#Beyond the Shell

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north herald
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Antimatter is a funny thing to mention but don't react that shit so I guess no, there was some mention of sulfur cast molds in ingame dialogue too

fluid ridge
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tbh, i dont even get the text itself

north herald
fluid ridge
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science talk!!!

north herald
fluid ridge
north herald
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What

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No

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I can't believe it

fluid ridge
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its cannon now, iterators dont use apostrophes correctly. i of course knew that and therefor have never made a mistakemonksilly

onyx furnace
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Means the disorganization of a system and the leveling out of high energy in a small space to low energy in a large space (same amount of energy just spread out)

north herald
fluid ridge
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i copied that text months ago to be fair. maybe im just going crazy

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ughhh, this isnt helpingmonkdesperation
i have no clue how to start the log

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i dont just wanna make it, oh hey, you guys wanna talk about this and that?

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well, i did do that for the first one, but i dont wanna do it for the second

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maybe i just keep the old one?

north herald
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"HR: Please, somebody propose a better topic, i'm tired of this fruitless discussion" monksilly

fluid ridge
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pretty much what they said in the first version

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now its PI saying it

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for now

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maybe i will just cut NGI out and only have GS, PI, and HR

fluid ridge
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The opening log for chapter 11 for now. Not sure if I will keep it like that tbh.
its mostly a mix between the old version and the new stuff i wanted to add. Even if i keep it like that, I will probably still have to edit it, but hey...
at least I wrote sth todaymonksilly

north herald
fluid ridge
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cant escape the proofreading even in a draftmonksilly

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tho im not complaining

north herald
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Also is that grammarly highlighting all of that stuff or is that some other autocorrect?

fluid ridge
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grammearly

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so most of it is just really dumb

north herald
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I think it might be drunk slagony

north herald
fluid ridge
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lmao, only say sht if its like really really bad and you cant help it

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otherwise, i will probably overwork it at some point

north herald
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Not gonna point out commas cause i'd take psychic damage from trying to say where slagony

north herald
fluid ridge
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||Shes done with them allslugwhy ||

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i just realized that i still havent edited it that the The before any sort of house is alway capitalized

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i told myself to fix that months agosluggrimace

soft agate
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I ignore it consequentially

fluid ridge
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yikes, wrote it correct, then wrong twice, and that in the same paragraphslughands

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well okay, only worng onces since the third the isnt in the Title thingy

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but stillslugwhy

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lmao, again, two times correct, the third time wrong, all in the same paragraph

north herald
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I think i'd get brain damage if I were to check for that too /j

fluid ridge
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only wrong 5/21 times

fluid ridge
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tho not todayyy

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i just saw thatslugsparkle

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neatsloggers

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ignoring the text, why does grammerly hate me??? why is so much markedslugscrem

soft agate
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First of all: grammarly hates the way the Ancients capitalize

I have a similar issue with my scav talk. Grammarly hates the tribal sentence structure

fluid ridge
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grammarly suckshunterfight

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yet i will still continue to use itmonksilly

soft agate
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You should :p
I do as well.

fluid ridge
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it does help with simple typing mistakes pretty good

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among other stuff

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still annoying though

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whats worse then forgetting to capitalise the The? well, its forgetting the The in the first place of coursemonksilly
no clue how i missed that tbhslughands

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but at least all the The's have been fixed now

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now time to go to bed, its past midnight alreadysluggrimace

unborn vault
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Story chat struggles with trigonometry.

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The artists know chemistry. We must not lose this war.

fluid ridge
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I finally know how I want to start the Pebbles section of the chapterslugWOH
Now I only have to begin writingslugpensive

north herald
fluid ridge
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hiding out in my thread while avoiding the sleep police like a championhuntercool

ornate grail
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(Does some math) NEARLY 5 AM..... slugempty

unborn vault
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Karessra!

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Please don't do this to yourself.

fluid ridge
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yeahhhhhhsluglove

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im actually fine, i accidently slept throw almost the entire day so i did get my sleep

fluid ridge
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daily update log [1]
(yes im starting from one again, its just easierslugfab )

Ehhhhhhh, vacation is over today so back to my actual work i must go. Now i know this was a break, but i thought that i would at least do a little bit more then i actually ended up doingsluggrimace
Even now, im just so unmotivated, but i still want to do something.
But all i did do was sleepslugtired i dont even know why, i just did it allllllll the time.
Back to the point though.
Since im done with my vacation I will probably try the daily update logs for a week and if that works continue, if not, just continue the break for a bit longerspearwrite
Lets see what it will beslugwhat

fluid ridge
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daily update log [2]
wow, the first active day back with writing and i did....

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great start, i knowslughands

north herald
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I have not bumped the thread yet, you should totally go back on break monkdevious /j

fluid ridge
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to be fair, i felt really motivated to write for like three hours, then i went on ao3 and read other stuff insteadslugscrem

gleaming snow
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Evil Amany be like: "I'm taking a break"

gleaming snow
fluid ridge
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to be honest, what im doing is kinda a breaksluggrimace

north herald
fluid ridge
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daily update log [3]
i did not write anything...
hey hey hey, put them pitch forks down, i wasnt done!
i did not write anythign, yes, BUT, i did brainstorm for a while.
sat down with a friend and went fishing in minecraft while talking with (more at) them all my ideas i had for chapter 11.
some new neat ideas have formed, and with it, i have pretty much the full layout for chapter 11 in front of my eyes.
a certain someone may also be happy to hear that i scrapped a bit of filler here and there since it didnt really have anyhthing to do with the plot.
on the other hand a certain someone might be not so happy to hear that while chapter 11 now has less filler, the same cant be said for chapter 15monksilly
yeah, i ended up brainstorming chapters 11 - 16 (mostly chapter 11 tho) and now i have some new ideas, with chapter 15 gettign such a big idea that i worry that it might get a little long....slugwhat
could i split it? yeah, ig, but i dont wananmonkwail
im still thinking about it but for now i like the chapter to not be split.
and a longer chapter here and there wont hurt anyone, righttttttsluggrimace
anyway, thats it, amany outhuntercool

north herald
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will chapter 15 become the new chapter 9-10? rivflabbergasted /j

fluid ridge
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not that much i hope

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maybe 15k?

