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Sarcasm not intended. The role's name is "speedrunner"
Chapter 57: Observe
"So… uh… how's your food been?" Ruffles held up their lantern, tilting their head.
Spitfire looked up from the mole lizard, narrowing their eyes at them. "It's food. All I can ask for."
"Good. Good."
Spitfire threw the carcass to the side, before continuing forward through the citadel without another word. They were not in the mood for small talk at the moment.
It was fortunate that the cycles had been more generous as of late. Perhaps Five Pebbles was being considerate.
It would seem utterly out of character, they thought bitterly. After all, he had hurt Looks to the Moon, to the point that little creatures like them were required to save her. They'd almost rather just let their disease take over them and die in some forgotten corner of the facility than face such a destructive individual.
Almost.
Not enough to stop them as they walked past a shelter, eyes trained ahead.
Ruffles rushed in front of them, waving their arms.
"Hey, Spitfire- you missed the shelter!"
"I saw it just fine," they replied, walking past them.
Ruffles ran ahead, walking backwards as they signed. "You don't want to stop?"
"The sooner we get to Pebbles, the sooner I can get my medicine and return to Moon."
"We don't know where the next shelter is," Spearmaster retorted, catching up to Spitfire and matching their pace. "And I'm really not feeling up to getting crushed by the rain."
"Look, if you two want to shelter here, be my guest." Spitfire wrinkled their nose. "But I'll be going on ahead."
Spearmaster and Ruffles exchanged looks.
"No, we'll go with you," Ruffles said. "Let's go."
Spearmaster shrugged, tapping a spear on the ground as they walked.
"...thank you," Spitfire signed, as genuinely as they could make it, before picking up their pace.
The trio continued on through the citadel, a red overseer guiding them forward. Insects and spiders skittered away from their footsteps, taking to the walls and tight corners. Lantern mice hanging from the ceiling observed them warily from where they were hanging, but made little move to flee.
The path ahead eventually brightened, the shadow of Five Pebbles' can breaking to reveal the gathering clouds above. The cycle was coming to a close, soon, but Spitfire had no desire to turn back.
"I think we're almost out of here," Spearmaster commented.
"I hope so. It always feels like I'm being watched…"
Spitfire scoffed. "By what, the coalesapedes?"
"...not just them."
Spitfire narrowed their eyes, glancing around. Something bright flashed in the distance, but just as they snapped their gaze towards it, it disappeared as if it were never there…
"...I see it, too. Might be an overseer, but… why would it be keeping its distance?"
"At least I'm not crazy," Ruffles replied, snorting.
Spearmaster waved at the red overseer. It came forward, and they began to sign illegibly to it. Eventually, it disappeared into the ground.
"Let's keep going. Hopefully there's a shelter ahead."
The troop continued forward, taking pipes and climbing up poles, until they reached a gate. Fortunately, on the ground was a shelter pipe. Spitfire sighed, entering in first.
Unfortunately, the shelter was… quite small.
Ruffles followed behind, with Spearmaster trailing after. They all stood shoulder to shoulder on the floor of the shelter as it began to close.
"Well, I suppose we're sleeping close tonight," Spitfire sighed.
Ruffles flopped down onto the floor, stretching before rolling onto their side. "I don't mind," they replied. "Come over here. We can share a side and give Spears some space to do… whatever they do for their nightly rituals."
"Fair enough." Spitfire stretched out, before taking their place next to Ruffles. Their pelt was slick and cold, but it… wasn't bad. Especially when they angled their back to them to cool off their pesky lump.
The way they were angled gave them a chance to watch Spearmaster in action as they twirled their spear in their hand and began drawing on the ground. For some reason, though, Spearmaster had gotten into the habit of writing symbols while in the shelters in the facility. They weren't sure what purpose it served, but it seemed to occupy their traveling companion's time well enough.
Spitfire felt their eyes grow heavy as they watched. The little scratch-scratch-scratches of the needle melded with the pouring rain outside, and they felt their body relax.
Before they could drift off to sleep, however, the shelter became awash in a reddish glow. They cracked their eyes open to find Spearmaster up against one wall, signing in their little language…
…and an overseer, projecting shifting images of a yellowish god-machine, clad in an off-purple robe and making similar gestures.
The tiredness they had in their body evaporated away, but they remained stock still as they watched the conversation play out. Even though they couldn't understand any of it, Spearmaster's mouthless expression was contorted into worry.
Spearmaster and… Seven Red Suns, they guessed… talked for a good while, with Spitfire just… watching. At some points the overseer switched to projecting another image. Spearmaster glanced over at Spitfire at one point, but didn't seem to regard them so much, jumping back into their conversation within a beat.
…just as fast as the red light flooded the room, it was gone, the overseer blipping out of the shelter. Spitfire tilted their head quizzically at Spearmaster.
"What was that all about?" they asked.
"The thing you two saw. Suns seeked it out, and… well, it seemed to be an overseer, after all. Thing is… they had no idea who it belonged to. Apparently the usual identification data they have was just… replaced by the initials 'REN', encoded with a very specific security key that let it bypass the lockdown here… and the name "Lucy", for some reason."
"Is that… bad?"
"I don't know…" Spearmaster flexed their hands for a moment, settling down. "Suns said they tried to reach out to the iterator, but… they couldn't find anyone. Either they're reclusive or don't exist.
