#Beyond the Shell
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do that pls, it would be funny
couldnt have been, afterall cy was already working himself to death with his 400+ changes
I can't even multithread reading messages and working cause my dinky phone does not let me 
one after the other, dont stress it
Yeah no it just needed a gentle restart
"just give em some time
"
"Come on, do something"
Okay uh issue, this won't show me where I finished after closing it
Uhh
If you see me suggesting a --- inbetween lines just ignore that
got it
pffff- okay, who was that
Maybe sharing this here wasn't the best idea 
i will live
either that or the scav, and that guy was- hmmmm, lets say a piece of shit
that seems like sth he would do
Looks like John hunter but arti
damn, that was quick
Also, going through the comments and seeing the 1 trillion comments left by cy 
oh yeah, those were a lot
Wait so you're gonna just copy the applied changes into AO3, or...?
thats how i do it
Oh
???
i wrote that sk section months ago
didnt even rember that part
Call it irony or something 
it is fitting
||that also means when i will kill arti off the next one to get the mask must stab her repeatedly as well||
But you won't do that, right? 
Right? 
||pebbles will be fed up with her and kill her, assuming position of chieftain||
||then it will be the overseer|| 
or maybe everyone
also yes, tho if i remember correctly i mixed up Buddhism with Hinduism in that example
||the rot||
Wait I made a typo in my comment
||as in kill the rot or make it kill everyone?||

||make it kill pebbles|| 
you officially lose your proofreader licence
||make him walk into it "for science" or sth|| /j
||sure, i can do that, rot kills pebbles in chapter, ehhhhh, lets say 27
||
Well I should be in writer jail anyways so whatdoyaknow /j
How will that affect the fic?
First overseer-centric fic? 
i will just clone pebbles or sth like that
Write up the most bullshit cycle explanation to revive him a chap later
perfect
and he gets revived with saints ascension powers
and then kills everyone
besides ui
the end
What prompted such an aggressive reaction 
Or maybe he just wanted to stay dead? 
Fuuuuu
proofreader licence revoked
Okay have fun with loader and louder
/j
Yes officer /j
I need to stop opening up spoilers all willy milly, even if I'm not reading these stoires
no worries, that thing is faker then fake
tho that is some good advise a lot of people would need to hear 
||pondering if I should be "that guy" and point out mistakes in messages or would that be rude/disrespectful
||
Oh also forgot to say but ||damn scav king really had an ego lmao||
||and you wrote the elite really well, i hated him right away||
@fluid ridge Lovely chapter!
glad to hear
first day on break and the first thing i get to see is that half of my notes for chapter 11 are just gone
What, how 
no clue
i still do know all the stuff i had planned, but writing the notes again is a pain
Where did you even keep this stuff for it to disappear 
google docs, as for how it disapeared...
ehhhh
maybe after i split the text and copy pasted it over to chapter 10, then split it again and put it over to 11 i deleted the end section without noticing?
i have no other idea how else this woudl have happend tbh
You could try checking past versions of that doc
thats possible?
uhhhh
perfect, thx, lets hope it works
YES!!!
got it back
wow, that was easier then expected, thanks a lot
Delayed response but uhhhh

pebbles might be the main character but we all now who the actual best character is
Pebbles having a depression episode in the background 
bros mad that he isnt the fan favourite
It's hard being an iterator in an overseer-centric fic
/j
im really wasting my time right now instead of actually writing
I still think you need to reevaluate the meaning of "break" (I wonder how long will this image take to load) 
Oh god 
Has bioengineering went too far?
im actually removing the shrimps face right now
wait a sec
if anyone needs an overseer whose iterator likes shrimps, here ya go
||secret boss of Rainy Game??
||
Gigaseer
Rainy games final boss
instead of the squirl event, a boss fight with the gigantic shrimpseer
Ok, your wish is my command
Ohh, you are getting better :3
pfff, the shripm isnt mine
tho its definetly getting easier to draw with mouse
Drawing pad status: no drawing pad
||"it's" btw|| 
i never use apostrophes in here, too much work
You should. Training
sounds fun
||or just make it turn out that she's chilling and doing better than pebbles
|| /j
If I reboot it it shows a new message but it disappears a split second later?
