#secret-stories-misc
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Believe me darling,
The stars were made for falling
Like melting obelisks as tall as another realm
un ensemble d'enfants (a group of children)
la galxie s'etend (the galaxy extends)
jarden de l'imagination (garden of imagination)
combler la lacune (bridging the gap)
voler face à la lune (flying in front of the moon)
vois comme nous évoluons (see how we evolve)
it feels like flying
but maybe we're dying
a cosmic confluence of pyramids hologrammed
she knows you heard her
staging music murder
in line before the show began
to be where I am
children born of one emotion
our devotion's deepest ocean
no division reasoned we'll be free~
I DON’T KNOW FRANCOIS
Honestly not really :p
Did it mostly cuz I thought it'd look cool- and it did! It's also an idea I jad for a few days now, planned on doing it for art month but I stopped with art month prompts cuz I was slowly getting burned out
Sorry for late response had to do something
Wait, book club happened again? 
Anyways gotta go eep is 00:20
Is alright
SLEEP
Yep
Cy read his own fic like a boss
ooo same timezone 
Sadge
i love keeping my chapters word counts consistent
(chapter one was like 800 words)
Testing?
testing? 
oh
Discord was bitching earlier

One time discord lagged so bad I sent two different messages in two different channels at the same time
I did not click on channel 2 nor did I write the message there
Funny 
SHUSH I WAS FIXING MY FIC AND WRITING A BIT

pulls out the runes
🫵
🛏️
👉 🛏️
Okay fine
I'll put the fic here
Bygone images of what could've been
Regrets that fester and grow
You were beautiful
Yet I couldn't bear to see you pained
There
Do not read my profile
how many of those rarfaction cells does the average iterator have
could you donate one... like an organ.
wait
I am in
misc channel
not normal one
Ellor
I'm trusting all of you to not read beyond this fic
Seriously
Or else I will delete it
if you're worried about it, maybe you should make separate accounts for server-friendly stuff?
You can actually move fics to other accounts btw
What 
with a little finangling you can move your server-appropriate fics to a different ao3 account
mhm
make new account a co author of a fic, remove old account as co-author
Nah it's good
This link won't stay up any longer
I'm not proud of much there anywayd
I had been meaning to check out CoG at some point
That got put on haitus
I mean, go ahead
But do not expect good quality
The Rot consumes
no?
seems a lotta people liked it, gotta mean it's at least decent 
that's what I tell myself about hfish 
I mean
The plot was apparently unique
I guess?
Idk
I feel like CoG was never original
But I assume everyone thinks this way too
About their own works
it's pretty common yeah
I get insecure too, but for me I flip back and forth
sometimes I'm feeling good about it, sometimes not
I think putting your writing out there for the public to see is inherently a bit vulnerable, and if you're the perfectionist type it's easy to feel like you're not doing well enough
I'm gonna get a read after church
NO
Oh yeah, that's me
Perfectionist to a foolish degree
I also got a Tolkien complex towards the end of writing too
a tolkien complex?
It has to be high art
ah
Which means every chapter sucked
Everything I ever write sucked
I should just give up and never write again
:D
Y'know
maybe I have that
though i would never call my thing high art, I do feel the need to ensure it's the absolute best i can do (hence the chapters taking longer and longer as they get more difficult...)
Yeah
I get it
For me it just manifested as a concerning amount of self loathing
Just, if I can't write good, what's the point?
for me it manifests as me being totally stuck on chapters for weeks or months at a time 
All these other writers made great things, why can't I?
I try to remind myself
Oof
that this is the very first thing I've ever written
Good job btw
and it's fanfic. It doesn't have to be as good as the pros
That's where I failed miserably
I kept looking at all the fics (yes including yours) and thinking "wow, look at the pros"
also the pros usually have a team of highly skilled editors, and have done multiple drafts
"my writing sucks ass and I shouldn't write"
unless you're drafting a fic in full and then running it through editors, it's inherently different
serialization is a different beast entirely
Serialization I assume is getting it published?
nah
releasing in parts
such as posting individual chapters of a fanfic as you write them
Ah
it does effect quality when you write and release chapter-by-chapter
instead of having a full draft you can go back and refine
Mhm
Chapter by chapter has noticable increases in quality
But also means you're liable to make errors
I've had to go back and edit plot holes more than once
nah when you can see the whole picture with a full draft, you can get a better feel for overall pacing, stuff you didn't realise you needed to foreshadow earlier, able to make changes to the story retroactively...
Ah pacing
Also known as
"let's have twelve thousand words of Wind backstory because yes"
Fair
pacing is tough
I mostly write chapter by chapter because forward thinking is hard and I will abandon a fic soon after I start writing it
having a good outline of the whole story will help
that's good!!
True… I should make an outline instead of going forwards and completely rewrite a WIP Iterator Logs fanfiction of mine.
I don't have a written outline but I know all the major events of my story
Dw man, I'll give it a read 
that's all you really need, but a lot of people do benefit from a real outline
I don't have those
Later stroy, to the place we go
:(