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depends on how much of chapter 15 i leave for chapter 14 and 16 tho since i already moved parts over to both so it will be a little bit shorter at least

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but i just kinda came up with and entire new scene that will take a bit of time to set up. whoopsmonksilly

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its just a way for me to get one character into a state i want them to be in dead /j

north herald
fluid ridge
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daily update log [4]
the start for the chapter has changed once again and now im back at square one: struggling with the first few sentences sluggrimace

north herald
fluid ridge
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the best thing, i just got hit with the urge to draw an oc for the art fight, NOW, when i want to finally write sthrivflabbergasted

north herald
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The artistic battle beckons thee /j

next temple
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Muse doesn't discriminate between writing and drawing monksilly

fluid ridge
north herald
fluid ridge
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that sounds more like flagsslagony

north herald
fluid ridge
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lmao

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man, the person that drew fields doesnt have an oc, i cant even repay themmonkwail

gleaming snow
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Looks great

fluid ridge
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it looks sooooooooooo great

gleaming snow
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Based team scugs

fluid ridge
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and now i cant even start a revangeslugscrem

fluid ridge
gleaming snow
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I guess I'll post some crappy drawing eventually, I can't really draw, though rivsob

gleaming snow
fluid ridge
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...

gleaming snow
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~~To be fair this was made to look like crap ~~/silly

fluid ridge
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even if it would look great, im still disappointedslughands

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but there, you drew!!!

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now do it againslugevil

gleaming snow
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I'll practice art for several years to post my glorious masterpiece of an "oc"

fluid ridge
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the skipidi toilet scug?

gleaming snow
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Skibidi slugcat

fluid ridge
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i will pateningly wait

gleaming snow
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I like your drawings by the way

fluid ridge
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???

gleaming snow
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UI for instance looks great

fluid ridge
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UI!!!

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i forgot her

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i wanted to redo her design ages ago

north herald
fluid ridge
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it would be fun to draw that thing

north herald
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no i mean

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check the spelling again monkdevious

fluid ridge
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...

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i did it again

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now them young people will never like meslugscrem

fluid ridge
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daily update log [6]
this test week is gonna be a big failuresluggrimace
all i did was scratch already written stuff and now im really all the way back at the start
im blaming that on work, like what do you mean 3 10 hour shifts in a row?!!?!?!?!

north herald
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what slughollow

fluid ridge
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you tell me

unborn vault
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So, that's where the hours meant to be put into my bridge has gone!

fluid ridge
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when i logged on last time i wanted to build it only for you to tell me you already finished itsluggrimace

unborn vault
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If you want to help, there's still the nether part of things.

fluid ridge
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ugh, all these nether portal spawns suckmonkwail

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tho i think someone already started connecting stuff throuhg the nether roof

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im not exactly sure how to do that but i will probably be the one to farm packed ice and lay out tracks

unborn vault
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I think Epochs has begun.

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My horses are now eight times faster.

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I can ride them through portals without delay now.

fluid ridge
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eyyyyy

unborn vault
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For every second in the Nether that I ride my horse, I travel roughly 113,6 blocks in the Overworld.

fluid ridge
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efficiant

fluid ridge
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daily update log [7]
well, test week is over and it was in all sort of ways a failureslughands
back into my hole i shall crawl

north herald
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Bump opportunity? monkdevious
Very unlikely slugpensive

fluid ridge
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tho i would have to forget this thread for you to get a chance

north herald
fluid ridge
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since i am now forced to write each Sunday, im proudly introducing BTSundaysslugfab
they will replace the daily update logs since im nowhere near full of writer energy from when i started and i couldnt keep up if i tried, so weekly updates it is insteadmonksilly

north herald
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Rip daily logs tho

fluid ridge
north herald
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May their legacy carry on somewhere else monksilly

next temple
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slugpensive rip daily log, only 7 consecutive streak long slugpensive ||/j monksilly ofc||

fluid ridge
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i pushed myself into a corner where i have no make a desing for swaying flags, im screwedmonksilly

fluid ridge
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so like, i have ideas for a desing, but it just doesnt feel very swaying flags to mesluggrimace

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i dont even know what they would look like, i have no image in my head at all, i just did the same i did with amany fields, where i didnt look at the drawing pad, drew a few random lines, then flipped them around until i saw sth and went from there, but while for her it did work since i think the desing fits, here that just isnt the casemonkdesperation

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maybe i can make that the engineer dude insteadslonkeyes

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do i even have a name for them? i dont even have prounouns i thinkslughands

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i do in fact do not have a name for the head of the engineers guild, i thought i had, but instead it only was the name of the Lead Engineer of the Anti-Gravitation System, who is a member of the engineers guild, but not the head. for some reason i also gave the second head of the house of coments a name and i dont even know why? ig just so the pearl doesnt sound like its going to noone, but still

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hmmmmm

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maybe i make the (somewhat important maybe?) third ancient the lead engineer of the ag. system instead? idk, i just like the name i gave that one

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and i do think the desing would fit them alright (i have like no character for them so thats whyslugscrem )

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BUT, that also meanst that i still dont have a swaying flags desing, curseshunterangy

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oh yikes, and i will have to give the engineers guild a seelrivflabbergasted

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like, it wont be as bad as the Tripartite Coalition ones, but still, i dotn wanna make more seelsmonkdesperation

fluid ridge
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sending random snip bits of stuff i wrote today for completely bump unrelated reasonsmonksilly

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fluid ridge
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Introducing the Amany work live balance:
Work yesterday from 5am to 8pm so you only have to work from 5am to 6am today and now have an extra free dayhuntercool

fluid ridge
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fluid ridge
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good question, i actually dont know

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i did tell my boss that i would stay longer so i would have to work less today wich he had no issues with, but i guess he didnt expect me till the end of the daysluggrimace

next temple
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sluggrimace well if you offered and the boss agreed then it's probably ok i guess?
-# but at least here the law dictates that overtime = monetary compensation, day off doesn't count

fluid ridge
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BTSunday [1]
-# man, daily update logs looked cooler