Oh
The ghost of past messages is haunting me 
putting the crew in here now casue i can
The pictures of the past
It has finally arrived
Eyyyy! 
only one problem, i havent drawn with a pen in months, i will probably have to relearn everything from scratch
why cant you just automitically be good at sth with no practice
Do I have to pull out the sisyphus gif?
sure, why not
okay, only took one hour but the screen is working, now im only stuck on my desktop and cant get into any programs
it is
so on my pc screen im in discord and krita etc but on my drawing sceen im stuck on my desktop
Ah that's a display thing for sure
Try dragging krita outside of your main screen
Should be left or right I think
That's the display setting windows defaults to iirc
You can also skip this dilly-dally by switching to "duplicate" or sth like that
all of this is so weird
but it works
time to practice drawing again with a pen, its been a while
Nah that's just standard windows behavior if you mean the desktop
oh its just weird for me, im not used to any of this
the switch to pc for me is not too long ago as well, and now im just all over the place
Thrown into the deep end?
pretty much
Happens i guess
well, time to draw waves' spacy can, any other details i can work with?
does she use water like all the other iterators btw?
not sure if evaporating water in space makes even sense, but i think i could give her pipes or sth like that
Basically, how I thought this up so far...
(Gonna move this to the thread)
makes sense
now my eraser turned into a normal pen, man that stuff is not going easy on me
||Chieftain was almost sympathetic, but his motivation seemed to be for himself rather than for the actual well-being of others... And not only he decided to play god by pretending to have powers that he didn't own, he disregarded the one who gave him that privilege in the first place. Karma is a full cycle. ||
||Yeah, that's not actually how Karma works since it's just literally 'action and reaction' but that's not poetic||
Amusing that BShell is just a few thousand words shy of being on the first page of longest RW fics. 2000 words behind disconnected
Huh? 
currently the 21st longest rain world fic
still not a 'long' fic by AO3 standards
first page of all fics of AO3 starts at 8.6 million and goes to 3 million at spot 20
It is "long" tho, trust me 
What the fu-
yep
eyyyyyyy
||perfect, i saw some people sympathize with him which is fair ig since they saw his perspective but that was the intend, 10/10
||
||the one who waits
||
||I see no god up here
Other than me!||
@ornate grail sry for the ping but i got rid of the toolbar on the right with the color weel and the layers and i cant get it back, how do you do that again
Screenshot? 👀
okay wait
heeee
i dont get it
had the same problem as before where i dont have the bar at the top and did what piotr said and now its there again but not the x square and minus again???
@north herald help
What, how
im actually going mad here
the toolbar was gone, wanted to make a screenshot for drym but saw the bar at the top was gone so i did what you said only for the toolbar to reappear but not the top bar
Try tab or esc??? I'm gonna be real i'm not a master of krita i just googled that stuff
whyyyyyy
Easy fix
it does switch between color weel there and not but the minus etc is still missing
soulwing!!!!
save me
If it works the same as other sites you should be able to edit the section. Search for ... on the color picker and click through the given options
Wait, what minus?
Oh, that is a different window
In the drop-down on the upper side go to window and click through the disabled tools
Uhh so idk if that will do it but try ctrl + alt + m or f?
both no
How do you even keep on doing that???
/nm
Tab?
So I guess you can't drag the window either?
i dont knowwww
I'll brb
nope, same as before, the combination you gave me earlier now switches between color weel/layers, there and not there
When in doubt
does the same
Ctrl shift f?
eyyyy
i restarted, did that and now its back
why it didnt work like before i dont even wanna know, but i have a feeling that wont be the last time
Not sure if that helps but glad that it's dealt with
-# for now at least
Let's goooo 
For the future! If you've added new dockers and want to save a new configuration, go to Window > Workspace > New Workspace..., and pick a name you can distinguish from the default options :D
Then whenever Krita does that, you can just pull it up from the workspace menu
its really about time i watch a 5 hours tutoriel for everything krita has to offer
Just wing it
(not actual advice)
may not be actual advice but will be the way i will try it
In my experience, watching a tutorial that long will just confuse the hell out of you 
just restart and press teh combo a bunch
Yes wing it 
That's how I use blender 
cant make me more confused then i already am, rightttt
Or just go to the settings and disable all the shortcut combos 
should really do that, i dont even use them
@ornate grail and here i am again, srryyyy
but is there a way to mark everything drawn on a layer so i can paint it all over with the same color?
Shift backspace
That should fill layer with color - Make sure to lock transparency first with the checkerboard-looking icon
oh god, pebbles has been overdrawn
Do you see the lock transparency option?!! 
ahhhh, now it workes, perfect
Eyy 
yep, just didnt have that before, thx!!!
pebbles can no be pink
or at least his skech
i need my color coordination, arit sketch red, os sketch cyan, pebbles skectch pink, perfect
what is worse then one hand???
CORRECT
two hands
and what is worse then two hands?
These two hands not just existing but also interacting with each other
ah yes, hands
PEBBLES AND ARTI HANDHOLD???