Sorry to disappoint banan
I struggle to remember thoughts after a few minutes —- or hours if I’m lucky.
I'm not disappointed, it's only a suggestion 
But I don't have an outline beyond "ehh I think this happen here?"
me opening my phone at 4am to jot down three lines of incomprehensible idea notes for morning banan to attempt to decrypt
I have some shit in my phone notepad I genuinely do not know the meaning of
thanks half-awake banan
As soon as I wake up, I’m in a state of perfect clarity. Except for the one time I woke from anesthesia. I thought I was saying words and apparently it was just gibberish!
Yeek
Y-yeek?
Yeek
Pilgrimage is a really fun challenge 
Joe the cyan lizard
Joent
Huzzah, Pilgrim
hello gang
Haiii :3
saying "Hai" instead of "Hi" is honestly much more comfortable for me
this is further boosted when I add additional i's and a :3
H
Prime Silly
Lmao, it got me too :p


Glad to see Jay is acclimating
? wdym
Adjusting, essentially.
Hi Cele
Hello.
Detonation is Imminent
yeye I understand what the word means, I just didn't know what you meant in this particular context :p
I see
awawa time to write ig still haven't figured how I should start 3rd cjapter 
but I won't figure it out unless I start writing it
Goodnight!
says I'm gonna write 3rd chapter
goes to ledit
attempts to write it
starts taking notes for chapter 4
yaps here
Amazing
I'm so good at being organized /s
Music question surrounding the OST: Is it just me or is Random Gods better when listened to outside of the game?
I ask because it somewhat starts in the middle when you do enter the General Systems Bus and, unless you deliberately time it, the song just cuts short once you enter the puppet chamber
Meanwhile, listening to the song on its own (or as a remix and there are very good remixes out there) you get the slow build up of the song. The mystery, the sheer awesomeness, the feeling of in some kind of alien environment...all growing stronger the closer you get to whatever is waiting for you
Today I learned: I don't fucking know how to write suns
Suns is one of the hardest characters to write for me hehe
thats why they were my least fav at some point 
Probably because i dont have a set personality
cuz i didnt know what to do with them

I know what to do with them, but I don't know how to put it into a chapter.
i might just steal kadals idea tbh 
lemme get it
yeah
where basically
sunnies is, as their name suggests, is a sun
so theyre either warm
or
about to explode

but like
theyre mostly warm
to try to keep from exploding

See, I want my Suns to be jelaous of Sig cuz that's like. The whole catalyst for the bullshittery in Fate Unavoidable

Most songs are generated procedurally as you play, like the threat themes building up the more enemies are on-screen. The soundtrack versions (YouTube, the steam soundtrack thing, and the records) are hand made to try and be the best sounding version of what you would hear in-game

ive seen people go wild with their suns 
Soft dating sim srs
a lot of them suns is just a horrible person 
I need like just a really wholesome suns 
That I know. But Random Gods is an area specific theme and an important one. It is "Theme III"
My favorite Suns is probably black hole sun AU suns
Like a suns that genuinely cares
WOAH
BHS SUNS MENTIION
LIJFSOIDFJOSF
Sf
HA
HAHAHAHHAA
GHEHEHEHE
GET WRECKED
Okay...everything just blew up right there...
lmao
Yup, I noticed lmao
Also cheesestike
Can i drop the blackmail
Recite the bible if no
Stay silent if yes
Hmmm
LMAO
It's not generated. It's a set of different layers of audio that plays based on the threat level.
LMAO
i need to have memo remake it
Why
bothers me for some reason
Picky huh?
I want to make that into a sticker

scrunched
burds?