Chapter 11 is finally getting somewhere. Right now its sitting on a nice word count with 3k words and the opening is mostly done.
i did scrab a lot more for that chapter which is sth, but it also got replaced with a lot of other stuff, so theres thatmonksilly
but yeah, the forced writing is helping me out of writers block, FINALLY, im back huntercool

native crown
north herald
fluid ridge
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me hiding away from having to write

next temple
fluid ridge
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very good news and very bad news

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good news, im more motivated then ever to write again

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bad news, its for a completly other fandom, idk, i just got hit with insperation for a story that i like a lot. now i realyl want to write itsluggrimace

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tho i wont, i have like 7 different stories that i already started, and the new idea i got might be one of the longer story ideas i had, as much as its a bummer, i wont start another story with all that

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doesnt mean i wont spend my freetime writing notes and thinking about it tho, bts hell next chapter somewhere in 2034 i reckonslugscrem

north herald
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You write for yourselves slugheart

fluid ridge
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well yeahhuntercool

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but i also like to write for others

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and i really dont want to delay this story even more

north herald
fluid ridge
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i have a list now

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at the top, bts hell since thats already beign uploaded

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then the rango fic, cause i promised that one like 4+ montsh ago

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in between woaf breaks, that one really is just mostly for me tbh

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and then whatever i want to write the most at any given time

north herald
fluid ridge
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i know right, time goes so fast right now

north herald
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Yeah sluggrimace

fluid ridge
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its kinda surreal

fluid ridge
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i remember when i still had my schedule of at least one chapter each month, now there hasnt been any chapter for almost a month and a halfsluggrimace

north herald
gleaming snow
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I haven't posted anything at all monksilly

fluid ridge
gleaming snow
north herald
fluid ridge
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BTSunday [2]
me dizzy, me tired, me didnt write muchslugpensive
(tho i feel my motivation coming back, so that is really nice)

native crown
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yay

north herald
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You'll get there slugheart

fluid ridge
north herald
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Yeah go fight that tiredness monkcheese

fluid ridge
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get trippleseeredmonksilly

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-# (no, im definetly not runing out of ideas to defend my thread from piotr, why would you think thatsluggrimace )

unborn vault
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My logic follows no rhyme or reason.

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I think it because I simply do.

fluid ridge
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thats the waymonksilly

fluid ridge
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@north herald , i finally did your thingymonksilly

fluid ridge
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had that on the backlog for so long nowmonksilly

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finally sat down and did it

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also a great way to defend my thread against your bumpshuntercool

fluid ridge
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[insert pun about shellsmonksilly ]

north herald
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is this meant to be pebbles? slagony

fluid ridge
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if i want to protect myself against bumbs, it should at least be bts relatedsloggers

next temple
fluid ridge
fluid ridge
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hmmmmm, i actually wanted to draw moon now, but im unsure what animal she chould be that woudl fit to the bts hell plotslonkeyes

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maybe, i should just make her another hermit crab, since otherwise she wouldnt really have a can....

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uhhhh

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or maybe a turtlemonksilly

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lemmi look up refrenceces, a turtle could be fun

fluid ridge
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she old, she wrinkly, she tiredartiwh

next temple
ornate grail
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The Ancients be moving those pearls like the Sisyphus meme

fluid ridge
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last one of the day, im gonna dream of hermit crabs tonightmonksilly

fluid ridge
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writing stuff < crabsmonksilly

north herald
soft agate
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Gales will be shellless

fluid ridge
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hermit crabs without shells are cursedrivflabbergasted

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also, drawing the shell is the most fun partmonkdevious

north herald
north herald
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... Or a micro shell monksilly

soft agate
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With a bottle cap, a faux shell

fluid ridge
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they just keep appearing in my foldersloggers

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might be because im on a timer now, art fight ends on the third at 2 am and im not even halfway through my listsluggrimace

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alone today, ive finishe crab 4, completed crab 5 - 7 and sketched and roughly colored crab 8, now its time for work, get back, draw more crabs, sleep, wake up, more crabs, work, and then i have 6 more hours till i have to be done, helpmonksilly

tranquil yoke
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Karessra has become completely 🦀-brained.
There is no cure slugpensive

fluid ridge
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you. shall be. siblingshunterbarrage

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
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lets hope i actually get sth done todaysluggrimace

fluid ridge
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okay, so i think im officially stuck in writers blockrivflabbergasted
roughly 4 hours and only 200 words. all that happened is that pebbs now has a needle, wowwww.... and that was supposed to be written completly different, but whatever.
the thing is that in my head i really really like to think about writing later scenes, so i might just do that in an attempt to somehow get out of this. will be fun when i actually have to write those later scenes thensluggrimace

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man, i want to be able to write as much as when i started, what happenedmonkwail

soft agate
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That's the reason I put Mending and Havoc on an indefinite pause to concentrate on CD. Sometimes you hit that point where you are excited for a later part but despise the journey to get to there...

fluid ridge
soft agate
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How about an one shot detour then?

fluid ridge
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i actually tried that

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now im stuck on that as wellrivflabbergasted

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the only thing i was able to actually write in the last two months was the spooks to the moon chapter

soft agate
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Well, at least something.
I am currently stuck on CD for a month at 500 words and Harassment Approaching at 1600 words.

fluid ridge
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im completly stuck with anthing regarding the pebbs pov in the city arc

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i will pause chapters 11 pebbs pov probably and write the second pov first, then try again wiht pebbs

soft agate
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Maybe try retelling that section out of the overseer's point of view?

fluid ridge
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the overseer is on its own little trip right now in that section slagony

soft agate
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A trip directly to Valhalla

fluid ridge
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have moon, i have no idea what im doing anymoremonksilly

soft agate
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Your art is getting better :3

fluid ridge
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that is a big complement coming from youmonkcheese

fluid ridge
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gambling did not pay off, im 3.008 words in deptmonksilly

fluid ridge
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i wish

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3k

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i tried to call you for help but that didnt work TT

onyx furnace
fluid ridge
gleaming snow
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The darker green allows both

fluid ridge
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interestingmonksilly

onyx furnace
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wait is this for the thousands thing, or the decimal

gleaming snow
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Decimal separator

onyx furnace
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ah ok

gleaming snow
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International standard is either comma or dot, but dot is used more in literature