/j
I'm not much of an art critic 
Though if you want then sure
it will kinda count as a spoiler for a chapter which im still deciding if i will write or not so i will just put the spoiler filter over it
Hmm interesting
||Overseer flashlight
||
the only reason im evne so split on if i will write the chapter or not is because the only reason i even want to write it is because i had that image in my head
||hm, dark spaces, overseer as flashlight, walking together to not get lost?||
EXACTLYYY
i want that so bad
||I haven't read BSHell yet but given that Arti and Pebb aren't the friendliest of friends, maybe you can have one holding to the other's wrist instead?
||
Curious how your drawing changes with the tablet, with pebbles having a big head now 
||Kind of dragging the other along
||
||i will just let arti hold his sleeve or sth like that, yeah
||
its a sketch
tho it will probably stay that way
i have no real scale which i follow
||"I wanted to come along but that does not mean I will handhold
"||
Oh no it does look cool tho
||Lore accurate reason to not draw hands interacting
||
perfect
Also the overseer just growing out of his arm
/j
oh yeah
im just hoping i can cover up that section with light
dont wanna draw more hands then neccecary
and arti only gets one arm as well
im reallly taking all the short cuts i can get
Other hand holding bomb for unspecified reasons 
You can also try drawing it like he's holding it like this it will totally work trust me /j
you really want that picture, dont you
perhaps someday...
i think that works better right?
for once i got rid of those terrible legs
and arti even has to arms now
I thought "man those legs look weird, how do they even look in the 1st one?" Followed by "oh" 
LMAO
they were baddddd
||she's like a kid in a store trying to get their parent to get something, pulling on their clothes
||
tho those arent that much better
They look pretty good 
I think I prefer those tho
Hunterglee is breaching containment 
She's armed
||"no funny moves"
"You realize i am immune to explosives, ye?"
"
"||
after that hell of an iterator structure ive forgotten how fun colouring in simple stuff is
so far so good
||"Pebbles can we get McDonald's after this"
||
||"what was I thinking going with this pink idiot, now we walking around some weird areas"||
let the not fun part begin
Ooooh, overgrown?
probably not, tho im not sure so far
there will be some sort of plant live but not too much i rekon
tho i do not like the room layout so far
not that there is supposed to bee seen much but still
Just make it dark almost everywhere and problem solved 
thats the plan
Also, I think my brain might be slightly fucked, i can be watching some youtube, guy says something, my first thought is "where would i put commas in that sentence" 
Is this fuckin writer brainrot
the comma placement is just too strong to ignore!!!
how's the sentence structured, where do the commas go??
the numbers mason, what do they mean?
sth like that probably
COOKING 👁️
more like overcooking, most of it wont be visible later on
Slight eyestrain for now but it's just the sketch, ye? 
ye
we're slowly getting somewhere, tho i have no clue what to do with the floor
@ornate grail ehhhhh
i have a big problem
i just closed the file with my characters unloaded and forgot to save it under a krita file
now like most of my imagi is gone
is that savable in any way
all my layers are gone too
help
Wait, like, a different file with the characters?
Oh god 
i just had the layer hidden and saved it like thata
and now everything that was hidden is gone and all the layers are fused
and i was working on the background so almost everything is gone

NOOOO
casue i saved it under png before to send it in here
Always work as kra 
... did you at any point save it as .kra?
Do Export to keep it as kra! Like saving a copy
then krita began to bug and the brush strokes were all delayed so i just quickly saved adn restarted
help
O h f u c k
nooooo

Export, Export, Export 
i dont even know how to export
I think I can cut it back into layers if you let me 
Huh I always save as kra and export PNGs
It's below "save as"
and i usually save under .kra, that was an exception before so i could quickyl send in the progress
Yes, this is what I mean 
But export is literally just as fast 
what shall i do
A really fucking sour life lesson
Give image
Yep, whatever you've got
So basically for saving, save -> .kra, for sharing, export -> .png or your preferred format
Funny name 
that was the inspiration
those old horror posters with a lot of black all around and a bright light sorce
arti wasnt even supposed to be in the picture tbh
just pebbs adn the os
but when i came up with the idea i realized that it should probably align with the story so arti came into the picture
||- Pebbles after departing for the Houses|| /j
I'm getting the Pebb and Arti from this image for you
Unfortunately, if you've shaded them, I can't get that back without having the image
@fluid ridge Do you have a png with more progress or is that the best one? 
its the best, ive overwritten the image with every safe, and in that one i just had most of the stuff unlodaded
No problem! 
but the one thing i had loaded that makes it even worse is the old sketch, i dont even know why i had that over teh characters
It's okay, give me like 15 min or so 
thanks a lot, your a live saviour
i will try to get the layers for my backgroudn started up in the meantime
nahhhh, my playlist just started the chicory depression theme, that is a sign
It knows
/j
The 5 stages of grief
@fluid ridge These are gonna be your two new layers, are these good?
that will work, thanks a lot
Back in action 
Hope it turns out alright 
well i did loose a lot of my layers but at least i still have the characters
omg, drymm!!! thx so much, your a live saviour
platonic marige when
Eyyy!! Glad it worked!
