19th
getting done before the 15th would be great because we can upload a chapter each day that way
but everyone might be a little unhappy abouat that
no I meant everyone finishing by the 15th 
O
it's fine either way though
Dammit x.x
Well I'm luckily not on my story so
it's supposed to be fun 