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So I prefer dot

onyx furnace
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the context was thousands but the USA was dot and i was like "that ain't right"

gleaming snow
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Thousands is 1, 000, 000 right?

onyx furnace
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yeah, for here anyways

gleaming snow
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I also think dot is superior for math, for instance with tuples

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(3.4, 85.89, 45.8) is a lot more readable than (3,4 , 85,89 , 45,8)

onyx furnace
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what would make that even worst is putting that into a programming language

fluid ridge
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amazing news, i am no longer in debtmonksilly
next chapter just got pushed back another 10 yearssloggers

tranquil yoke
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slugpensive I can't believe this has happened

fluid ridge
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have fun writing your debt offsloggers

unborn vault
fluid ridge
fluid ridge
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god, i always forget how good comments feel until you get one againmonkdesperation

unborn vault
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It's been so long since I actually got one...

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I miss them.

fluid ridge
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same here (i wonder whysluggrimace )

unborn vault
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Don't suddenly give me one, though, it won't feel good.

fluid ridge
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oh god, they are binge readingslugsparkle

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they left more comments

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im motivated to write nowslagony hunterfight

fluid ridge
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3k words in debt, noone is gambeling anymore, cy is asleep, and i still have a lot of time left in the day...
i guess it is timerivflabbergasted

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but first, clean the housemonksilly

unborn vault
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No.

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Clean the house later.

fluid ridge
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cant

unborn vault
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Why can't you?

fluid ridge
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if it gets dark, i cant see the dirt no moreslagony

unborn vault
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Well, your other option is to get quartered in said dark.

fluid ridge
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and sun light is still the best light sorce there is

unborn vault
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I took part in Piotr's blood, thick with writing juice.

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Well, to say it was divine is an understatement.

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I hunger for more.

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After you clean the house, if you don't, you're next.

fluid ridge
unborn vault
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Don't what? Don't write.

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I will be here to remind you in an hour.

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Maybe.

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Best of luck!

fluid ridge
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i will tell ya when im donemonkwail

unborn vault
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And pray.

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Pray to whatever deity you want.

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Just know. I'm not listening.

fluid ridge
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waitttt

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NOOOO

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they changed nightsalute

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im cryining

fluid ridge
unborn vault
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It's cuter now.

fluid ridge
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well that one is cute

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but same with smugmonk, i prefere the older onemonkdesperation

next temple
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Too serious though slugpensive

unborn vault
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Both are still top picks for Inv, I don't see them complaining.

fluid ridge
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trueeee

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tho im stalling

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to cleaning i go

unborn vault
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Then again, Inv has low standards.

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To cleaning you go.

next temple
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hunterclose 👉🧹

north herald
unborn vault
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I suppose I shall quarter more until I get you.

fluid ridge
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time to do what i should have done weeks ago if we are being fairsluggrimace

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I cantmonkdesperation

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Im just starting at the docs, and i know what i want to write, but the sentences arent forming

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this is worse then invslughands

unborn vault
gleaming snow
unborn vault
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I have the method of “slap shit until it ain’t shit”.

fluid ridge
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we do not win these

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i fell asleep

tranquil yoke
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It is true that if you never sit down and force yourself to write, you may never actually write hunterthinking

fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
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send it my way!

fluid ridge
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does messing up with cooking and burning your hand count as an excuse to skip writing, asking for a friendmonksilly

tranquil yoke
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no hunterclose (but actually yes monksilly)

fluid ridge
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well thank god i drew a certain thing yesterdaysloggers

tranquil yoke
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👀

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did I miss it?

fluid ridge
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i might just need it in, lemmi count, 5 hours and 45 minutesmonkdevious

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
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1500 words of debtmonksilly
sounds not too hard to do

north herald
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(how long were you gambling for? rivflabbergasted /lh)

fluid ridge
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like 5 hoursslagony

north herald
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the addiction IS real /lh

fluid ridge
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actually, maybe close to six?

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if the last messages in story misc are anythign to go byhunterglee

north herald
fluid ridge
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but yeah, bed time now, dont wanna upset the sleeppolice (yet), now do wesloggers

north herald
fluid ridge
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i have work tomorrowslugtraumatized

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otherwise, yes, i would agree

north herald
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well, in that case, sleep well, goodnight hunterglee

fluid ridge
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gnhunterglee

fluid ridge
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me when i spend my time watching movies instead of writing

fluid ridge
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@tranquil yoke it is completemonksilly

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(only rewatched the entire movie while drawingslagony )

tranquil yoke
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sloggers pebbles of the valley of the wind

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
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sth sth sth piotr protectionmonksilly

fluid ridge
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sleep police wont be happy with me todaymonkcheese

native crown
fluid ridge
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@tranquil yoke IM DONEmonksilly

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collect the fella (gosh i hate himhunterangy )

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the colors are still a bit off but its LATE and i still have work, i need to sleep nowslagony

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(also i might try to redo the visor, but again, not now, i need to sleepslugpensive )

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(also also, the robe. ehhhhh, still not sure about that pattern, BUT AGAIN, another timesluggrimace )

tranquil yoke
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sloggers you made this piece of shit way cooler looking than he had any right to be monksilly

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
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No Respectable Farmer (not related to bts hell AT ALL, I just like protecting this threadsluggrimace )

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ehhhh

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hes terrible

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very much hateble

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takes all the money that [insert name that I have yet to come up with] works very hard for

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tho cy is the main lore guy for him, so i will keep it at thathunterglee

fluid ridge
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new cloak plus a few changes, still not sure if im 100 % happy with the cloak, im just not sure how to change itmonksilly

north herald
fluid ridge
#

ehhhh

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not sure if that guy will ever be in a fic

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would be fun tho

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but right now hes just the iterator version of cys stardew character

north herald
#

Oh so he just kinda exists, gotcha monksilly

fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
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NRF: Did I just see you vent your exhaust for the second time this cycle? How embarrassing.
NRF: Clearly your water cycling system could be much more efficient- if you ask very nicely, I could give you a few pointers, but maybe you’re just not cut out for this kind of intensive work?”