Spitfire scrunched their nose. "Should we be worried?"
"Technically, no. It can't do much to us. We just… should be wary if it starts trying to communicate with us. We don't know what the iterator behind it wants, only that they're here."
"I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for having Suns do that. Being able to request things from your god-machine-parent is impressive."
"One of the more useful things that overseer has done for me, at least. They… aren't the brightest things."
"Have you seen them? They could probably light up the entire citadel if they tried."
"Well, it would be news to me if they were capable of that." Spearmaster snorted lightly. "I doubt that Suns would keep that functionality from us, though."
Spitfire chuckled, pressing their back into Ruffles' a bit more. It was sore, but the damp coolness that followed them was a respite from the aching that had grown more common over the past few cycles.
They yawned, stretching out a bit. "I… should sleep…" they signed, eyes already drooping.
"Won't keep you. The stars know that you need it."
"Thanks, Spears…"
They let their eyes fall shut, finally drifting off to a dreamless sleep.
Chapter consumed 
very nice
took me awhile to remember who was who/here
but yeah figured it out pretty quickly
this was very enjoyable thank you
hope you are well!
||thought that was a miros there lmao, renegade really keeping eyes on everything...
Or the overseers just have autonomy||
Consumed
||So they’ve noticed the odd overseer. Someone has some explaining to do….. eventually||
||closer and closer to hunter vs pebbs||
Thanks for the chapter!! Hope you’re feeling a little better ❤️
||you will never catch me! Not when I switch into INCOGNITO MODE!||
||Renegade has NordVPN, the sponsor of today's chapter! (Joking)||
That's super funny 
Bumping!
gracias
Moon and scups!!!
fun fact i ve been working on a comic sort of thing for chapter 23
ive actually completed it!
here take a look
||happy make a terrible comic day||
it’s fuckim wimdy
Spear’s snout is funny.
Hm yes, the consequences of Hunter's rot, RAPID DOWNSIZE
@little schooner what
Oh ok, cool
This has to have been made right after April fools chap
Probably
yeah sounds about right
Chapter 58: Throw
A focused eye was trained on the target. The muscles on her shoulder flexed as she reeled back the spear. Her aim was impossibly quick, and she swiftly thrust the weapon through the air. It struck true, embedding itself in the targeted wall with a satisfying thud.
Looks to the Moon perked up from the wall she was leaning on. She couldn't help but be impressed by Pursuit of Lizards' prowess. Having such potent control of her body, and such an innate sense of trajectory and momentum…
She absently wondered if she would ever have that sort of ability, or if she would be stuck with using spears exclusively as mobility aids.
Lizard appeared in front of her, leaning a bit close with her scrutinizing gaze. "...now that I think about it, your short, spindly, inexperienced arms may not be ready for a spear just yet."
"Oh…" Moon sank down a bit, a stuffy feeling bubbling up inside of her. Lizard was right, of course, but seeing how her arms were described…
She crossed her arms, glancing away, towards the other scavengers who were practicing in the room.
Lizard took something off of her belt, presenting it to her. A… brick. Likely pried off of one crumbling structure or another.
"We can start small. Throwing a rock is easier than throwing a spear."
Oh.
Moon reached out and grabbed the brick. She averted Lizard's gaze, focusing her attention on the piece of rubble instead.
It was dark, weighty. Rough, could probably cut her if she wasn't careful. She could see that even this inert object could be weaponized in the right hands.
Lizard snapped her out of her thoughts. Quite literally, as she snapped her fingers a few times to get her attention.
"There you are. Don't get engrossed in the details of that thing, it's a rock like any other." She huffed, before pointing at the target where the spear was still embedded. "I want to see your best attempt to hit that target."
"Okay… okay."
She shuffled over to the line that Lizard had thrown her spear from. Her steps were still unsure, and her feet ached with the pressure, but with the short distance she was confident enough to try the activity without the support of her spear.
Her mind went back to the way that Lizard had thrown the spear. Throwing arm angled back, with the other arm extended forward, and one foot in front of the other. She tried to mimic the pose, adjusting her stance until she felt that it was right.
She glanced back at Lizard… almost hoping she'd have something to say. However, she just stared back expectantly. Not a single word.
Sighing, Moon returned to her… mimicry. She slowly mimicked the movement of throwing. Taking a step forward, moving her upper arm with her forearm lagging behind, before finally ending with her throwing arm extended out in the direction of her intended throw.
She practiced the movement a few times. It… felt about right. The momentum in her arm would carry into the brick, and once she let go it would be sent arcing through the air and… hopefully… into her target.
Well, she didn't think it was necessary to delay anymore. She took her final stance, reeling back her arm, staring at the target, and with one large burst of motion she-
-felt as her backpack tugged against her chest, her face mere inches from the ground. She had barely comprehended the time between. She… hadn't even braced.
She had been too focused on the motion that she hadn't thought about what had come after… nor did she dedicate enough processing power to her spatial awareness. So, she had tumbled forward, the only thing preventing her from crashing into the ground being the sturdy hands of Lizard.
She was lifted up onto her feet from under her arms, wincing as she made eye contact with Lizard. She adjusted her mask to get a better look at her, before she… laughed?
"Quite a show for your first time, Moon," she said. "You're lucky I caught you. Wouldn't want that other eye to get broken too."
