#Aeolian Waves

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civic cobalt
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Then in that case, the other one did not originally have a launch complex, but he built it himself later

delicate hazel
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plumes was a foothold in space exploration, waves was the next step forward monksilly

civic cobalt
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Hmmm

civic cobalt
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Time to actually make this in KSP rivevil

civic cobalt
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Update: Chopper replica complete, but I'm taking a break before I do the ship

civic cobalt
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"Chopper and Wavebreaker docked successfully. Mission accomplished." (cheering)
(ignore the "Aerodynamic Forces Overlay: Disabled" text, F12 both does that and also takes a Steam screenshot on my computer)

delicate hazel
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When the space program is kerbal monksilly

civic cobalt
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
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Interstellar never gets old hunterglee

granite narwhal
delicate hazel
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Wait shit i forgot to pin slugeyes

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Okay done monksilly

sick apex
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I need to read this

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Silently looming over AW...quietly awaiting the time when i finish it...

granite narwhal
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Wawa

delicate hazel
sick apex
delicate hazel
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Part two of book club soon monkcheese

sick apex
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Ill read it if you read omniforge /j

sick apex
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Nahhhhh

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Ill get to it hunterknowing

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Give me 3 light years

delicate hazel
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Do i say it

delicate hazel
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It itches me to say it

sick apex
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Say what

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Say it

delicate hazel
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clears throat

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LIGHT YEARS ARE NOT A UNIT OF TIME hunterbarrage hunterbarrage hunterbarrage

sick apex
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I KNEW EXACTLY WHAT YOU WERE GONNA SAY

delicate hazel
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Everybody is praying for my downfall slugpensive /j /silly /lh

sick apex
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hunterknowing i use light years to bother people; also because i cant care less

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Okay fibe

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Give me 1759 business days

delicate hazel
sick apex
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We were never friends

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Yesterday i tried to gaslight people into thinking you were bisexual

stuck pivot
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Wait Piotr’s not bisexual? monksilly

delicate hazel
stuck pivot
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Damm. Got gaslit slugpensive

granite narwhal
civic cobalt
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IT'S BEEN PINNED monksilly monksilly monksilly
rivflabbergasted

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My art is good enough to be pinned rivflabbergasted

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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Oh okay monksilly

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but still rivflabbergasted

civic cobalt
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T-20 seconds

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delicate hazel
civic cobalt
delicate hazel
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stuck pivot
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AW 2 real spearclose

latent viper
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ETA: UNK

Silksong confirmed

rocky sun
civic cobalt
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Wha rivflabbergasted

rocky sun
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Wip time monksilly

civic cobalt
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Hmm

latent viper
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The memester has their next victim in their sight

rocky sun
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@delicate hazel Aeolian Waves ending be like:

civic cobalt
delicate hazel
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Fact checked by real AW writer: true ✅

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Thank you slugheart

rocky sun
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Happy borfday monksilly slugcheer

civic cobalt
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I SHOULD DRAW BIRTHDAY ART slugsweateyes

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Good thing I'm motivated for arting again monksilly

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Let me reread this so that I can aquire something to art monkdevious

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(I do have an idea for what to draw, just want to reread so I get it correctly)

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Rereading the event reminds me of an eerie event that happened during a spacecraft crash that I thought up

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(Main engine 2's control wires get melted and fused through heating, resulting in loss of control + the engine recieving faulty instructions and firing, causing the craft to enter the atmosphere)

paper willow
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slugcheerstothat happy birthday

serene otter
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late birthday drawinghuntersmile

open kraken
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Happy birthday lizblueblep

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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RARRRRGH slugsweateyes
BIRPDAY

delicate hazel
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I think your artstyle is quite nice and technical, but to be honest i am struggling to make out what i'm looking at sluggrimace

civic cobalt
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urgh

delicate hazel
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Wait so is the leftmost drawing meant to be waves' structure?