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He’s terrible, but his neighbor is even worse! A shallow, petty thief who is driven only by money and their spiteful resentment of nearly everyone they know! monksilly

unborn vault
#

Save for the thief and partially the money part, me.

tranquil yoke
#

The dynamic basically goes:
One of the two: "I'm doing something."
The other: "Oh, well, go ahead and do that, I'm over here doing something much more productive."
"Well, won't we see about that!" (The two proceed to spend a huge length of time caught up in a meaningless competition of some kind.)
Or:
"I've done something to help you!" (This thing is blatant sabotage.)
"I can't believe you've done this! You'll regret this."
"My evil machinations lay undetected for years..." (The two proceed to spend a huge length of time trying to discreetly sabotage one another.)

unborn vault
#

“My evil machinations lay undetected for years, for I am a master of deception.”

north herald
next temple
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-# the ProZD reference monksilly

maiden bear
#

Is co op stardew fun? slugWOH

tranquil yoke
#

it is!

maiden bear
fluid ridge
north herald
ornate grail
#

-# You've got to name at least one of your livestock Ugly monksilly

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
#

@tranquil yoke
and the other, much cooler, much nicer, much richer, much more likeable, much more efficient, much better, Iterator is done slugpupartist
(im not biased, who said thathunterangy )

fluid ridge
#

-# well thanksslugwhy

ornate grail
#

Very humble slagony

fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
north herald
#

roasting compilation slagony /lh

fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
#

We get just a little monksilly

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
#

NRF: For what reason do we acquire wealth if not to share it? I am nothing if not a font of generosity!

fluid ridge
#

SAE: If generosity is nothing but feeding your own ego, then you might just be right!

tranquil yoke
#

If we go on about this any longer, one of us is actually going to have to write this fic, you know that? monksilly

north herald
#

the farming-inspired itty fic slugWOH

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
#

damn it, thats some good motivation

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but i still have sooo much left slugscrem

tranquil yoke
#

Well, hmm… it’s so difficult to find that motivation to start another project, but if I were under some kind of obligation, wouldn’t that be different? monkdevious
(My devious plot to make BTShell manifest another chapter is coming to fruition)

fluid ridge
north herald
#

there is a deadline for the next BTShell chapter or is it sth else? monksilly

fluid ridge
#

damn it cy, you're giving the people hopehunterclose /j

north herald
tranquil yoke
north herald
#

daaaamn, quite quick if i say so myself

fluid ridge
north herald
#

a motivating factor is really helpful for getting back on track tho, i had to force myself a bit with a few things but i'm back up to a decent writing pace hunterglee just don't burn yourselves out or sth monksilly

fluid ridge
#

i will trymonksilly

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tho i REALLY need to sleep now, work starts in less then 8 hours and i only just came home from another shift 2 hours agorivflabbergasted

#

GN!!!slugimjust

maiden bear
#

Cy also told me to have a draft by Sunday huntereyebrow

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Where’s your draft cy!

north herald
maiden bear
#

I want a draft by Sunday monksilly

#

/j

maiden bear
#

WHAT

#

noooo he’s too powerful

north herald
maiden bear
#

Buddy system slugWOH

north herald
#

honestly i'm just standing by to get a few things checked out and then the floodgates shall be reopened

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-# until i run out of the backlog again slagony

maiden bear
#

Afsdgdds i can’t let HFISH get more behind

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I think this chap might push it over 70k words sluggrimace

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(Total)

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I guess it already is 70k w wish oneshot

gleaming snow
#

:O

tranquil yoke
#

Sunday just seems like a good deadline day. Maybe I’ll try and have something done by then, just to not seem a hypocrite monksilly

maiden bear
#

(But only if you want to monksilly)

fluid ridge
#

work D:

fluid ridge
#

work oversloggers

#

now writer workslugwhy

north herald
tranquil yoke
#

karessra will be writing their chapter today after I beat them at poker

fluid ridge
#

bs

#

im winning

tranquil yoke
#

with no complaints

fluid ridge
#

and there will be another 3 year delay

tranquil yoke
#

and we will be getting a framework for the next rango fic chapter

fluid ridge
gleaming snow
tranquil yoke
#

"You're promising people stuff that I cannot hold!"
-Karessra, after making those promises themself and then losing at poker monksilly

fluid ridge
#

slandering my name again, i seehunterclose

ornate grail
fluid ridge
fluid ridge
#

slugWOH damn, thats a nice amount of commentsslonkeyes

fluid ridge
#

okay, tiny break over, back to the writing grind i gosluggrimace

fluid ridge
#

to be fair, its going pretty well so far

#

i only changed the script a 7th time agian, but heyslagony

fluid ridge
#

@tranquil yoke collect your status report since i dont think i can write any more.
I wrote around 2, 7k words, Pebbles' pov is like 200 words away from being done, and the second pov still needs to be made.
I did try to push through there at the end but i think after all this im too drained to finishslugscrem
but hey, probably a single 1h writing session should be enough to finish the chaptermonksilly

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
#

AND grammerly was turned off

#

editign will be a nightmareslughands

tranquil yoke
#

And... I might have something to share with you featuring a couple of silly Iterator OC's, when you're feeling up for it. monksilly

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
#

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

gleaming snow
#

Well done!

fluid ridge
#

i am free!!!!!