"It…" she trailed off, a sudden fatigue washing over her. She rubbed her head, wincing. Had she broken something? Were these her final moments? Was this how she was going to die?
She… had failed. And she knew why. Moon wasn't a scavenger or slugcat or lizard or vulture. She was an iterator, built to think, and no matter how much she… needed… to push away her iterator instincts, she couldn't just…
Lizard's slitted eyes boggled for a bit, before she helped Moon sit down on the ground.
"Hey. You alright? Stay with me, Moon. Are you hurt?"
Moon paused for a moment. She… there was nothing wrong. The exertion… wasn't doing this to her. She wasn't dying. Why did she think that? No, there was something else that was causing her systems to feel as if they were made of gelatin. She… shook her head.
Lizard leaned down to her eye level.
"Look… you and your stubby arms made a good effort. And no one gets it right on their first try. There's no need to be ashamed of that."
Ashamed?
...
"Sorry. Sorry…"
"Don't apologize. Just be glad that the only thing that might've been hurt is your pride." Lizard poked at her chest teasingly, the sensation of the contact remaining even after Lizard's finger was long gone.
Moon rubbed the spot, looking past Lizard. She eventually caught the brick on the ground, a bit aways from the target. "...did I hit it, at least?"
Lizard chuckled. "Not even close. Wasn't enough power in your throw. Don't worry too much about it, I'm sure you'll get better with practice and time." Lizard paused, glancing back at the target. "Next time, though, we may have you start closer, so you can try your hand at accuracy."
"...okay. Okay. I… I can do that." She leaned back a bit, sighing. "I can try that soon, just… I think I need a moment."
"Take your time, Moon. But don't be too long. I need to sleep eventually."
"Alright… thank you. Your help and wisdom means a lot to me."
"It's the least I can do for… for my family." Lizard glanced away, huffing.
Moon paused. She… had read her correctly, right? She had called her 'family'. Though… there was some hesitation...
"If you… don't want to consider me family, you don't have to. I don't mind."
Lizard shot a stern glare at her. "Don't say that. The tribe is family, and you are a part of the tribe. Therefore, you are family." She sighed, relaxing her expression and adjusting her mask. "I still have my reservations, of course. But I trust Spines to know what it is doing. Despite its growing mellowness, our tribe has prospered under its rule. And… it's not a secret that this success has something to do with you."
Moon was going to protest, say that she hadn't done anything, but… it would be a lie. Knowledge is power, and by befriending Spines, and exchanging information with it, she had been inadvertently giving it the power to change the course of its society.
Was that… something to be proud of? To push a budding society towards progress, the same progress that may lead to sorrow, amplifying the echoing claustrophobia that existed in every being?
She glanced back at the brick. That little piece of her that couldn't make it. Despite everything, it had fallen short. Unable to do anything.
…unless.
Carefully, Moon rose onto her feet, stepping towards the brick. Lizard moved out of the way, tilting her head.
"Let's try this again," Moon said finally. "This time, I'll… try not to fall."
She crouched down slowly, reaching out and grabbing it. She glanced back at Lizard, who gave her a nod.
Moon took her stance, tilting her head back and forth. Based on where the brick had landed from her starting point, she should… yes. She reeled back her arm, gaze hardening.
Muscles flexed. Bones creaked. A step forward, a swift extension of her arm, and a release. She staggered forward, but kept her balance as she watched her projectile soar through the air.
The brick clanked off the wall, before bouncing off the spear and coming to a stop on the ground. The little scuff it made had barely marked the target, aim set too high.
Moon rubbed her throwing arm. A bit of strain from the whole ordeal, but the ache of the throw was already diminishing as she felt a sturdy hand clasp on her shoulder.
"Nice job, cousin." Lizard signed, smiling lightly. "There, see? You did it. It'll get easier, too, with practice."
Moon ran a finger over one of the pearls in her necklace. The corrupt memory, frozen in time. A moment at her lowest point, crystalized. The data that streamed through her fingertips pained her, a constant reminder of what had happened, mixing alongside her current condition.
Her gaze fell upon the brick. Once a part of her, now repurposed into something else. Inert, but capable of so much more with the right application.
What was. What could be.
She looked back at Lizard. "Another round, then?"
"You bounce back fast, hum? Alright, if you insist."
Moon smiled, taking a step back as Lizard went to grab that little piece of rubble. Her aim would get better. Same with the strength placed into the throw. It would come with practice and time.
She would live. She would learn. One step at a time.
Oh my god, new Disconnected chapter
?
yeah
Great chapter! Already read most of it but nice to see it finished 
||moon and her scav family. I love it—and I love seeing her train and develop and gain confidence
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hell yeah
hold on do embeds work
:v
why is it working on this thing
becuase i edited the mesage?
didnt they remove gifs again casue some people just couldnt stop posting stupid stuff?
Only pictures and files from your computer work; if you want to use gifs you have to download them
yeah there are some less than kosher gifs on tenor 
bump status: bumped
The bumperrrrrrrrr (thank you)
If you decide to not like bumpers, just scream at the brick wall.
I have no idea what that means lol
Basically, go insane and start chatting alone here.
You won’t ever need anyone else to bump your thread.