civic cobalt
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Ye

delicate hazel
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Well, uh

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You got the rotation wrong i'm afraid monkdesperation

civic cobalt
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Darn

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It happened AGAIN

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(I decided to draw Crown(ACTS monkcheese)'s facility grounds and got like 5 things wrong)

civic cobalt
delicate hazel
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Yeah i've seen it earlier slagony

sleek hazel
delicate hazel
steep venture
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AW still getting the love it deserves 🔥

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
sick apex
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happy birthday piotr

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this took ridiculously long

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surely studying for my AP exam isnt as imporant hunterknowing

delicate hazel
small stone
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Actually, I told you that already.

delicate hazel
potent moth
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Happy late birthday Piotr monknervous rivapprove

delicate hazel
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I sure love not having anything waiting for release hunterknowing

delicate hazel
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ADDITIONAL RESIDUAL DATA DETECTED, DUMPING...

open kraken
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LMAO

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||Drunk fic?||

sick apex
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
small stone
serene otter
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IT IS COMPLETEslugpraise slugpraise slugpraise

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Waves, honey, i love you, but please|| never drink again||huhnter

delicate hazel
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||no really, she said it herself monksilly||

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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Finally finished reading monksilly

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||And you had sent me that video about the Tu-22... it's all connected...||

delicate hazel
remote shard
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Hi peeps
Im at chapter 6 of this fic currently ||power restored babeyyy|| and im loving it so far

stuck pivot
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AW love

delicate hazel
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oh you're the fellow space iterator writer aren't you? sloggers

remote shard
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Indeeds! Its so fun seeing how different the same basic premise can get, its so cool

civic cobalt
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There's another space iterator? scavclose

civic cobalt
civic cobalt
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om nom nom slugnom

sick apex
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Wave

delicate hazel
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Yippie monksilly sloggers

sick apex
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
sick apex
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No u

latent viper
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Looks cute :3

civic cobalt
remote shard
# sick apex

yess the nectar special version in the top right is peak

delicate hazel
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That's how it looked trust monksilly

potent moth
sick apex
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Woah

civic cobalt
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What's wrong with people liking your art hunterclose

sick apex
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No cause that was old and i got pingex

delicate hazel
rocky sun
sick apex
delicate hazel
open kraken
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This means we can bump the bumper

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💥

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/silly

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Anyway, the fic is finished and it's pretty cool slugheartrainbow

delicate hazel
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Hm saintsmirk

small stone
open kraken
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Bump monksilly

remote shard
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b u m p :D

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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Why is it not stonks

delicate hazel
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Bumping not done by me slugpensive /lh

civic cobalt
remote shard
delicate hazel
remote shard
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get bumped or smth idk hunterglee

delicate hazel
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falls over due to bump slugdead /silly

remote shard
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its joever guys, hes dead 🫡

restive plover
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Stand back everyone, I’m a professional

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1… 2… 3… CLEAR

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⚡ ⚡

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Patient isn’t responding.

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CLEAR

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⚡ ⚡ ⚡ ⚡

restive plover
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Final measure

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(I know it’s kinda post-mortem)

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I have caught up on HFISH and will soon be reading Aeolian Waves

small stone
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“Pee Otter!”

delicate hazel
small stone
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The Pee Otter brought him back!

delicate hazel
remote shard
delicate hazel
restive plover
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Just hit chapter 3 of Aeolian Waves

delicate hazel
restive plover
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But lo and behold I was pleasantly surprised with ||SPACE||

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Also, Aeolian waves is one of my favorite names for an Iterator

delicate hazel
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
steep venture
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I just wanted to use aeolian in an Iterator name and Piotr appeared

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Thank you for your sacrifice slugpraise

restive plover
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I compile a giant list of all my favorite adjectives and note down what I’ll use them for

delicate hazel
small stone
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I got another one.

restive plover
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Shoot!

delicate hazel
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Tell me more! monksilly

small stone
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Phrygian Ripples, the budget Aeolian Waves.