Birds
is that
Bords!
is that
SHUT UP
IM GOING TO EXPLODE
Okay
EXPLDOE
Aw
SUN??
:(
IS THAT
NO
OUTER WILDS????
NOOOOOOOOOO

:sobbingfivepebblesimage:
Lmao
Thank you
OH WE’RE IN STORIES MISC?
I THOUGHT WE WERE IN DISSCUSSION

HEHE I CAN GO CRAZY HERE
I DIDNT WANT TO GO OFFTOPIC LMAO

Of course you did
MISC
MISC?
MISC
This is factual and real
Also my moon and sliver headcannons changed 

WHY ARE YOU SAD
THANK YOU
Also I find this really funny (found on tumblr
Moon is now bisexual ace and sliver is aroace sapphic 
oh okay 
Just kidding their both striaght now 
NO
smh my head
WOKE WORLD
WOKE worLD
I SAw BRO
Five pebbles, in Seven red suns’s bed: Morning… how’d ya sleep last night?
Seven red suns, knocking Five pebbles off: WHAT THE HELL?!
Five pebbles: Ow—
Seven red suns: What were you doing in my bed? You were supposed to sleep on the air mattress on the floor!
Five pebbles: I had a nightmare.
Seven red suns: You had a nightmare? What are you, five years old?
Five pebbles: Listen, I needed to feel comfortable and I was getting this perverse power dynamic vibe from me sleeping on the floor and you sleeping up there-
Seven red suns, in a royal accent: Why yes, how high and mighty I am up on my twin XL!
Five pebbles: That is not what I meant—
Seven red suns: Silence in the presence of your king, who sleeps a lofty twelve and a half inches above the ground!
Five pebbles: Listen, I’m not ashamed. I slept comfortably when I got up on your bed and I’m sure you did too.
Seven red suns: Yeah, okay-
Five pebbles: You know what? I wanna know. How’d you sleep last night?
Seven red suns: …That was the best I’ve slept in a while.
Five pebbles, gasping: The king slept comfortably with a peasant in his bed!
Seven red suns: I did not consent to this-
Five pebbles, dramatically: But my liege, our love is forbidden!
Seven red suns, on the phone: Hi, is this the front desk? Yeah, there’s a bed bug in my room and he’s six-foot-one, he’s got red hair.
Five pebbles: Ask them if they have one of those “Do Not Disturb” signs. I’ll put it on the door next time we… do it.
Seven red suns: Okay, I'ma go shower and wash all of the you off of me.
Five pebbles: Oh, maybe together we could—
Seven red suns: NO.
Five pebbles: Just to save water—
Seven red suns: No! You don’t even pay for the water!
Five pebbles: …Good point.
OH MY GOD
HEHEHHEHE
okay good 
FIVE PEBBLES DOESNT SAVE WATER HEHE
OH MY GOD
Lolight stream starting time to watcher

oh also hi cheese and crispy

okay
that
i got one
where i was like
this would be perfect for slivermoon and one of the ships between pebbles suns or sig
but
i couldnt
get it

Okay
i wanted
i wanted the roles to be inverted
i wanted the slivermoon to give flowers
but no 
just fire up a text editor and change it 
woag,,
I CANT BREATHE
Oh my god sig with a bunch of slugcats
sig rlly cares abt wildlife, so if any critters stumble into his chamber, he’ll care for them and make sure theyre healthy before kicking them out of his structure back into the wild

I'm accepting this into my personal lore bible.
He’ll make sure they’re healthy but he’ll still kick em
oh there he goes yonder! looks into distance
pebbles: Hey, about that love letter you sent me-
Sig: blushes What are your thoughts?
pebbles: The fourth sentence-
Sig: Yeah, that’s where I got really emotional and I-
pebbles: It’s “you’re” not “your”.
well he cant just keep em
smh my head
Smg i know

Hehe
HELP
this is so me 
pebbles: My future partner must be brave, strong, intelligent, successful and organized.
Sig: steps on a caterpillar and proceeds to drop to their knees and sob while apologizing profusely
pebbles: That one. I want that one.
HELP PIOTR YOURE KILLING ME
actually what if i send my outer wilds ones anyways 
Miserable suns
No
No spoil
well i wouldve soiled them 
outer wilds soilers 
i need to draw suns as a caprisun now,, 
Im clicking all of them

YESS
Yummy soilers
We simply do a cool trick called
“Bullshiting it until it sounds correct”
I oresent: me being a dumb fuck trying to talk to gaius bot
also it’s 1AM
sleep
B-
Buh why

||the 'everyone bullies chert' one
||
Before I do go eepy
Would you like to hear my idea for Gourmand tomorrow
Real but im saving that for the moon prompt…
Day 18
I have no clue what Ima draw for Moon
Maybe I’ll draw her either having a great time being one of the few Iterators left alive
Or fucking dead
If I can’t think of a prompt for any of the Region prompts for art month
Then I’m just drawing the region Humanized
It’s my backup tomfoolery skit
The powers of being an artist
You can do anything if you have motivation
Oh yeah this is so sig, shame I'm having suns dehydrate him in my fic
I have so many things to do after art month
I’ve gotta play new watcher dlc
Gotta so the “Ask the Iterators”
Get a job-
Do more ISAT art
And maybe finish the wattpad-
Alright
That’s it
Everyone, we’re having a meeting
I’m calling it the “How are your Iterators dying”
Who’s going first
toxic traffic light where suns kills sig cuz they didnt like what he was doing 