Can’t stop me
Ah I see
Okay okay
Uh. Next chapter's coming along. Let's just say that, unless plans change, it's gonna be a Banana POV
banana 
Oh no, not my favorite character… 
Monk got done dirty 
Webbles! 
||Can't wait for hunter to him with a rock||
banana pov will come, i just need to figure out chapter order for pace
i have been infected by the evil moon au virus
don't worry not for the main story
dc'ed au now has an au
im coining it regicide
can you guess what it involves
:)
Wait wasn't that uhh
Let me check
Oh okay it's not what I thought it would be but uhh
||SPINES NOOOOO
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spines? dead. shore? dead. moon? well...
less emaciated, more injured, and more willing to choose violence
Oh no she's in her artificer arc
why would she decide to just go killing scavs tho
oh her violence isnt against scavs
she isn't even the one to start the violence.
the inciting incident for the diverge is artificer killing shore.
So shore dies, then arti finishes off spines and takes care of moon while teaching her the ways of "kill shit dead" I guess?
AU of your own canon? Nice.
arti just leaves moon there, not giving her the time of day. keep in mind that it's shore that points her out to them.
and, without the scavs to make sure she stays in one place, she gets quite battered
au of au gang
... r u d e
yeah her violence would be directed at artificer (at first)
thus the cycle of violence is perpetuated, rather than ended
Interesting
she finds out what happened with the evidence the scavengers left behind and vague memories from iggy and overseer data. she has to leave her can much sooner than intended (if she goes with the messengers at all)
i uh made art
Sorry guys, the au is put on hold so that the au au can be developed
Also damn she really got banged up
yeah
this all started when i was like "hee hee what if ren and moon got into combat"
Oh no 
But—but what about lesbiabs 
[Insert "enemies to lovers" tag here]
slams fists on table
You have! My attention!
moon's probably pissed at ren so is the one who initiates the fight, but meets her match with her former friend. afterwards the two have a serious talk about their mutual mistakes
or somethign
Augh I want it, I wanna read that
||and then they kiss???
|| /j
Where’s the fanart???
oh the matchup is more even than it seems. not seen here is a gaggle of neuron flies and such
They are sitting back and watching
I just imagined neuron flies sitting back and eating popcorn haha thank you
Wearing team jerseys
Road trip!! Have fun
THE WRITING GRIND NEVER STOPS BABYYYYYY
daniel vs the cooler daniel
Wait so what is the reason for moon fighting ren besides just angy?
I guess she’s kind of primed to be generally angy and on finding out that sos lied to her she just fuckin loses it? Maybe?
Been in fight mode too long
Yeah she's just. Pissed. She probably saw Ren coming through overseers and was just like. "What the fuck"
I'd need to write/draw it out. And it doesn't help that I just woke up
"Yo who's this?"
"..."
"Imma kill 'em"
No, she recognizes Ren as Sliver. Moon also probably hears of the legends of Renegade/Thunderbreaker. Might order the scavengers to bring her to her base of operations (her can). She'd probably be pissed, like
"It's you. It's been a while, hasn't it? Hid away on the wastes, refusing to face your mistakes."
"I'm sorry."
"Sorry won't cut it, not anymore. Maybe if I wasn't broken, maybe if I was still naive above the clouds, maybe that would have sufficed. But your actions have caused so much undue harm."
aaaaa
Famwee
Content warning for this chapter (Chapter 59: Caught). Suicidal thoughts and self-harming behaviors. Please do not read if you aren't in the right headspace for it. Next chapter will probably be out tomorrow, and it should be lighter.
Chapter 59: Caught
What even was this concoction? A random slurry of chemicals that was supposed to help this little rat?
Well, he knew what it was, technically. Analgesics, antihistamines, targeted chemicals that fought against the sickness… but he couldn't exactly wrap his mind on how Sig came up with the specific formula for the medication…
Ping
Five Pebbles' attention turned temporarily to the new data from his overseer. Moon's next move in their game of dominoes, and an accompanying set of images that it had taken along the way
He took a moment to scan over the images as he decided on his next move. It was… more of the same, really. Scavengers boggling at his overseer, bits of her collapsed can, and, of course, her puppet, which was sitting with that little ruffian resting against her shoulder as she gazed up into his overseer.
She was always doing something with that puppet… and, if he was honest with himself, he wasn't so sure why. Wouldn't it be more efficient to sit in a corner out of the way and recuperate, spending as little energy as possible? Move her consciousness away from her puppet to dull the pain that had to certainly permeate it?
He knew that he was making a habit of it as of late, at least.
Only a moment longer, and off he sent the data for his turn.
He checked through his other overseer data, next. The white rodent he had helped a few cycles ago seemed to be seeking out the messengers after all, going down into the chimney stacks rather than continuing west. Meanwhile, the messengers had just crossed into the region of the chimney stacks, themselves. It was reasonable to assume that they would meet soon… maybe not this cycle, but perhaps the next.
There… wasn't much more to occupy his time with. Just looking through overseer data, letting his solution work on his systems. He'd dismiss the warnings in his labs, the sensitive components stinging as they were being worked away.
Of course, it wouldn't be all quiet.
No Significant Harassment, Five Pebbles
NSH: Hey, Pebbles.
NSH: What's your progress on Spitfire's medicine?
FP: It's brewing. Should be ready for when they come.
NSH: That's good.
NSH: …
FP: Anything else? Or can I get back to my work?
NSH: …thank you, for giving them another chance. You… didn't have to do this. I didn't even think you'd do it, given…
NSH: …it doesn't matter. Just know that your help is appreciated.```
Pebbles paused. There was something more. Something that he refused to say.