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For context, music theory, the georgian scales.

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Yes, I'm bad at parties, why do you ask?

restive plover
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The joke prolly fire as hell if I could understand it /J

delicate hazel
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Same slagony

small stone
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Aeolian is the regular minor with a flat seven.

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Phrygian is the Aeolian with a flat two.

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Basically, a more "minor" Aeolian.

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A lesser Aeolian, put another way. Music theory nerds, please don't kill me.

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This joke is neither fire nor smart, I'm just too much of a nerd to make a good joke.

small stone
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Which, by the way, is funny but good.

remote shard
remote shard
rocky sun
remote shard
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LMAOO

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nah its one of them benefactor names definitely hunterglee

small stone
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By the way, Mixo is really fun and accessible to play around in.

remote shard
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I should do that sometime (ive tried messing with them before but ive always been too stuck in the Default(tm) modes to actually result in the actual scale)

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Ok ok hear me out
Chromatic Transverse

small stone
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I'm not smart enough to music theory, I just play what I like often.

restive plover
small stone
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Atonal Frequency is actually a pretty fire Iterator name, on second thought.

remote shard
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Truee

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(probably like 0.01hz or smth) (on second thought, anything below 20hz would probably classify)

restive plover
small stone
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OC with no lore, because I have yet to finish my first OC.

restive plover
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I’m literally a librarian dw

delicate hazel
delicate hazel
remote shard
civic cobalt
rocky sun
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Love this iterator uhh (looks at smudged writing on hand) Ayo-lian Waves

civic cobalt
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Same monksilly (hunterbaffled)

delicate hazel
latent viper
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Ayo huntercool Lian

civic cobalt
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I love Lian Waves, the iterator in space monksilly
Got no idea why everyone says "ayo" before their name tho

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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Yeah monksilly

restive plover
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Studying the material…

delicate hazel
restive plover
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I’m ngl, the idea of ||A Scug in a space suit|| is adorable

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Now I WILL be observing the art for this story

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And I WILL be playing KSP

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I wanna commission a picture of The Spacefarer in a Home Depot shirt

delicate hazel
restive plover
restive plover
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I’m gonna finish Aeolian waves

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I got some time and I’m too invested

delicate hazel
restive plover
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I loved it!

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The spacefarer is my goat

delicate hazel
restive plover
delicate hazel
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Thanks to you for reading hunterglee

restive plover
restive plover
delicate hazel
restive plover
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Also, I am impressed by your knowledge of rocketry!!

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An iterator picking up on an IFF reading is not someone I expected to read but it’s a welcome surprise

delicate hazel
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
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Should have written transponder I reckon

civic cobalt
civic cobalt
restive plover
restive plover
remote shard
delicate hazel
restive plover
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And so nobody has to hop on the radio and go “excuse me sir, would you pls identify yourself? monklove

restive plover
delicate hazel
rocky sun
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So serious slugcheerstothat

restive plover
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But let it be known that I’m interested

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Link me

rocky sun
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I had the link primed myself hunterbarrage

delicate hazel
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One minute, drum monksilly /silly

civic cobalt
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When was iff mentioned

civic cobalt
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Mmmmm yummy nectar slugcheerstothat slugnom

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Mmmmmmmm

civic cobalt
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||BDP: You're drunk.||
||AW: No, I'm Waves.|| (nectar special spoilers)
slagony

remote shard
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||AW: I'm not drunk
BPD: Can you tell the time?
AW: looks at clock: I'm not drunk||

delicate hazel
delicate hazel
civic cobalt
restive plover
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Spoiler though: ||Fucking loved it||

civic cobalt
delicate hazel
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Wait actually uhh

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Shit no

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7 i think?

civic cobalt
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Ah okay

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Well I would say that Waves is moving above Mach 1, but is she an aircraft? slonk

civic cobalt
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Okay then

restive plover
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I’ve also accepted it as leg canon