Platonic marriage 
now back to work to recover what was lost, also note to self to NEVER save under anyhting other than .kra
Yeah, save only .kra, export in anything
lesson learnt the hard way
Less likely to forget now 
Plus silly Trellis, specially crafted for you 
Trellis Through Pensiveness 
||yeah, about that||
The local group broke her, she is no longer a brazen troll but now a sad gamer
... well, IF the information I have recieved exactly 4 months ago is right
i read those tags, i have no hope
Tags one thing, the fact it's tagged mature as opposed to gen or teen and up?
we are fucked
wait shit did i tag my thing right? Is gen a good tag?
Oh, I tagged it that for heavy ||die|| themes 
Can't be too careful 
Amany, did you see the newest ACTS, there is some Trellis 👀
lmao, and im still sittign on that minor injuri tag after certain scenes
Just wondering what are the limits for gen, teen up, etc
OHHH??? i still have to read it, same with the new cd but i will probabyl after im doen with the picture, whenever taht is
Can't be an injury if it's dead, no? 
Also, uh, still gonna pray for happy ending
Of course, no rush! 
Have faith, dear storygoer Piotr
OH I did not notice this one well time to add a big "BUT" to what I know :)
Hm I might up it to teen up and add a few tags while at it
whats mine even on
ah, teen
i think that should work
still have to add that major character death tag when im bored and want to kill off pebbs
@ornate grail i'd explain but you have not read it sooooooo... 
Put simply ||arm getting blown off by explosive spear||
didnt i cut that scene?
No hard limits, just general guidelines for courtesy. I just use AO3's guidelines 
Added "minor injuries" in preparation for ch2 
Is gales' corrosive fate considered a minor injury? 
rather a major one
No, like, well, you did cut it and I guess that's how you avoided the stronger tag cause ||it still got some solid injuries but died??? So I guess no major injuries tag??? At least that's how I think||
"Just a flesh wound"
Just a complete slow and agonizing dissolving fate
||well, somones head gets blown off the next chapter anyway, sooooo
||
"Man up"
||I guess it does not count as an injury if the injured dies? Fuckin I dunno||
"Cured"
Why? Find out tomorrow :)
how to cure any sickness:
step one, get sick
step two, die
I mean I guess if you do get ||your head blown up but you die, it does not count as injury but rather gore or violence since you die, whereas if you were to have your arm blown off and lived that would have been a major injury? At least I feel like this||
true
lets just hope the trigger warning for graphic depictions of vilonce and the cannon typical vilonce tag will be enough
"Don't worry he didn't feel much pain :)"
eyyyyyy
its painfully slow but the line art for pebbs has been restored
one out of way too much stuff done
You... erased the inside instead of drawing new lines? 
Not judging but that's a lot of work 
worse
i used that tool that marks everything with the same color, coppied that, pasted it over, repeated
Oh! Smort, actually 
Beyond the .kra
Can't believe it's only been 4 months 
You mean since your fic was around? Wasn't it concieved earlier?
No, 4 months since I gave you the text wall 
I'd say 4 months already 
So basically i was kinda curious about sth and rechecked it while at it and it was at that point that i saw. Well, uh, ||trellis||
Indeed... 
character line and color layers are back
Most likely, most editors nowadays have some form of autosave, it's usually stored in your temp folder (press win + r and type in "%temp%"), you can usually find the autosaves somewhere in app, just "Google how to recover krita work"
i will actually try that later, tho i do have most of my stuff back again, this time better sorted, so i will probably just keep working with what i have now. tho thanks for telling
done, it is with this picture that i realise that i have absolutely no clue how i should apply light sources
i really wanted to draw a dropwig above their head but i thought that would stick out too much
lmao, i was trying to practice more with the pad, so i said to myself that i should try some different style for once, and then i thought i could just try to make a design for amany fields, since she still doesnt have one and i could maybe make a mural with her so i just drew for a while and now i like the design so much that i think it would be a waste on her, wth
whoever shal this person now be
4 am Amany 
Beautiful Ancient, worth (perhaps) 
im on vacation, im switching up my sleep sceduale
I like the watercolor look...
i love them already, but amany fileds is such a side character that i think the design would be a waste
oh it is so fun to draw, i will definetly do it more often
Hey since you're here, did you know you can hold down Shift and drag your mouse to easily change brush size 
lmao, not for me, my keyboad is far away from me when i draw
Someone said a fun fact, I must counter with my own!