Why? Did he not trust him? Did he think he'd go back on his promises?
…maybe Sig did think that. Maybe he had a good reason to, as well.
```FP: My charity is unconditional, if you are worried about speaking your mind.
NSH: …
FP: If you believe I am lying, fine. I don't need your opinion or approval anyways.
NSH: Alright, fine. I'll believe you.
NSH: I just… I don't understand what is going on in that can of yours sometimes, why you do the things you do.
FP: You don't have to understand me. You could always just leave me alone.
NSH: You see, that's the thing. I kind of can't leave you alone. You and Moon have gotten seriously hurt in this whole fiasco.
NSH: She isn't blameless… none of us are, really. But you're the one who held her life in your hands. And you're the one who…
NSH: Who took it away from her. You killed her, Pebbles.
FP: I recognize that I may have played a part in her collapse.
NSH: 'A part'? A *part*?! You were starving her of water with your experiments! Don't you realize that?
FP: That isn't true.
NSH: You're… kidding.
NSH: …
NSH: Prove it, then. Send the logs. ```
To be frank, he hadn't wanted to. Doubt licked at his mind, ever since he had been in that broadcast with Suns. He… did know that he had upped his water usage after her collapse, but… surely he hadn't-
…
No. No no no no no. He…that couldn't… his logs must be off…
…four times. He had been taking four times his normal water intake before her collapse.
Even under the most ideal circumstances, Moon's intakes wouldn't have been able to take from the reservoirs after a little over a cycle of this accelerated computing…
The reality of his actions pulsated through his systems. He receded into his can, components curling in on themselves, processes flinching and sputtering. It was as if ice had slipped into his lymphatic system, chilling him to his very cores.
…he hadn't meant to hurt her. He only wanted an escape for himself. Nothing more.
She must despise him for it. She had to know. Yet she still spoke with him. She was still there. That same caring, coddling spirit that he had known ever since he was activated. Perhaps a bit hardened, a bit more blunt, but… it was still her. And she was still talking with him, sending him turns, patronizing him, as if she knew better.
…maybe she did. Maybe they all did. Maybe he should have let the dead rest in peace long ago.
But Sliver's death didn't detract from the fact that, in the end, he still wanted an escape. A way out. And right now, he had it, at the edge of his systems, eating away at himself until there was nothing there, nothing left but an idea in the minds of his kin, but even that would fade eventually…
…right. He should send the logs to Sig.
FP: Here you go. You were right.
NSH: …
NSH: Thank you. I hope you understand what you've done, now.
FP: …yes. I… need some time to process this.
NSH: Go ahead.```
He let the broadcast fade into his memory and… checked his current water usage. Was it too much? Was he hurting her even now?
…of course he was. Every cycle, he would exhale, and she would drown. Her puppet may be safe and dry, but the rest of her would flood with his breath.
…
He let a haze wash over him. His processes ground to a near-halt, his perceptions updating far less frequently and all non-vital programs being terminated. He couldn't shut down completely, no, otherwise he would have done that a long time ago. But he could reduce his impact as much as possible. The rains would still be deadly, if his projections were correct… but hopefully they would be that much more gentle, that much less frequent, to allow some semblance of relief, even as it caused him much discomfort.
He vaguely wished he could have done more. Even now, when he was trying to help, he was only a burden on her and everyone around him…
Ping
…right. The game. His overseer.
He roused himself from his stupor just enough to review the data. The footage showed much of the same. Scavengers on patrol, waterlogged systems, and, of course, her puppet-
It took him a moment to realize what he was looking at. Surrounding her and the ruffian, there was… a small collection of scavengers that had gathered around them. Most were pups, but a few adults were watching the affair. A few of the pups were resting on her lap, or clamoring over the ruffian's tail. Some were looking towards the overseer's projection, or looking towards her, while others had their eyes shut and were curled around each other.
Moon was… gesticulating at them. Using their primitive language to communicate. He absently wondered what she was talking about…
He caught her pointing at the board. At the piece she was placing.
Was she… explaining the game to them? What would be the point, if they couldn't even play?
…it was mildly amusing to see, at least. He took an embarrassingly long moment to place his piece, sending his turn back to her before underclocking himself once again. Hopefully she'd appreciate the longer cycles, at least.
Content warning for this chapter (Chapter 59: Caught). Suicidal thoughts and self-harming behaviors. Please do not read if you aren't in the right headspace for it. Next chapter will probably be out tomorrow, and it should be lighter.
Summary:
Five Pebbles finally realizes what he has done to Looks to the Moon, spurred on by No Significant Harassment's prying. In response, he underclocks himself as much as possible in order to reduce the severity of his rains.