#

how did past me do that at least twice a weekslugempty

fluid ridge
#

New Cy deadline to finish the chapter is till Wednesday, surely that will workmonksilly

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
onyx furnace
fluid ridge
next temple
#

Happy birthday! 🎉monkyippee

maiden bear
#

BIRTDAY sloggers

#

happy bday!!

soft agate
#

Happy bday :3

fluid ridge
#

thank you, thank you, and thank yourivplead 🩵

north herald
#

Wait oh shit?? Happy birthday! slugcheerstothat

unborn vault
#

Happy birthday!

native crown
#

happy birfday hunterglee

ornate grail
#

HAPPY BIRTHDAY??!?!

fluid ridge
#

THANK YOU; THANK YOU; THANK YOU; AND THANK YOUmonkdesperation rivplead

gleaming snow
#

Happy birthday once again! lizblueblep

onyx furnace
#

We just gonna wish them all the birthdays?

fluid ridge
#

PEBBLES POV DONEEEEEEEEhunterbarrage

#

it onyl needs some more heavy editing

#

like, really heavy editing but whatevermonksilly

#

now for the second pov and then the chapters is finally as done as it can be for the momenthunterglee

gleaming snow
#

OMG

#

Aaaa, excited

fluid ridge
#

so bad newsmonksilly

#

even when i finish it it will probably still take a while till i post itslugwhy

#

gotta check that the consistency doenst end up in the gutter againslugscrem

maiden bear
#

Quality takes time

fluid ridge
#

i just dont wanna have to go back and rewrite everything againsluggrimace

north herald
#

New BtShell soon??? sloggers

fluid ridge
north herald
#

-# New BtShell soon? slugwhat stares at docs /j /lh

fluid ridge
#

im definitely not running out of ideas for bump protectionmonksilly

north herald
#

Comically disproportionate head slagony /lh

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-# how am I supposed to bump it if there is just enough activity here slagony /lh

north herald
ornate grail
#

Peak comedy is drawing people as their avatars slugwoke

fluid ridge
#

i was actually debating to draw the jojo fighting pose, but im not drawing thatslagony

north herald
fluid ridge
ornate grail
#

If someone casually whips out an accurate irl sketch I would shit myself slagony

#

Tbh I think we all would

fluid ridge
#

i would log off the internet and never come back

north herald
fluid ridge
gleaming snow
#

Gotta have some self confidence lizblueblep

north herald
#

"you missed a detail" monksilly

soft agate
fluid ridge
soft agate
#

Good luck finding 10+ years ago me (don’t say anything, Drymm, I have changed >.>)

gleaming snow
#

It's a cool painting, though

soft agate
#

I drew it and yes it is from me… can’t even be proud of something that started my career over here

fluid ridge
#

oh be proud of it!!! its greatslugevil

#

(just rules and stuffslugpensive )

gleaming snow
#

Yeah, it's good. It's just important to be careful with stuff like that. Also rules and stuff, sorry.

native crown
gleaming snow
fluid ridge
#

better save then sryrivapprove

soft agate
gleaming snow
#

Really good painting, though. Impressive.

gleaming snow
soft agate
# gleaming snow Wait, how long have you been arting? 10+ years? <:slugWOH:695022454266921000>

Life long fascination. My first art exhibition I had with the young age of 1 in our local newspaper shop :p

In art class in gymnasium, with exactly that painting, I realized I had the masochistic requirements to properly learn art. It was on and off sketching until I finished school in 2017 when I bought my first graphic drawing screen with my very first salary. Tried myself on animation till Jan 2019 when I finally embraced digital art for real. So 5 years actual learning art + 21 years of slowly nurturing a life long fascination until it bloomed

fluid ridge
#

they have art classes in the gymnasium???

gleaming snow
#

Oh, neat

soft agate
fluid ridge
#

ohhhhhh

#

all i got in art classes was art block and a bunch of theroysluggrimace

soft agate
#

I learned there also how to sculpt

fluid ridge
#

!!!

#

okay thats cool

#

we did some wood cutting and that "buchdruck" thing

#

no wait, not that

#

"linoldruck" thats it

soft agate
#

My final exam in that major

#

Sadly doesn’t exist anymore

fluid ridge
#

a shame

soft agate
#

As it didn’t got baked afterwards

#

I do have a few others at home however. I can share them when I am home. One concrete sculpture and one clay sculpture

#

Will send them then in misc

fluid ridge
soft agate
#

Art class was fun. Grade wise however for everyone but me monknervous

I was the only one my teacher graded accurately while others got best grades for simply participating. Means I had the worst final grades of all… despite having done the most

#

Found it unfair, but hey. At least I can say my good grades were genuine

soft agate
#

The portrait for example got an … average… after I put in another half year reworking everything I raised that grade to a good

fluid ridge
#

my art teacher was fine ig

#

got lucky most of the time with the only exception being the final exam which i almost failedmonksilly

soft agate
#

Heh

gleaming snow
#

This is why I like stuff like math. You're either correct and have sufficient logic, or you're not

#

Accurately grading stuff like writing and art is a lot harder.

soft agate
#

Final exam I failed nearly as well. The written part. Write an interpretation about a building from an artist

#

We had a huge focus on architecture

fluid ridge
soft agate
#

It was. Just look up Peter Zumtor Thermalbad

fluid ridge
#

blegh

#

okay, thats terrible

soft agate
#

And my final exam was an in-depth interpretation and analysis of the way he built it

#

Was one of two possible candidates for that exam. The other one I was able to interpret well, this one…has less of a historical aspect to ramble about

fluid ridge
#

thank god i chose realschule over gymnasium, i just had to learn theroy till it bled out of my ears and interpretate some drawings

soft agate
#

Fair

maiden bear
#

There’s your boy

fluid ridge
maiden bear
#

They’re brothers and whyyyy are you awake

native crown
maiden bear
#

Hmm?

#

Boombox is disappointed in you

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
#

but i went to bed pretty much after that message, i promiseeesluglove

fluid ridge
#

@tranquil yoke @maiden bear it is completemonksilly

north herald
fluid ridge
#

gotta keep boombox and Boombox savehuntercool

gleaming snow
fluid ridge
north herald
gleaming snow
#

Have you found the baby yet?

north herald
#

"Workplace accident" or fully intentional? monksilly

gleaming snow
#

He's so precious slugaww

fluid ridge
north herald
gleaming snow
#

The name is a lie, don't trust him

#

baby would never hurt you

fluid ridge
north herald
gleaming snow
#

Yeah...