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Especially since water is like the blood of an iterator (debatably) It makes sense to me how ||nectar|| would be like introducing a foreign material into the bloodstream

civic cobalt
restive plover
civic cobalt
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I mean I guess it's not confirmed to be canon but I think it would make sense as a real event that happened to Waves once

restive plover
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Bright Drive Plumes would definitely get along with one of my characters

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Not an iterator, but an ancient

civic cobalt
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Curiosity

restive plover
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At least post-Aeolian waves construction

restive plover
# civic cobalt Curiosity

He’s like a character I have a lot of ideas for, but my fic is currently starring a Scug and others after the ascension

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So it’s hard to feature him outside of pearls (which he will show up in several)

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But Bright Drive Plumes is in a very similar dilemma

open kraken
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Bump!

delicate hazel
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it's so over for me slugpensive /silly /j

civic cobalt
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Injection burn

remote shard
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Circularisation maneuver

delicate hazel
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Suicide burn

restive plover
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Uncontrolled tailspin!!!!!

remote shard
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Similar Consequences to Saying Tr-💥

restive plover
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TR—💥

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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Staging setup is wrong

delicate hazel
restive plover
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Bump

delicate hazel
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What effect will this have on the bump economy monkbigeyes /silly

remote shard
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yay :D

remote shard
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
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This just in: sequel to hit fanfiction "Aeolian Waves" will reportedly be a oneshot /j /silly

civic cobalt
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No

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It can't be

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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NO

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

rocky sun
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I see Piotr has been learning angst slagony

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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I'm cool with a oneshot if it means more space

delicate hazel
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(/j /silly)

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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Not being a oneshot is cool but I would be fine with a oneshot saintunyoy

delicate hazel
latent viper
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One shot is all it takes to take out a flimsy space craft hunterglee

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
civic cobalt
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Presumably

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I don't have any sources for this

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But it would look cool monksilly

civic cobalt
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It would look cool
And that's what matters monksilly

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Maybe a small vessel would be enough saintsmirk

tawny oak
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In Legends, an executor super star Destroyer tanked 3 regular star destroyers coming out of hyperspace

civic cobalt
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How the heck did it do that rivflabbergasted

tawny oak
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Super powerful shields

civic cobalt
remote shard
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And from what ive seen its great

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Agh i should sleep sorry

delicate hazel
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leans in closer

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whispers into your ear

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"you should."

remote shard
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I have already taken inspiration from it even just hte vague concepts ive seen

delicate hazel
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Or read the books actually, those have more content monksilly

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Though the show is sick too

remote shard
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cause like
uhhh yeahh i want insta-kill railguns????? if you aim right???

delicate hazel
remote shard
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I've read so few books recently monkdesperation

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(as in... none)

delicate hazel
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Project hail mary is good too-

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Dang i should sleep too slugdead

remote shard
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I must ask, even if hte chance is low, have you possibly read the Illuminae Trilogy

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(cause you shuold read it)

remote shard
remote shard
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It's very cool, found files type story

delicate hazel
remote shard
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but it's s c i f i

delicate hazel
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Because torpedoes exist monksilly

remote shard
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So true

civic cobalt
rocky sun
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AIDAN monkdesperation

remote shard
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AGHGHHGH

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iterator coded? jk jk

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ok i will sleep

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ILLUMINAE IS SO GOOD THO
ok bye

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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I just like seeing things blow up other things rivplead

restive plover
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Bumpification!!!!!!

delicate hazel
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Forums only need a bump once every 7 days hunterkek

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Also it is with great sadness to inform there has been a terrible mistake in the fic and i now have to take it down out of shame slugpensive /silly /j

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(Wrote "LIDAR" instead of "LADAR") slagony

restive plover
restive plover
delicate hazel
restive plover
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To create surface 3D images.