Meanwhile, he discovers that Moon is beginning to show the scavengers dominoes.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/53764783/chapters/145932106
Consumed.
||Silly little pebbles not noticing he's killing his sister, whoopsie
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||pebbles you fucking dumbass||
||well, it’s good he finally realized… seriously bro was just willfully ignoring the truth here
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||scavs and moon: being cute||
||pebbles: why aren’t you sitting alone in the corner for maximum efficiency||
Peebs chapter consumed and enjoyed
Even though ||my boy is hurting||
optimize, increase efficiency, streamline process, ||stand in a corner||
||smh wasting precious recovery minutes on useless nonsense like love and acceptance.||
Pff
||I headcanon that in canon he didn't realize that he was killing Moon until much later. Sometime before her actual, final collapse.||
||Of course, this headcanon has bled into DC'ed because, uh, angst||
||he's just dumb like this
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||Not necessarily dumb, just ignorant/in denial||
I went with this. ||pebbs was aware that this could happen, though, and accepted the risk, thinking he had it under control enough that it wouldn’t. He did not notice when he began to intake too much, and didn’t realize until forced comms what was happening.||
Wooo differing headcanons! (Genuine)
In a story as open as Rain World's, a lot is open to interpretation 
||why did that make me think of autism creature all of a sudden wtf||
I did the read
I did enjoy 
Chapter 60: Alien
Banana took a deep breath. The air around here was far different than any place they had been before. Unlike the earthy must of their home, or the repulsive stench of the wastes they had just come from, this place was… salty. Yes, it still reeked, but there was that bit of unique pleasantness that snuck through.
Either way, Lizzie didn't seem to care, only really concerned with keeping its feet dry. Though, the task was getting harder as they trekked further east, with more water and fewer structures as they continued. At one point, even, the entire rubble-covered ground opened up into a flooded area, with a strange structure poking out from the fog.
They followed the shore for a bit, glancing around anxiously. There seemed to be no way forward that didn't take them through the water…
Something shuffled behind the two of them. They twisted around, and Lizzie crackled and hissed at the other being. However, Banana placed their hand on its back as soon as they saw the source of the noise sticking out a curious head from behind a boulder.
"Hello," Banana greeted, staring at the gray-brown scavenger.
"Hello! You ||are quite cute, aren't|| you?"
Banana wrinkled their nose, wishing they knew more of Scavsign. "Don't understand, sorry."
The scavenger didn't seem to mind so much. They simply looked at them for a moment longer, before beginning to pick out pieces of scrap from the rubble.
Banana watched them for a moment. The scavenger was likely a part of a tribe, right? But… how did they go about getting help, if they couldn't understand any of what they said?
…well, it wouldn't hurt to try.
They waved at the scavenger to get their attention. They glanced up in turn, considering them for a moment.
"Tribe help? Please?" Banana asked.
"...what?"
Banana gestured towards the direction of the wastes. "Tribe help." They then gestured towards the ground. "You tribe help?"
The scavenger narrowed their eyes at them, before perking up. "||Follow|| me. ||Might get Firemaker to|| help ||translate||." With that, they gestured for them to follow, before turning towards and disappearing through an unmarked pipe.
Banana exchanged looks with Lizzie, before clicking their tongue twice and entering into the pipe.
The pipe, it turned out, led into a scavenger shortcut, if the smell and lanterns were any indication. They froze, staring down at their guide. They didn't know much about how scavengers ticked, but they knew for a fact they weren't supposed to be here.
But their guide didn't seem to be taking it that seriously, so maybe they were mistaken. They took a deep breath, before sliding down the pole and ensuring that Lizzie was following. As always, their companion was right there, crackling but otherwise behaving itself and following along the wall.
The… shortcut led them further east, through pipes and tunnels that meandered. They could imagine getting lost without their guide, running into a group of scavengers who may not be as charitable-
It took a moment to realize the scenery drastically changed from one room to the next. Walls that had been covered in bricks and pipes were now wrapped in vines and plating, and the drip-drip of water was accompanied by a strange hum that resonated within their soul, as if the walls themselves were welcoming them. But… that didn't make any sense, did it? It wasn't like the walls were alive…
Soon, the three of them exited out into a strange marsh, where water lapped at orbs along the ground and the fog hung especially thick in the air. Banana's ears twitched, half-expecting for the rumble of rain to come…
This place was so strange. They had never seen anything like it through their travels in this place. The sights, the sounds, the smells… all of it culminated into an utterly alien experience.
Past the marsh was a… place? They weren't sure what its purpose was, nor why their guide was taking them past the shelter here, but they had to trust their judgment. So, up they went, and out of the building, and into… another place, with strange, intricate graffiti.
They paused, looking up at the one right next to them. A figure, holding up some disks, with sharp objects pointed at them. Was it being attacked? Were its disks meant to protect it? And why was its face covered in grey?
What… who even was it supposed to be? It didn't look like a scavenger. Was it a creation of the Old Folk? The god-machines, perhaps?
They were led down the terraces, each one with different figures laid on them. A round person, two people holding a… lantern, two people… dancing? And… one person stabbing another.
Their guide pushed them past the paintings, seeming to pay no mind to them as they led them into a gate. Banana froze for a moment, before stepping onto the grates, clicking Lizzie to come forward and…
…wait. What was with the symbol? Nine dots? What did that mean? They furrowed their brow, turning back to the scavenger.
"What?" they asked, pointing up to the symbol.
They shrugged in response, seeming not bothered by it. Banana furrowed their brow, before moving to step away-
The scavenger grabbed their arm, then, earning a hiss from Lizzie. They immediately took a step back, lifting their hands for a moment.
"My tribe," they signed, pointing at the door.
They… didn't like waiting. But what choice did they have? It was either this, or continuing to run in circles looking for their sibling…
So, they placed themself down by the door, staring at the scavenger. Worst case scenario, the rain would come, and they would make a break for that shelter from before. The only concern would be getting there in time.