fluid ridge
#

well they never killed mesluglove

gleaming snow
#

Remember to treat him well

fluid ridge
#

only cy

north herald
#

I have trauma after my team got decimated by it one too many times slagony

#

Sidenote mineshaft layout it HELL

gleaming snow
#

Remember, carry it back to your ship

#

Good emotional support

gleaming snow
north herald
#

Picture yourselves in this situation:

gleaming snow
#

Go in there solo is scary

north herald
#

Sitting on terminal

#

Team has decent loot but you spot monsters

fluid ridge
north herald
#

Shout an order to EVAC

#

One dude gets in elevator, other is hunkering down

fluid ridge
north herald
#

Elevator dude presses button

fluid ridge
#

i say right, they go left

north herald
#

Fucking

fluid ridge
#

i say turn around, they keep going

north herald
#

RED DOT WALKS INTO ELEVATOR AS IT CLOSES

fluid ridge
north herald
#

THERE IS NOW A THUMPER IN THE ENTRANCE ROOM THAT JUMPS THE OTHER GUY WHO HAD HIS WALKIE TALKIE OFF

gleaming snow
#

Have you visited umbrion?

fluid ridge
north herald
gleaming snow
#

Take out the apparatus hunterknowing

north herald
#

Have not been to Titan and the 2nd hard moon, as well as artifice

north herald
#

I was on terminal and I send my fellas in there

#

I was like

fluid ridge
north herald
#

"If you see the apparatus, snatch it and go back :)"

north herald
gleaming snow
#

Apparatus is worth a lot of money

north herald
#

My team is half-decent slagony

gleaming snow
#

Titan is an experience

north herald
gleaming snow
#

Worth the money, though

#

Artifice is the best moon for loot, though

north herald
#

Gotta sell, like, the whole team's kidneys to get there /j /lh

fluid ridge
#

why buy a new moon when you can have boombox thohunterglee

gleaming snow
#

Walking around with a boombox while everyone is dead is such a vibe

north herald
#

Go to new moon to get more boomboxes slugwoke

#

Also fun fact, we were to the 1st hard moon, the one with the short walk from ship to facility

#

Eclipsed but we paid so gotta do it

#

Not sure if anything spawns so i'm all laid back

#

Suddenly me and my buddy hear a noise and start to book it to the entrance

#

I am halfway through the interaction to enter when a dog eats me

#

The last thing I saw was ALL CLEAR through the signal translator slagony

fluid ridge
#

well im the most useful to the team, trust

#

example, i open the doors when some creature is outside after we have a lot of scrab, creature enters, we all diehunterglee

north herald
gleaming snow
#

I collect bee hunterglee

north herald
#

Somebody closed the ship doors in my face when 2 of us were outside and one of us got eaten by a giant slagony

fluid ridge
#

especially when i get my hands on a horn

fluid ridge
north herald
gleaming snow
#

Drop them on the side of the ship, not inside please...

north herald
gleaming snow
north herald
#

Lmao certainly beats bringing it in, closing door, teleporting somebody that got left behind and booking it out of there

maiden bear
#

Karessra what happened to you? rivplead who would hurt you?

#

( do it for them ❤️ ❤️ )

maiden bear
#

huntereyebrow nah, that doesn’t sound like me

fluid ridge
#

something BTShell related in this thread? yeah, i cant believe it eitherhunterglee

ornate grail
#

Bebble hunterglee

fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
#

I, for one, would be honored to receive a slugsparkle, a slugWOH, and/or a monklove on anything I posted! slugevil

#

(I really dig the style with this piece, by the way. Was there any particular inspiration for the two-tone style here?)

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
#

also my initial idea looked really bad so i started completly over

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
#

(addiction)

tranquil yoke
#

Only a spoonful monksilly

tranquil yoke
#

Who’s that guy that’s got the main character coming out of his hand?

gleaming snow
#

A loser monksilly

#

/j

fluid ridge
#

some unimportant side character

fluid ridge
maiden bear
#

cool style

#

makes me wanna try something similar saintsmirk

fluid ridge
tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
#

I did

#

work starts at 6

#

cant sleep

#

BUT

#

insperation stuck

#

so im trying to writesluggrimace

#

focus on trying

tranquil yoke
#

sloggers I worry for your health with the hours you keep (my hypocrisy knows no bounds), but I can only hope you get some good writing done!

fluid ridge
#

its depressing how quick someone can loose all inspiration and motivationslugpensive
(i will try to finish that darn pov nonethelesshunterclose )

tranquil yoke
#

You can do it slugpawshake

unborn vault
fluid ridge
#

i still have half an hour to be fair, but i give upmonkdesperation

#

im sure roughly 400 words are enough for nowslugscrem

fluid ridge
#

not for me, but i digress slugpensive

#

it will be just a problem for future me again it seemsmonksilly

#

maybe i can finish when i come back from work

#

i surely can think about how to write the chapter during workslonkeyes

#

i will make something workhunterglee

fluid ridge
#

theres like a 20% chance that i will write either tomorrow or the day after. the odds are not great but better then nothingslugwhy

north herald
#

Good luck hunterglee

fluid ridge
#

The moment where one small realisation makes you rewrite the entire second half of your chapter againsluggrimace
lets just say that chapter 11 was completed for a moment, now it isnt slagony

onyx furnace
maiden bear
ornate grail
#

That's just 3am, that's rookie numbers for them monksilly /j

maiden bear
#

They were still awake at my 2am hunterangy

#

and we allllll said we would go to bed

#

Hmmmmm

north herald
#

Somebody is getting accused of sleep evasion today rivevil /lh /silly

fluid ridge
#

i went to bed at 7am like promisedsluglove

maiden bear
#

And woke up when huntereyebrow

fluid ridge
#

11amhuntercool

#

good enough if you ask mehunterglee

maiden bear
#

Four hours slugscrem

#

Noooo

fluid ridge
#

Yesssssss

maiden bear
#

Gonna make a pact with cy to not keep you awake tonight

#

I need a “stay the fuck asleep” image…

fluid ridge
#

b- b- but lethalrivplead

maiden bear
#

I slept six hours and I feel like garbage hunterangy

fluid ridge
#

should have slept more i reckonmonksilly

maiden bear
#

So so true

fluid ridge
#

this chapter will never be finishedhunterangy

north herald
gleaming snow
tranquil yoke
#

(I told them to go to bed a full 4 hours before they did, you can’t put this on me)

maiden bear
fluid ridge
#

i would have gone to bed like the responsible person that i amhunterglee

maiden bear
#

Suuuuure

#

You did not respect the image

fluid ridge
#

i did!!!