Fun fact: this fact is false.
it workes for me tho
How are you gonna spam ctrl z though
/j
Error. Restarting processes…
*Krita 
This version of Celestium has been corrupted.
Please contact Hexadel Inc. for a replacement.
Revenge for the horse Poinko 
my alarm just went off and i think i almost had a heart attack
Celestium automatically replaced.
lmao, i was bored so i made a ref sheet for myself
well probably also for others so i dont have to explain what it is im thinking but hey
but yeah, here you go
@soft agate would you pin pls
Amany Cave 
thats were i spent all my time at
Writer living space 
i also just took the desing i wanted for amany fields and made it my ancientsona
cause why not
Wait so the box just comes off?
yep
That's a new word right here 
Didn't it have latches?
woudl be easer to show but i actually have no clue how to draw latches
thx
NP
Yeah but now without any attachment point on the back you make it look like the box is holding on with the power of hot glue or something 
Just draw some small metal plates in spots where it would attach i guess?
Held together by love and dreams and a bit Ancient spit
And maybe make the plates have a hole in them or have something stick out of them i guess
Flex Tape (TM)
i did attempt to draw em, they just look really weird
No i mean on pebbles' back
but i also only just remembered to add them last second
i could try that
Four little metal plates in spots corresponding to where those would go if it was attached
🔥
i will just add five little hole, one for the cord hidden in the box and the other four for the latches
Wait did you add that to the box
idkkkk
that thing is to confusing for my tiny brain
it all will make more sense with the post chapter two refrence, i promisssseeeeee
Gimmie a min
Something like this except positioned properly i guess?
yep
probably 5
tho i could just say bullshit logic, the latches are so small that there is barely a hole to be seen
Ah so just a hole for the latches and the wire?
I thought a connection box-shaped hole 
who cares about folds when you have a giant ass hole IN YOUR CLOAK
Phrasing 
Oh no 
Splendid
@soft agate sryyyy for another ping but could unpin the first and pin this one instead
thanks!!!
the question now is if i should make the design a pain to draw by just plastering the Seal of The House of Commets on Pebbs or not
Ah hell nah, pebbles got branded 
||his antennae light up when he's disconnected? I like it||
the way you imidiatly spottet that
good eyes
More like cross referencing the depression art with pre-ch1
This was just a confirmation to me
ahhhh, okay yeah, makes sense
man, there is a reason i like to draw iterators, their cloaks make it easy to draw em, so the second you take em off im in pain
looking ass /j
He gets nail polish when he's disconnected???
/j
From interacting with it?
You mean transmission?
when the os' tendrils connect with pebbs' fingers to transform data, yes
transmit
oooppppsss

hm
hmmm
i will never understand how your so good with anatomy, its by far my biggest struggle
im actually about to cry right now
thank you sooooo much
the two of them look so cool
No cloak for you this time, because I didn't feel like doing fabric
cant say the same for me, never doign him without the cloak again, otherwise he ends up looking all over the place with my anatomy skills
And that symbol is quite complicated :P
oh yeah, its terrible to draw, another reason to never draw him without cloak again
Just save it as a brush
dont know how to do that
then you can stamp it on the screen and transform it to your liking
let me juse look up the next best krita guide
orrrrrrrr
@ornate grail pls help
how do you make a brush in krita
google it :P
im lazy
-# (i will do that)
Click Edit Brush Settings (in red), and you can dabble with all these settings :3 Brush tip, opacity, density, tons of things
The graphs can be fine tuned to better fit your drawing style!
Then you save it (make sure you save it
) and you can give it a name and custom thumbnail 
But watching Amany struggle helping is fun 
heyyyy
Oh shit didn't read up, if you want a custom brushtip, just hit Import under all those brushes and you can load one in
~~Me importing a random image to see how well it works
~~
the clown is getting tormented by scugs, someone help them
teaser 
seems as if stuff is about to go down
ACTS next chapter spoils ||Those are the microbes, that's the immune system response
||
Oooh, the ||pearl||?