While yall answer
Sometimes I like to slap my belly like a Seal
I also sometimes bruise my ribs since I’m kinda malnourished-
Well, we have Suns and Sig, both are dying.
Since Suns and Sig are built close together (like canon moon n pebb), and Suns is doing le experiment, ~sig is getting dehydrated :3~.
meanwhile Suns gets forcefully called by Moon and gets the funny cancer

HELP?? 
Oh and there's the hivemind AU, too
Dehydration this
Cancer that
Do what I did and make one of them melt from the inside out from their own void fluid
thats my hc of canon sig 
I'm. not gonna do another yapping session lmao, I'll just forward that one
he accidentally bursts a pipe and void fluid jumpscare
Sigs: Guys, I don’t want to alarm you, but my void fluid pipe has ruptured, luckily it’s still inside me so it’s all good
Moon: YOUR MELTING FROM THE INSIDE!!!
Sigs: it’s ment to be inside, don’t worry bout it
I should mention; other than Moon, all hivemind AU rotted iterators are aware of everything while the rot controls them 
God-
Reminds me about the Hunter Long Legs in the human au-
Poor Hunter…
Anyway
Yall wanna talk about robot yuri more?
oh he doesnt actually die from it 
he just kinda sits there in despair because he can barely move or think

Now that’s what I’m talkin about!

The pizazz!
oh yeah i have another hc that i dont think i can share here cuz i might get bansihed to the shadow realm

Okay but Fate Unavoidable Sig gets some really nasty hallucinations before he inevitably collapses, he can't even differentiate hallucinations from reality
Coward

So it’s me tomorrow with my shitty sleep schedule
If I can somehow explain my Miros Vultures lore
You can explain this

ill just dm it to you

i already got one warning today
Eocho
I thought we were friends cheese

It reminds me of Sky: Children of the Light slightly
I played half of that game and was just confused the whole time lmao
My brother finished it though

Me when Golden Wastland
definitely reminds me of the wall art in Sky
dont actually k ow if i can say that joke-
it’s a friend-making MMO, the ‘lore’ is just set dressing
Woah i didnt know that
!
i dm you 


Alright fine, I can stay up a lil longer

ragequit 🔥 🔥 🔥
this is kinda accurate

five pebbles,, 
Five peb
Two monies?
I like this gif
two dollars 🔥 🔥 🔥
wawa

slucat
Fuck kinda stalking is this 

Boingy
Lmao
you cant hide drom me
SHUT UL GIAUD
DAMN
anyways

ill always find you
❤️
/plat
lmao
So /plat means
:)
Number two?
:)

Also I still have not done today's art 

I have not done day threes art
i need to do today still but im not home 
wyh do I feel sleepy I slept 8 hours and it's only 8 PM 
Daylight saving
Ohhhhh I like these iterator designs
The coyboy iterator designs got to me and now i cant stop drawing them like that
this implies the existence of ragequit in your au



You can think of anything youd like

Im not picky on ships
Please spare me 
traffic light
you’re
If you give me another good quote ill draw that too
I have decided that writing involving iterators is too scary bc I don’t know the lore and also don’t like the lore 
wjat

That sounds like an srs situation 
bhs,,
IM TAKING THIS LMAO
oh he definitely would (I never even played dnd... seems interesting, though, I think it'd be cool to play, but I have no one to play with)
Incorrect quote generator

SIG AND INNO inTERACTIONS SIG AND INNO INTERACTIONS
IM SCREAMING CRYING THRowWING UP

EVEN IF ITS NOT ROMANTIC I STILL WANT SIG AND INNO

pepples
SIG AND INNO SUPREMACY
LMAO
i have my inno hcs all thought out so i can now discern what would be in character for them 
youll get many sig and innos
I want to draw fate unavoidable stuff but:
- I lack skill to draw things I want to draw
- my iPad and pen are charging
pebbles be talking to himself
Pistachio is good 
IM TAKING THIS TOO LMAO?
Also i imagine since these tv guys cant really bite this lip or anything they just say it with imaginary asterisks