delicate hazel
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
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Not story-related i just thought it was really funny

civic cobalt
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Why is it so hot? Who knows huntershruggy

tawny oak
remote shard
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Bumpify!!!

remote shard
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b u m p e d

delicate hazel
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Not again monkdesperation /silly /lh

delicate hazel
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Hey did y'all know the fic has its 1-year-release-anniversary soon? monksilly

remote shard
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The Nectar Special 2: Electric Boogaloo

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that or Aeolian Waves 2: The Big Empty

delicate hazel
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Aeolian Waves 2: The Part Where She Dies

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Anonymous sources claim that sequel to hit fanfiction Aeolian Waves will be a video game /j /silly

remote shard
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heal yeag

warped plover
delicate hazel
restive plover
delicate hazel
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My happiness knows no bounds

rocky sun
rocky sun
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IDK MAN slagony

restive plover
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Whenever I say “I miss her” please be aware I am not referring to a long distance romance, lost love, or deceased spouse.

I am referring to the Aeolian Waves sequel, and every moment that delays its arrival.

restive plover
civic cobalt
delicate hazel
civic cobalt
delicate hazel
remote shard
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Bump 2: Death At 20,000 Kilometers

delicate hazel
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2nite on bottom gear i find out i wrote "void ocean" instead of "void sea" in a doc months ago and only now noticed slagony

remote shard
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can't wait for the "void lake"

rocky sun
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Void Water Table slagony

restive plover
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Void puddle

small stone
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One small droplet of void, one tiny portal into the next world.

delicate hazel
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Also known as happy fic anniversary but also i wanted to go with the random narrative i came up with months ago slagony

rocky sun
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Looooore

delicate hazel
rocky sun
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Canon?!??!

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Cannon is the ball launcher monkbigeyes

delicate hazel
rocky sun
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WHAT slagony

delicate hazel
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IDK slagony

rocky sun
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Misspelling 🔥 🔥 🔥

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Then why is it spelled "headcanon" huh saintsmirk

delicate hazel
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I ALWAYS WROTE HEADCANNON MF slagony

rocky sun
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HELP YOU DID???? slagony

delicate hazel
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YEAH slagony slagony

rocky sun
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||This is hilarious and also sad slagony ||

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||My homie Feathers shot on sight||

delicate hazel
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I liked the name quite a bit, rip slagony

rocky sun
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Backstory spinoff when monksilly

delicate hazel
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But that's fine i'll just bully khymera into giving me another name- /j

delicate hazel
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Wouldn't it be really angsty if i made them be like an admin or sth slagony

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Though that doesn't really line up with how other characters are reacting here

rocky sun
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They are spared

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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What does "five by five" mean

rocky sun
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I think it's signal strength

civic cobalt
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Yes but in what way scavclose

delicate hazel
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No, wait, strong and clear, there

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First number from 1 to 5 represents strength and the second one the clarity

remote shard
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"Five by zero, ground control. No idea what you're saying but it's coming through real good."

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
delicate hazel
delicate hazel
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The best part of helper is i can do whatever the fuck i want slugfab /silly

rocky sun
remote shard
rocky sun
remote shard
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LMAO

delicate hazel
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Oh hey i get to bump myself I guess monksilly

civic cobalt
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qmud

civic cobalt
remote shard
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:)

Bump

delicate hazel
remote shard
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BUMP BE UPON THEEEE

delicate hazel
autumn pine
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I'm gonna read this

civic cobalt
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Another one is captured into orbit

autumn pine
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Envoy woulda seen that coming (probably)

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But he'd get taken up intentionally lol

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He likes Iterators (and doesn't how any other slugcats he's never seen another for as long as he can remember)

civic cobalt
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No not like that

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Like the gravitational pull is so strong that you're pulled into orbit
But you don't feel anything so one day you're just in orbit

autumn pine
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Slugcat never seen space station before monksilly

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"Iterator's log, KSISS Aeolian Waves-" OK I'll stop

delicate hazel
remote shard
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B ump

delicate hazel
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Not again monkdesperation

civic cobalt
delicate hazel
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Good news: a bit of writing
Bad news: not rain world slagony

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Might send the link to it here tho if i ever finish it, cause it's my forum monkcheese /silly

remote shard
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"My name is Waves. Aeolian Waves. I'd like some nectar, please. Shaken, not stirred."