Also damn i didn't know you can just make anything a brush lmao
Pebbles stamp
can i click that, is taht an acts spoiler? im not risking that
Wait is he balancing on the pole? You are giving him too much credit 
Slight soiler
Pebble stamp, save yourself the effort of drawing him
And Arti stamp
He is cheating with antigrav. Filthy poser
Modular art 
Then you paste them into breathtaking backgrounds to level up your background drawing skills 
i was already wondering when he had the chance to get so good at keeping his balance, perfect explanation
no one will ever realize that its just the same poses over adn over again
they will only look at the background
Exactly
Alternatively use the stamp to put pebbles everywhere without anyone noticing 
at this point i can just add my ancientsona into the mix as well
Sign everything with your ancientsona 
wait, lemmi just
the perfect watermark
just add it everywhere
Making a signature stamp is actually a good idea, people do it 
That, or importing the image as a layer
there, now that little gremlin will be on every future art piece of mine
I don't think I need a watermark for my art, I don't think anyone is stealing that 
I have no clue why but I looked at 'em for a sec and my brain identified this as 🥺👉👈 
nooooo
||"Gib credit pwwwwease 🥺"|| I apologize
trigger warning, fucking terrifying
(also its your fault piotr)
Not terrifying, art 
Borzoi meme 
Spoiler image cause its the think mark think meme, and it has quite a bit of blood in it, just be warned!!!
will i elaborate my thouhgts behind this meme in particular, no, no i wont
that reminds me I still have to catch up to c 10
||can't wait for another combat encounter gone wrong
/j||

Oh wow how weird everybody just got collective dementia
/j
Cy is taking his job more seriously now.
damn, my memories, what happned
I just don't want you guys to get in trouble is all 
....Cy, have you slept at all yet?
i can smell the
🫵
if I said yes, would you believe me? 
youve been online this entire time...
How long, then, becomes the question.
blinking doesn't count
he got me
I'm almost done with the chapter...
🫵 🛏️
Muse? Understood.
"You, solitary bed, now"
But as Horizons says, understanding a reason doesn’t mean it is justified.
No, no... I should sleep. I can't keep doing this every night, it's gonna start really getting to me soon.
gn 
bully people to sleep, the favourite activity of the stories channel people
And not going to sleep at reasonable hours, the 2nd favourite activity
new script for the first 10 chapters is finally done, its pretty rough since i already wrote all that stuff, but it still ended up with rouhgly 2,5 k words so there is that.
now the more detailed scripts will follow
what do you mean new script for first 10 chapters 
i just made a script for teh first 10 chapters, mostly for consistensy
tho there are no changes, no worries
Oh so they are just left untouched
Oh thank god

they are really simple two, lemmi just look for one with no spoilers
there really simple
just so i can quickly read up on the most important stuff for each chapter
Ah so it's a recap thing
Makes sense
my scripts are usually more detailed with actual scenes instead of 'and then he calmes down, lol' but those are reserved for chapters 11 and up
script writing also helps me with what i want to do with the story
alone today i already got a bunch of small little ideas
for one, im probably jumping onto the scug do sign train since arti will have to be able to say some shit
on another note, one of my older chat logs from the jewels group will be rewritten
i think i actually send that one in here
found it
yeah, i wrote that a while ago
its not even up to date in that state, but i plan to rewrite larger sections of it
then there are just new ideas for plot and new chapters which i cant really talk about becasue spoilers
but a bunch of new ideas did come, thats why i like to do script writing
Prehistorical material
/j
and even back then you were already proof reading
Since chapter 2 of how time passes for an iterator 
im just working you to the bone
No issues (yet) 
you hate making chapter titles??? then just do them before you even begin actually writing
also i crossed out certain words or entire titles because of teh biggest spoiler reasons, there is also the fact that besides chapter 18 and 20, all of the others could still be replaced at any point in time
if i will keep that structure, eh, not sure, not after last time, but in short, chapters 11 - 16 (plus chapters 9 and 10) are replacing the old chapters 8 and 9, chapter 17 is a new addition, and chapters 18 - 20 are the old chapters 10 and 11
no major changes in chapter count at allllll
what about word counts?
i dont wanna think about it
tho i think instead of chapter 20 beign the halfway point, maybe its more of the second third? not sure, but with the city arc getting really long i think we now have the everyting starts part of the story, the city arc now, and then two intertwinded arcs after that
how long it will get, ugh, nooooooo, i really dont want to think about that at all, i remember the times where i thought that i would maybe get bts hell up to 100k words if im writing a little bit more, well that has changed drastically 
....so we're not nearly even halfway point yet?
not for now at least
hopefully at the point whne i reach chapter 20 we will have two thirds, but it might as well just be the halfway point as well, a terrifying thought really, i will be stuck with bts hell until the end of time
Im predicting final word counts to be 250k-300k at this point 
Just write them now during the downtime!
still one and a half weeks of vacation, i got this
my predictions for now
yikes, i wanted to use my vacation to finally finish the rango moon crossover fic, guess banan will have to wait a little bit longer
waiiitttt, i just realized that chapter 15 has the same name as chapter 4 of chicory, that name is 100% staying
Speaking of, I should play that now since i decided to take a break 
steam page
Oh
Maybe I'll pick that up during Halloween sale 
no worries, i prefer to buy games on sale as well
||relatively long word starting with "a", huh?
