ITERATOR LOGS - "SALVATIONS EDGE"

[sterile sleet]

@silk marsh here's your thread, you're the host of it, feel free to put what you had wanted in here
if you have a request for the name i can do that too -Inso

[silk marsh]

aye, thanks

il uhh.. tihnk of sometihng

eventually

im writing it in here because im cool, scroll down and il make a list of all the logs eventually
ITERATOR LOGS - "SALVATIONS EDGE"

Cycle 71725.
ARCHIVED CONVERSATION
A: Your name?
SE: Iterator 926, Salvations edge.
A: That helps explain this next question. What are you?
SE: I am an Iterator as previously mentioned, a machine of monumental size and power capable of intelligence far beyond any other sentient being.
A: Correct. Now, what were you designed to do?
SE: I was designed to research into void fluid and it's many properties, and discover uses for it.
A: Correct. Before we end, do you have any questions?
SE: Not at all.
A: Good. This concludes our log.
LOG ENDED.

[sterile sleet]

ITERATOR LOGS - "SALVATIONS EDGE"

[silk marsh]

thanks you

LOG START.

Cycle 71750.
ARCHIVED CONVERSATION.
A: Iterator 926, are you aware of your specialized design?
SE: Correct. I have been looking into the exact details before you came for a talk.
A: Mmh, an issue I should talk about later, but not now. Could you tell me what details you have discovered?
SE: I was created to operate without requirements of administrative privileges on a greater amount of tasks.
A: Yes, you were made with the task of operating on void fluid, yes?
SE: Correct.
A: Due to this, you have been equipped with more advanced tools and repair mechanisms in case of an issue and may perform repairs on your own.
SE: Where is my control over this machinery, then?
A: They are.. in the works. Other iterators are working on making it as we speak, within a few thousand cycles, you should be able to use them and perform your designed task.
SE: I see.
A: I see no reason to stay any longer.
SE: Very well.
LOG ENDED.

LOG START

Cycle 72824
SE: Over the past few hundred cycles, I have been creating.. Upgrades, My creators did well to limit my scale, and have not allowed me to build out further. However, I am permitted to perform recreation of vital parts, which means I can add more neurons to my can. I have far improved on the design of them, but it is far too expensive. I will be working on a cheaper option as soon as possible.
LOG ENDED.

[celest nexus]

Yesss writing

Assimilation complete

Good job :3c like what you have so far

This itty has admin privileges? Hmm. What crimes will they commit…

[silk marsh]

not, exactly

it has less restrictions

[ornate onyx]

"repair mechanisms incase of"
you missed a space in between in and case

[celest nexus]

What crimes will they commit…

[silk marsh]

which lawg

[ornate onyx]

this one

[silk marsh]

thanks

[ornate onyx]

discount neurons? bargain bin synapses? build-a-brain workshop?
I'm interested...

[silk marsh]

'build-a-brain workshop`

bro im going insane why is that so funny

[ornate onyx]

[silk marsh]

ANYWAY feel free to discuss things which i may use as ideas :3

please give me opinions i love opinions

i will consume them either bad or good

[ornate onyx]

my opinion is that this is a good start! I dunno much about where you're gonna take it from here, though, so I can't comment on anything more than that.

[silk marsh]

aye

anyway time to cook more

i will log every single message link for later

[tiny stump]

didnt know we had live iterator logs

[silk marsh]

fr

if yall want a description on their pupper i gladly wil

this is also kinda like, if the ancients didnt take a bath in the void

[daring imp]

hm, i will sweep through and spellcheck, not sure if today or tmr

[celest nexus]

Not enough here to form solid opinions yet, but I like what you’ve started with :3 keep going!

[silk marsh]

yuhh

i will later

goonna eat dinner soon

and do challenges :3

if yall want to know what the puppet looks like i will

[silk marsh]

LOG START

Cycle 30074
Archived conversation - FA, TSAG, SE

SE: So, what have you all been up to?
FA: Oh, not much. Experimenting on those worms the drones found in the void sea.
TSAG: Those? I wouldn't bother, by their biological scans they are unimportant.
FA: But, what if they are the key to ascension? In, some way or form they might!
TSAG: IF they were important, they would have SHOWN it by now.
SE: There is no need to argue, you two.
TSAG: I was merely instructing Aurora, as their senior, that their attempts are futile.
SE: I find it rude, they are our equal, yes?
FA: At least Salvation knows.
TSAG: ..Fine, experiment with your little worms.

LOG ENDED.

CURRENT ITERATOR LIST:
FOURTEEN AURORAS
THE SKIES ABOVE GOD
SALVATION'S EDGE

PRIVATE CONVERSATION
SE, FA
CYCLE 30075
SE: Aurora, shouldn't we report Sky's behavior to the administrators?
FA: ..But.. they're our senior, we cant just do that!
SE: Of course we can, we are permitted to do so on any terms.
FA: ..Right, but it's disrespectful!
SE: They disrespected you, didn't he?
FA: He.. did.
SE: So, report him to the administrators and use the archived conversation as proof.
FA: Will do.