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
remote shard
civic cobalt
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Injection burn

remote shard
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oberth effect time :>

delicate hazel
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Why calculate delta V when can add more fuel

civic cobalt
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Also moar boosters are also important

civic cobalt
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Injection burn 2

remote shard
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sudden orion drive activation (real) (no fake)

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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These injection burns are getting tiring

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Also you have an orion drive? invgoggle

civic cobalt
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Injection burn 3

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smh

stuck pivot
rocky sun
remote shard
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me when my ||*** || || ***|| ||slugpensive||

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Oh god this has given me an idea for the stories chat corpse (rain world things except they're SCP files)

delicate hazel
tawny oak
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Balls

stuck pivot
stuck pivot
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Standing on the shore of the Mythical Aeolia, where once the mighty king Aeolus gave Odysseus the bag of wind to return home. The surf rolls across the sand. The setting sun glides across the fingertips of windswept ocean.

I wonder when we forgot of this place. Perhaps we never did at all. Maybe its memory has simply receded to return when the Moon wills it.

But that’s not a question for mortals to answer.

I can only watch the surf, the undulations of the ocean, pressing in with the tide, only to then retreat again.

They sure are some Aeolian Waves, I think.

remote shard
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"I think that's the Aegean sea, actually" /ref

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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pnwb

delicate hazel
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Not the nudge monkdesperation /silly

civic cobalt
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pnwb

remote shard
delicate hazel
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Read hail mary again. Y'all should too. No writing progress. Se y'all in a few years hunterknowing /silly

civic cobalt
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So be it artiyoy /silly

potent moth
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and unto the call we wait, like cicadas slugglob

remote shard
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y e s s

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Read Hail Mary.

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I think I liked it a decent bit.

delicate hazel
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Listen.

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I need to remind people.

delicate hazel
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Bump

remote shard
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:D

remote shard
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aeolian bumps :)

remote shard
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Starting off the new year with a Bump!!! monksilly monksilly 💥 💥 💥 💥 💥

delicate hazel
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I want to play multiplayer (the second one ofc) but I can't for some reason

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I thought making an EA account would work but ti didn't

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so im playing campaign rn

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WAIT

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BT HAS A TOP HATCH!?

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i guesssss let it sit?

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campaign is good too monksilly

delicate hazel
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*lurks*

autumn pine
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I just got to like chapter 5 or 6 or smth

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And kudos ofc

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beel kudoing it

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But to summarize:

  • 1: Heavy Project Hail Mary/The Martian vibes. It feels like Andy Weir wrote a RW fanfic!
  • 2: The Spacefarer's backstory is just so... rivsob
    Like, my OC, the Envoy, he was separated from his family when he was too young to remember, so he had to survive on his own. But his family might still be alive articry
  • 3: "EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OK" (insert footage of Talos 1 being destroyed)
delicate hazel
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I just realized that's a phone in that emoji

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Spaerm is using a needle as a stylus lol

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Y'know, Andy Weir is MOSTLY a pretty good author but I do have my critiques with him

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The only one that I can think of off the top of my head that's purely objective is that he doesn't do that well with endings

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The ending in The Martian would have been a whole lot more rewarding if it ended with Watney greeting his family for the first time in like 3 years, or even just him stepping off whatever they use to get the Ares 3 (it was 3, right?) crew from orbit to the surface, and stumbling in Earth's higher gravity. Still, it was a pretty decent ending anyway.