...
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to understand your thought process sometimes
So far my chapter names just occur to me and also I give myself basically no restrictions on them 
Hm?
i just have no clue what you mean with that, thats all
Chapter 19, relatively long word starting with "a" crossed out
||... ascension?
||
of course it is administration
no where near enough space for ascension in that blank
better
something something about a brain, of course 
funilly enough it could have been the case since the word is already too long and got cut off at the end
Ehh kinda? Maybe? If you squeeze it? 
woaf gets into the story
Cameo teaser? 
WoaF and Gales cameo in BTShell, confirmed?

but of course, that was teh plan from teh very beginning, even beofre either of the two existed
another point that proves i have a time machine
when did you wrote that down?
also cy, i send you the file, you can alctually just look up what it says
tho chapter 19 and 16 are still huge maybes since im not sure i like em too much
2014, i knew it all along
you are kidding
me? nahhh, never, i told you im a time traveller
I feel discriminated
/j
well cy knows like the entire plot already
if you want i could just tell you tho i like to keep the people who know on the smaller scale
yeah, and you can go to the back of the book to see the answers to all the puzzles, too... doesn't mean I do that without even trying to solve them
I mean, I think i'd rather not know, knowing what will happen slightly ruins it and also reading new stuff keeps checking for errors interesting 
As opposed to the 2nd sweep of the redone chapters where I have been going through what I knew so it was just combing text for mistakes, y'know
yeah, i can see that becoming annoying real quick, also i still want the very super cool epic amazing plot twists to work for others
Yeah 
but yeah, the old one begins with an actual ingame brodcast
and then i just continue with PI interupting and going from there
but i didnt like the old one too much
like, they just randomyl talk about the local group with no real reason besides that they just do
Btw, honestly I still remain by writing "lockdown" together
the newer idea is that wind just stopped appearing online and since tehy have so many aliases people notice
actually doing that now unless its the fwsld cause i think it looks cool
shame on me
but bakc to that, they notice, speculate, guess corectly that its wind and then talk local group drama
but while back then i wrote those two logs back to back, now its been a while and im unsure how i want the characters to be
Huh I thought that "ounce" was an alias for Moon or pebbs 
nah, that would be moon
tho i did realize that GS is actually in sliverist groups so i could make them note that erratic pulse is gone
tho that would only be a cute mention and wouldnt really make sense
like, yes, they know erratic pulse, but why would they mention him right then and there
I guess they notice that they also are gone as well as the other bunch of aliases?
i will have to come up with so many different names, i hate it
So many oppurtunities to cram in jokes 
Orrrrrr...
where do you think i got ounce of silver
well no, thats a lie
but the insperation came from there
i will probybl just take all your ocs names and switch em up five tiny rocks style
Take all my OC names? 
changing storms
The OC market will not recover 
Ohh this is "your" in plural, oh
yours is actually one of the more difficult ones
"I'd like to see you try"
Iterator is a giant and antisocial as fuck. Characterisation done
Hm I wonder what this is based on 
what even is aeolian?
no clue
Idk ask banan 
translates to german as it is in english as well so no help there
but nahhh, im not going to comit fraud -# yet
i will just go back to teh random name genarator
ohh
Gotta be a new line
aeolian are pieces of matter, eroded by the wind
so your Iterator is Dusty Waves in glamour
According to what sth says i guess it's sth like "waves caused by the wind"?
dust waves
Honestly i've never thought about it cause I have been given a good name and took it no 2nd thoughts 
me with the name generator, tho most of my names arent exactly coppies from that side, instead i get an actual random word generator, then just do that until i get a word i like, repeat until i have a lot of words i liek and then just smush em all together
"one of those gotta be good"
as for ounce of silver, idk, the frace ounce of regret came to mind but i didnt wanna use that as a name so i just gave ounce of... into google and silver was one of the results
I'm really glad i got this name cause, well...
I don't want the old one to see the light of day
I really don't want it to exist but if you insist...