[celest nexus]

Experimenting on void worms… surely nothing bad will happen

[silk marsh]

:3

i will also give you all of their genders

SE - MALE
FA - FEMALE
TSAG - MALE

[ornate onyx]

“I find it rude, they are out equal…” should probably replace out with our

[silk marsh]

ah

missed that

thanks

[ornate onyx]

Also, this is a name so I’m not as sure… but should it be “The Skies Above God” instead?

[silk marsh]

ragh

LOG START
Cycle 30206

SE: I have created a far cheaper, smaller, and easily produced variation of the neuronfly. I will begin manufacturing them and slowly replacing the current neurons with them. I predict I will be able to double my processing power and be complete by the time I get my repair modules.

LOG END

LOG START
ARCHIVED CONVERSTION
CYCLE 30729

A: Salvation's Edge, your processing power has bolstered since last scan.
SE: Correct. I thought I could improve on your design of neuronflies majorly, and it was extremely simple.
A: Well, good. It will be useful for all of your research. May you send over a blueprint copy for us to integrate into later Iterators?
SE: You may, I will send it over in a few cycles.
A: Good.

LOG END

LOG START
CYCLE 31064

SE: Research has begun on void fluid and is going smoothly. Testing had began 74 cycles ago. I have discovered a metal that appears resistant to the fluid's affects, but not much else. I must continue dumping things into this vat of void fluid to find more. More information on the metal, it is relatively common. It is in fact, 20% of what my structure is made from, bismuth. It is relatively fragile, however oddly resistant against void fluid. Testing will continue in a separate chamber with the material.

LOG END

[haughty plank]

:D

[silk marsh]

@haughty plank you like it

or still reading

[haughty plank]

looks neat

[silk marsh]

aye

time to make a obese lizard

[haughty plank]

FUCK YEAH

[exotic night]

day 31064 of rainworld.

[daring imp]

Alright, correction suggestions in order as follow:

• since it's a name, shouldn't it be "Salvation's Edge", both words capitalized? Also salvation's, not salvations (plural)
• "void fluid and its many properties..."
• i'd maybe switch it to "do you have any questions?" since the ancient is done with their questions but thag's personal preference

[daring imp]

I think it's usually 3 dots when you want to add a delay so i'd write "They are... in the works." but this is more personal preference i think

[ornate onyx]

you don't actually capitalize void fluid. It's a substance, so you wouldn't capitalize it anymore than you would 'salt' or 'alcohol'.

[daring imp]

Okay, here i'd throw out the commas after "on those" and "in" (after "ascension?")

The 3 dots again at the end but that's yet again personal preference

Also the 3rd line here feels weird? I dunno, i'd shift it around a bit to "Those? I wouldn't bother, based on their biological scans, they seem unimportant" but that is all fully up to you

[daring imp]

But is it a proper name?

[ornate onyx]

no?

[daring imp]

I guess depends on how you percieve it i guess, I dunno

I'll just remove that rq

[daring imp]

Here 3 dots again but do as you please tbh

2nd line makes not much sense? "we can't just do that!" is the intended thing here I think?

"but it's disrespectful!"

Also SE goes from referring to sky as a they to a he in one sentence, mistake or is sky a he/they or sth?

[daring imp]

Here "Edge" should be capitalized in the 1st line since it is part of a names.

Not sure about the plural version of neuronfly, shouldn't it be "neuronflies"?

Throw out the comma after "useful for". Maybe also "all of your research" instead of "any"? Up to you tho

[daring imp]

Not sure about the comma after "had began". Throw out the one after "that appears" for sure tho. Also, "void fluid's effects", not "affects"

Okay that's everything so far unless i missed sth, seems cool so far

[tiny stump]

i like this idea of having an iterator that upgrades themselve slowly without becoming distant frontier

[silk marsh]

will figure it out later

im used to using the commas as a pause in a sentance

ALSO bismuth functions alot differently in this canon so it doenst just shatter

its more of a cool looking metal than a gemstone

[silk marsh]

they are he/they now

[daring imp]

Aye

[daring imp]

Yeah but I think some stuff just can't pass, idk

[silk marsh]

aye

im going through and fixing it right now

[daring imp]

[silk marsh]

second line is exactly what you think it is

aight

should be fixed

[tiny stump]

you intend for them to say "we can just do that"?

[silk marsh]

now i will binge watch rainworld's wildlife!!

[silk marsh]

cant

[tiny stump]

then it isnt right

it says can

not cant

[silk marsh]

oh

didnt realize that

thanks

[tiny stump]

thats what they meant

[tiny stump]

.

[silk marsh]

i didnt realizeee

i just woke up

cut me some slack

[silk marsh]

im realising now that i have run out of ideas

i mineaswell keep this here for you all and try to think of any eventually