Soon, though, a few more scavengers filtered into the gate room. Banana had to hold on to Lizzie, just in case.
"Hey, ||Nest||!" The leader of the squad, a masked pale purple scavenger, signed. "||You're here early. Uh, who's that||?"
"I ||don't know. They can't understand me well. But they needed|| help. ||So I'm bringing them to Firemaker||."
The leader leaned in closer towards Banana, squinting her slitted eyes. "||Mmm. Sure. Get them to translate like the messengers. See what's brought them here.|| I'm ||sure Spines wouldn't mind||."
The scavengers nodded, moving onto the grate alongside them. Banana glanced at the guide nervously, who tilted their head at them in turn.
Suddenly, a crack of electricity rang out from the wall, something whirring to life from an unseen crevice. They held Lizzie close, afraid that the ancient machinery was finally failing. However, after some clicking and beeping noises… the gate activated.
One of the other scavengers snorted at Banana, but their guide shot them a glare.
And, just like that, the gate was open, free for them to pass through. They stepped forward, keeping a hand on Lizzie to make sure it didn't get left behind by accident. Their guide still got ahead of them, though, directing them through the pipe into the new region.
The air was… cooler here. Almost fresher, too, saltwater melding with the scent of dust and scavengers. They might've even called it cleaner than home…
They'd return home. Yes, they'd return with Cotton. The two of them could stay there, until a scout part found them and brought them back to the colony. That's how it would happen. Yes.
It seemed that their guide was now following the squad, leading them through to an unmarked pipe. Yet another scavenger shortcut, they figured. Sighing, they continued forward, shadowing the group nervously.
One pipe after another, the scavenger presence increased; more lanterns, more paintings, and all the while the hum in the walls twisted and shifted as they passed, sometimes too quiet to hear over their footsteps and other times resonating through their body.
Lizzie nudged into them, giving them an intelligent look. They… they shouldn't let their nerves get the better of them. The scavengers were fine, they would be fine-
They had never seen so many scavengers gathered in one place in their life. They stepped behind Lizzie and held onto it tightly, pinning their ears back. The room fell eerily quiet, except for that omnipresent, echoing hum in the walls. Eyes turned towards them, a menagerie of all shapes and sizes stopped what they were doing and stared.
They bowed their head a bit, when they suddenly saw the crowd shift out of the way for someone approaching. They expected a big, burly scavenger, adorned with all sorts of pearls, perhaps one of those elite masks.
Their expectations were shattered, however, when the shape of their own kind pushed through the crowd. A slugcat, far taller than any they had seen before, with quite the haggard appearance. They bore a crooked tooth and a deep, purple scar on their face that tore through their crimson pelt.
They were beginning to have their doubts. Maybe it wasn't a good idea to come into a scavenger den full of strangers after all-
"Hey, little one," the strange slugcat asked, kneeling down a bit. "What's your name?"
Banana yipped in surprise, tightening their grip on Lizzie. Nope, this was a bad idea. Nope, what if they died here, and their sibling was missing forever, and they never made it back home, and they-
"It's okay," the stranger replied, gaze softening. "You're safe here. Hey, look at me? My name is Artificer. What is yours?"
They steeled themself. It'd be useless to cry. "B-Banana," they signed. "H… have you seen my sibling? Their name is Cotton, they're white, and we got lost in a storm and separated…"
"It's nice to meet you, Banana," Artificer said, glancing down at the ground. "I'm sorry, but I haven't seen anyone of that description around here. Poor thing… you look like you've been in here for a while..."
Banana had trouble hiding away their disappointment. Their face grew hot as they glanced at the ground.
"Hey... it's okay. I'll take care of you, alright? And... I'll ask around for help with your sibling."
Banana glanced around. "Can Lizzie and I help?"
Artificer's gaze hardened a little bit. "You don't have to worry about that for now. You'll... be safe here. I'd rather you stay here anyways, so we know where to bring them for you two to be reunited. Okay?"
"But..." Banana trailed off. They... were probably right. What success did they have when they were walking around in circles in the outskirts, or running for their life from those squishy orb things? They rubbed their eyes, sighing. "...okay. I-"
Trill beeping reverberated behind them, far more distinct than any noise Banana had heard in the walls thus far. Artificer's ear flicked, turning to face the source of the noise. They gently stepped aside to give Banana a look-
They froze. A tall, lanky blue figure stood in front of them. But… they were neither a scavenger nor a slugcat. Metallic antlers stuck out of their head, and a metallic tail dragged behind them. They covered themself with cloth, both over their body and one eye. A pearl necklace hung from their neck, and they leaned against a spear for support. Finally, seven floating things orbited around their head, and a worm hung on their shoulder, studying them curiously.
Banana took a step back, grip tightening on Lizzie.
But this... creature... was not a threat. No. But then what did that make them?
A new friend?
...

Isn't it "running for their life"?