One sec

Can I perceive it too 
In Awe of Approval
Calls towards the Courageous
Ounce of Silver
Bitter about Brilliance
Four Silky Spirals
Gifted Domains
Reckless Unification
ugh, i hate making iterator names for one off side characters
im just putting them in here so i will have em for tomorrow, now tho, its time to go to bed like the responsible person that i definelty am
Snags ref 
Forgot to update y'all on this
(Stories chat Minecraft is real, come join us)
Yoo he got that nail polish 
I'm hoping to get it resolved by tomorrow though i'm not sure if it'll work
Wishing you best of luck, tech support is so annoying sometimes 
Oh this isn't even tech support this is "I migrated my mojang account onto my family microsoft account a few years back and I have done precious little about fixing it till now" 
Actually I wanted to fix it right away by re-migrating to the right account but the process for that is "you don't, get fucked, lol"
lets try to get sth done today, shall we
Today was the day it was gonna be bumped, DAMN YOU AMANY
/j
lmao, yeah i saw that, thats why im forced to write sth today
twelve hours later and not a single thing has been written

hmm. In minecraft for 11 hours. Wonder if these events are to be combined 
its actually not funnily enough, i just have the game open and check in from time to time but i havent played to much today
thats what they all say 
(I believe you)
instead i watched a 4 hour analisys video, got one hell of a zuchini and read a bunch
i just keep sending this picture around, but i cant believe that this thing was in the garden
thats one big fella
"Are coorelated"?
Sorry i couldn't help myself 
finally, someone that isnt me being corrected
Not yet
/j
does it make sense? heck do i know, i just use words that sound complicated to my tiny brain
Negative mass? 
Iirc entropy is basically heat
Also funny capitalization strikes again 
what do i know
ive mentioned numbers, negatives are a group of numbers. Mass is a thing that soudns smart? I use it. Now make the two interact, bumm, done
But how do you have negative mass

entropy is a work i didnt know what it ment until you told me just now, it was used beofre so i used it as well
idk
guess thats the contradiction?
I mean I think it means that
Hmm "entropy means the disorganization in a system"
oh i saw that definition
i just didnt know what to do with it
kinda just slapped the word in there
Okay I still have no clue about negative mass 
neither do i
Check under your basement stairs /j
just rambling from the smartest beings procured by an advanced race. They don't know basic physics
nonono, you dont understand. physics in iterator world is just different
special
then explain negative mass to me
i cant evene explain positive mass to you
make it convincing
Do they look like an iterator to you? /j
a calculator maybe
i keep getting sth sth sth E-1000000
Uhh let's test that
what does that even mean?
a 0,00(in total 100 0s)1
physics, chemie, and bioligy were my worst subjects. i dont get them to this day
@fluid ridge 🫵 sin(60)*sin(30) = ❓ /j
ehhhh, sin as in sin tag con?
1
Yeah
I think
ehhh
I wasn't asking you but yes
/nm /j
sin (1800) ???
what the fu-
whoops
No i was asking you but the answer got spilled
Uhh
sin(60) x sin(30)=sin(60) x cos(60)=1
mhm, yes, i understand
definetly....
Yeah uhh they just kinda do that
Don't ask
wait wasn't it sin(x) + cos(x) = 1
nah, I thought sin(30)+sin(60) with a * we have two numbers between 0 and 1 multiplied. Result is 0,433
yes
ah yes. ofcourse. i get it
sin(30)+sin(60)=sin(30+60)=sin(90)=1
Don't worry i've already forgotten most maths and struggle with roots, powers, logarithms and all those other "fun" things 
im blaiming all this on Berufsschule, this thing is melting my brain with every second i spent there
sin(0)=sin(180)=sin(360)=0
sin(90)=1
sin(270)=-1
are we in a circle now?
no, a wave
i thought that stuff is only used for triangles???
there we go
we start at 0, wave goes up to 1, back to 0, to -1 and then finally back to 0
Alright, explain factorio rail signals, 10 minutes /j
all that i got from this was that negative mass is not a thing and that i suck at making up science
ehhhh
what will i write then
maybe i will stick with coping the pearl dialouge?
"You know what I mean. I won't insult your intellect with these mundane descriptions of topics we both know and understand."
pff
I mean wikipedia has something on it but idk anymore
cy was right, my brain turned into a cube
Yoo your brain has a puppet chamber in it? 
if you need an encyclopaedia, I have outgrown that use the moment the Ancients departed. Don't come me with useless queries.
sadly i seem to lack the intelegence that usually comes with the chamber
Yeah cause it's just the chamber, no memory conflux /j
Thick walls, too /j