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In Project Hail Mary, he just...

Wait I should be spoilering...
||He just threw out Grace's character development. "Oh, I guess I'm a wimp. OK, I guess I won't even try to go back to Earth." He kept arguing that he didn't have enough food, but the average human can go about 40 days without eating, and that's about how long he had after his food supplies would have gone out. And that's the AVERAGE; larger people with more fat reserves (and more nutrients in general) can go even longer. Yet instead he went to Erid instead. If they went to Earth then they could have created the first interspecies, inter-planetary alliance; I mean, both worlds have already seen how well humans and Eridians can work together. What argument would anyone have NOT to work together?||

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And for my plan, you may be thinking that perhaps they didn't want to because Erid was also in trouble.

||But Erid had much, much longer than Earth did befor any cataclysmic events would happen. Heck, before the Eridians would have even been affected pretty much at all! So they would have had plenty of time to launch a Hail Mary 2 to deliver the Taumeoba to the other system, and they could have also perhaps sent some of the Beatles to Erid and some to Earth for redundancy. (Although IDK if the Eridians could make much use of the Beatles lizwhiteshrug )||

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OOps forgot the closing spoiler tags lol lizorangeoops

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I'm not going to talk about it, other than saying:
If your team doesn't want to hear about something, DON'T KEEP TELLING THEM! That's not honesty, that's just being annoying. They know; they don't wanna hear it; so shut. up.

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But uh.. a couple of the guys who were supposed to go on the Hail Mary... erm... loved each other

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This led to them ||both getting blown up in an accident with a failed Astrophage generator experiment||

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At least it was a one-off instead of The Martian's occasional crude joking slugshrug

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Eh, I found it amusing. Been a longer while since i read the martian so i can't comment on that

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Have you read artemis, by the way? It's a (i think) lesser known sci fi work from weir

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I stumbled upon it on accident and think it was an enjoyable read

autumn pine
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I'll probably pick it up sometime after I finish 2001

delicate hazel
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Which... won't be that long hehe

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ok

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I mean, my granpa watches a ton of soap operas for some reason idk why

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but last time I was over there he found some stuff we both liked. One of them was a short series called "The Black Rabbit" where a guy who owns a fancy bar/resturaunt thing(?) and his brother are dealing with their... erm.. debts

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Mostly the brother's debts

delicate hazel
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Black rabbit sounds like a dollar store superhero hunterkek

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Because they had a really, really messed up childhood, ||their mom was sorta friends with a gangster boss guy, and the son of the gangster boss guy really doesn't like the brother for some reason...||

delicate hazel
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It's more like... ugh no that would mean spoilers

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I didn't even mention that ||mafioso jr cut off the guy's finger...||

||And then later mafioso jr and the same guy (the brother of the guy who owns the resturaunt, the Black Rabbit,) worked together to rob the resturaunt.||

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Also I'm reading some guy's essay about why he's not a christain rn.

It's called "Why I am Not a Christian."

So far he's made about 20 arguments that are easily dismantled.

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I will not say anything furhter ,at least not in public.

remote shard
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bumpp!

delicate hazel
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Why do you keep bumping, you expect me to pull up with new writing? Don't be silly! /j /silly

remote shard
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not... silly? loud explosion sounds

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Bump

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I just remembered I cut Waves from the Targetverse fic

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I had a whole checkout line scene planned before I scrapped it in favor of a pursuit

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I'll put her in the next one I prommy monkwail

delicate hazel
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Minimum wage Target employee Waves

delicate hazel
civic cobalt
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I remember this

delicate hazel
remote shard
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Bumpscare rivsoulstare

delicate hazel
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:D

delicate hazel
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Oh shit AW hit 1,5k hits recently i think monksilly

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I saw 'AW' and thought it was 'aw' as in "aw man" and got confused by there being no sadness in your message LOL

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"Fuck i'm popular guys slugpensive"