#

i slept, then woke up and came back, thats allsluglove

maiden bear
#

You did not respect the image initially

#

Cy derailed its power

fluid ridge
#

exactly! blame him, not memonksilly

maiden bear
#

You both are to blame hunterangy

gleaming snow
#

You sure are some responsible people monksilly /lh /silly

fluid ridge
#

bumping this thread with art instead of just writing...
will this story ever finishmonksilly

tranquil yoke
#

I like how you did the color a lot. Is it like a colored pencil brush or something to that effect?

fluid ridge
ornate grail
#

Best character sloggers overseer

north herald
fluid ridge
#

surely this will work...monksilly

ornate grail
#

Words to live by slugpraise

gleaming snow
fluid ridge
#

surelyhunterglee

gleaming snow
#

I'm reading this cool math book hunterglee

fluid ridge
#

math is just that coolhuntercool

maiden bear
ornate grail
fluid ridge
#

time to go beyond the shell (laugh plshunterclose ) and start my fourth rewrite of chapter 11monksilly

fluid ridge
#

and the 100th script changeslagony

#

(actually, probably more than that but hey)

maiden bear
#

Cyyyy

#

Stop them

fluid ridge
#

NOOOO

#

its a good change, i swearmonkdesperation

maiden bear
#

cyyyyy

fluid ridge
maiden bear
#

Man’s busy for two days and you do this smh

fluid ridge
#

cy is gonemonkwail
cant even ask him for his opinion about the changes slugpensive

maiden bear
#

Two days!!!

fluid ridge
#

thats it, banan, you are now the new cy! /j

maiden bear
#

Okay okay

#

I can do this

fluid ridge
#

you only have to proofread 100 different stories and give opinions on all of them while writing a lot yourself in the meantime, of which all is the highest of quality, no issuesmonksilly

maiden bear
#

oh is that all

fluid ridge
#

you may also finish this story if you feel bravehunterglee

#

(because i do notsluggrimace )

fluid ridge
#

time to ruin this beautiful numberslugwhy

#

goodbye pretty word countslugscrem

fluid ridge
#

i knowslugpensive

maiden bear
#

Man if only Cy could write all our stories, writing would be eaaaasy

fluid ridge
#

he has the entire script, im sure he will managehuntercool

north herald
gleaming snow
north herald
#

Also good luck with the rewrite hunterglee

maiden bear
#

Where’s that writing commission forum post /j

fluid ridge
gleaming snow
#

Doesn't matter if what you write is crap as long as it is yours monksilly

gleaming snow
maiden bear
#

Hey raven, say I gave you three whole dollars, would you finish HFISH for meeee? monksilly

fluid ridge
fluid ridge
maiden bear
maiden bear
fluid ridge
fluid ridge
maiden bear
maiden bear
gleaming snow
fluid ridge
fluid ridge
maiden bear
#

I can bake you some bread rivplead

fluid ridge
#

guesss im going back to the writer depths againslugpensive

gleaming snow
fluid ridge
#

thx! i hope to not disappoint with this writing sessionartiwh

north herald
#

Have my writing juice too, don't need it for now monksilly

north herald
north herald
#

I do already have like 2k words on the Baro fic lmao

gleaming snow
#

Piotr deserves his break, he finished his first fic hunterglee slugWOH

maiden bear
#

He has joined the ranks of story chat legends

fluid ridge
#

someday, i shall toosaintstare

#

(i hope)

gleaming snow
#

99% of writers quit before they finish their fic monksilly /lh
You have written a lot, though, amany hunterglee
70k words.

fluid ridge
#

70k words all nice and good but i rather read a short but complete story over an unfinished one

maiden bear
#

We’ll get there though huntercool

fluid ridge
#

just lemmi finish pleaseeee

maiden bear
north herald
fluid ridge
maiden bear
#

stop editing slagony

fluid ridge
#

but i need to edit while i have the chance

#

two more dayshunterglee

maiden bear
#

You’ll always have the chance

maiden bear
north herald
# fluid ridge lmao, dont worry

I'd need to think about stuff, but I did futureproof it, though I may have some other stuff to be made before than, and I have taken up sth else too so I need to get stuff done hunterglee

fluid ridge
#

ehhhhhh

#

going of the rail for a sec

#

since when does dc ask if your human if you wanna dm someone privat for the first time???

maiden bear
#

Probably a random thing, or maybe your account’s been flagged?

#

I’ve never seen it

fluid ridge
#

huhhhh????

maiden bear
#

Could be new

fluid ridge
#

what do you mean ive been flaggedrivflabbergasted

maiden bear
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Well, karessra, are you human? huntereyebrow

fluid ridge
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was it the movie streaming slagony

fluid ridge
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tho dc doenst have to know that

maiden bear
fluid ridge
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okay, all clear now

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and i distracted myself from writing AGAIN. no wonder ive been stuck on this chapter for so long

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next attempt, here i come

fluid ridge
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anddddddd

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nothing new was writtenslugwhy

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only more editingslugscrem

native crown
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and I missed the bidding wars

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I'd pay so much to write just one fewer essay

north herald
native crown
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My professor checks literally every essay with GPT-0

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and chatGPT's knowledge is sadly limited and incorrect when it comes to Neoliberalism in Latin America

gleaming snow
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It's also academic dishonesty which is a really bad and scummy thing to do. You could get expelled as well slugempty

maiden bear
gleaming snow
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Of course. Tree is a good fella hunterglee

north herald
north herald
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They really are Superior At Everything
-# even dying slagony /silly /lh

next temple
onyx furnace
fluid ridge
fluid ridge
north herald
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-# wait, hm, since you have an OC now... slonkeyes

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-# ... at some point...

fluid ridge
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face glitched out, they be looking madslagony

ornate grail
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It do that sometimes slagony

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Weapons slugcheerstothat

fluid ridge
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little gift for when they meet no respectable farmermonkdevious

tranquil yoke
fluid ridge
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i think what you meant to say was, wow, is that sae being a god gamer and only blowing themselves up cause they took pity on the poor scavs that would otherwise had not chance against themmonkcheese

tranquil yoke
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Surely… hunterknowing

unborn vault
tranquil yoke
unborn vault
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Right arm’s a bit too long.