🚦
Wall of text
They display bit lips on their screens 
I'd reverse FP and NSH 
Wait I just realized, the reason I only get NSH SRS and FP in my quotes is because my dumbass forgor to put others and didn+t check until now 
LMAOOO
FULL OF SOUP
I LOVE
sliver deisgn
EHHEHE I love

Not official
Just made it up rn
Give me another good one
Looking through these their either too long or dont fit the western characters 
:(
Ill make a real one later
:)
ah shit i just got randomly dizzy
G-g-g-g-g-o get water

#incorrect-quotes-chat 
Lmao
But yeah that perfectly describes this place today
You just get the echo trigger cue and sliver is there 
Using this one
GUGHGUGHGUH I WOULD USE THIS ONE BUT I WANT IT TO BE LORE ACCURATE AND PEBBLES AND SUNS ARE ALREADY DEAD BY THE TIME INNO EXSISTS
lemme change the name :)
moon or wind?

Uhh i think moon's dead in that au too 
yeha but moon dies to make inno
and
before suns dies
moon is live

i think
i dunno i forgor imma just do wind
Lmao
I think either is equally good
too bad i already did wind
its clearly edited but
whatever
waut what e yappinh about
crispy western au 
Your doodles are so cool i wanna be able to do that too waaaaa 
Grgrgr you can do them theyre so messy and sciable

I feel so fucking tired man, felt like this for most og hte day
I'm starting to feel like this might in part be an art program issue 
But also skill issue 
wind doesnt know
/silly
Lmao
LMAO
buh I keep thinking about this conversation (not RW)
also this. I fucking love this.
(and also not RW)
I made it into my status message
Also since all of them are autistic they also say stuff like blank stares with pretend asterisks
Lmao
Nah bro
Just doodl
from shortest to tallest its
inno, pebbles, moon, sig, sliver, suns, then wind 
short moon <3
my height hc (also from shortest to tallest):
UI, FP, NSH, SOS, CW, SRS, LTTM
Yeah idk i think i might have a skill issue in that regard 
shes getting revenge 

Mine differs with au

boung
boing
I don't think I'm doing a good job writing the Suns POV chapter guys.
You are your harshest critic
Nah but like. I know what I want them to be like, but idk how to really write it in a comprehensible way
Real
Haiii crwos!
Hello
Crows*
:3
R- RESIST

NOO
:3

Owo what's this?
UwU
UwU
Wow that's the whole thing 
sliver's ascension be like:
The humble Mk600 beam cannon:
@swift badge
YEAHHHH
for anyone that wants to join we are doing some poker
Non-minor activites, therefore canot participate


GAMBLING‼️ ‼️ ‼️
exactly
Give me a moment 
Amany it's 11pm 
nth important!!!
Tree just remembered the mountain of homework he has due tomorrow 
No gambling

Only a week (and two days) until break
Damn your break is early 
yes I already eeped thanks for concern tho
So anyways, in my dreams, I was falsely accused of something I forgor so I go ~nomadic~ and start running across the whole fucking city. Also was almost shot by 2 random guys. So that was fun
no but I actually mean it, it was really fun lmao, cuz thanks to the ~power of dreams~ I could run faster and longer than I can irl, and most of itwas just me running across the city which is fun when you don't start to fucking choke when you run (which happens to me, especially during winter)
Like I was LITERALLY running
Also this is pretty normal compared to some other dreams I had.
I'm fucking balling holy shit only 45 minutes and i'm almost done
Feeling good about this one, around 370 words in like 45 minutes and i was done, gotta be a personal best 
Absolute CINEMA
I MISSSED POKER NIGHT??
there was a thread in a different server, called "fuck time" and I agree with that.
Wh a t
Oh we didn't like, fuck time as in karma 2
Oh
Should've clarified
You meant like "screw time, we don't give a damn"
yes
Was pretty fun, though eventually it got deleted lmao
idk when or why tho and who decided it
Hey.
Jazz.
how did I misspell "this" so badly
You can't out-misspell me though
You do not tell the internet that something cannot be done.
Oh look I said this a month ago (was searching for a specific screenshot but fouknd this)
(different server)
Me three months, one, a week, a day and an hour ago.
I've been saying the same thing.
I have a bunch of screenshots that either don't make sense out of context, or are pretty cursed...
Or just me screenshoting AI art so that I can mock it with my friendss
He ||became|| the water
(I suck at drawing on PC....)
Wait you draw on a tablet?
Yea
Nifty


