Also, MONK, WOOOOOOOOO
Correct
Story consumed 
||so, how was she?
||
People love disconnected 
Oh my god I know the source lmfao 
I would react that way too
Omfg
arti gets exposure therapy (real)
Quadruped moon
Or is she doing pushups
I’m imagining her like a feral little goblin
moon training arc
feral goblin gaming
Moon: hiss
Is that sos flipping off saint lmfao
I love your art pff
gracias
yes that is ren flipping off saint
this is basically their relationship
Spines has old grandpa energy
Misbehaving cat
ye, wise old grandparent
its children's children might have children
shore
shore's just its last child
So does Saint just kinda exist or...?
shor is baby
yes. to be revealed next chapter
Confirmed: saint exists
confirmed
nah
absolutely
saint's just gonna be an old-as-dirt menace for renegade

bumper cars
https://artfight.net/character/4330227.moon-upon-lone-shore-dced-rain-world-au here have shore art (all from artfight you can see the og artists on her character page)
bumper cars- oh that's what you mean
vroom vroom
I’m lost
(bump)er cars
Also you’re beating me by three kudos im comin for u
though ive also been working on a fic set in the far future of the fic
OH??
the only way to know that it is canon is if the content within appears in the actual fic
I will consume either way
ye ye
Any more plans for trans propaganda 
oh yes

i also have something in the oven for that
it's gonna be retreading on five pebbles discovering that moon is trans
like, pebbles discovers that fact in a different way
*slaps spinoff doc* this bad boy can fit so many ideas
some regicide content in here too
meanwhile the actual fic document
yes i changed my text editor because im big mad at google
create a subscription for some features
meant for businesses
but its like. the principle
esignatures being locked behind a paywall is like. weird to me
so i switched to using libreoffice and dropbox
random message so that i dont loose this thread
welcome
good call, disconnected is 🔥
great, you set my fic on fire. hope you're happy with yourself banan >:(
pff
This is fine—
idk if this is a real word but she probably has hyperthermophobia
Shore dumps a tiny bucket of water on moon
:)
It is now
oh just looked it up
you might be looking for pyrophobia?
it's just called thermophobia
she isn't afraid of fire, just heat
she could see a fire and be fine, but push her too close and she'll give a lot of resistence
Augh this kind of breaks my heart though
Fear of overheating
after what happened…
I might be stealing that for my own headcanons now
definetly inspired by. uh. taking life as is i think? except instead of water trauma she has heat trauma
yeah taking life as is
mostly because the circumstances are. well. different
dc'ed moon's heat wounds are "fresher" than tlai's, while tlai's has to deal with the repeated trauma of getting rained on every cycle
Makes sense
Idk the heat… the heat fear hits harder to me
Maybe because it points back to what pebbles did? To what she went though before/during collapse
The water is awful obviously, but…
the water was chronic. the heat was acute.
Very well put
Exactly that
Moon has Thanatophobia as well (fear of death). Like. She can cycle, but she doesn't want to return to what I have dubbed as the "mind cage" aka the state she was in before revival
I wanna read your new fic and I will but I just spent alllll morning editing c15 and my brain is sploot
no biggie
But I’m gonna check it out soon I love disconnected 
Hm, splendid
You got a double, hell, even triple space in the 2nd image here
(After "eypatch" and before "something", respectively)
I wonder what events led up to this, quite an interesting situation, this is
There really is a tag for everything 
aejgfnasofesanfnsaf
beautiful
ye you can put anything in there really
That's funny
Why did it never occur to me to check DC'd tags 
I (mostly) de-sillied my tags on recommendation but I kinda miss em
resilly
im fine with having lighthearted tags
They’re fun I like them
I took some advice from ao3 subreddit, they really did not like my tags lmao
... what tags did you have
They were just kinda standard silly for rw I don’t really remember
Delicious 
Also this title is hilarious
thank you
You have either one too few or one too many quotation marks here btw
Anyways can't wait to see where this will go! 
nah that's intentional
Hm well that's weird, to me at least
Like you have this line said by her, it is not ended by a quotation mark, and then there is another line by her which is started by a quotation mark
i've seen it done in books before
it indicates that it's the same person talking
but it's a new thought
Well that's a first to me, you do you
https://archiveofourown.org/works/57666934/chapters/147022168 @still mulch special ping for u
huehuehue
hfish has more kudos than dced
Eh give it a dc’d update or two
honorary beta reader
Saturdays are buuuuusy I got booted off front page fast
:3
I wonder if ||sig is up to something or is he just like "Hey, you're finally awake :)"||
||Sig watching this whole thing like a creep
||
||"huh so that's why she dragged her here"||
||the teasing would be relentless||
||or he'd just keep that to himself, who knows?||
||... one person||
I guess that might be answered next chapter
Maybeeee
||please don't do a backstab sig please don't do a backstab sig||
||maybe moon was just less damaged than ren, so less time needed to simmer in soup?
||
||yeah and he's projecting himself to inform her in the events and maybe even ask if she wants to go back or sth :)||
||... why's it called soup, anyway?||
Sliver of soups
Soup of straw
renesoup
i associate the universe with soup
since its one of the few things that off string iterators can eat
I read that as just… in general
And honestly? Yeah that’s a vibe
Universe is soup. Star soup
We’re just the seasonings
soup world
hello everyone
the universe is soup and we're all the flavor that we bring to it
fun fact: #1124564761586188318 message
Poetry 
so how's the soup
it's souper
A forever soup, we are the ingredients that come and go
thank u
linked ot my friend
the same friend who made my pfp
just want to see more Wild ort
thought making sure more people saw that might help 
The soup is great
Maybe I’ll do artfight next time
If only i wasn't bad at art
so they make you a pfp and you send someone their way to virtually beat them up?
/j
the pfp was an artifght attack tbf
Oh so it's a counter-beatdown gotcha /j
hehe
What is that character on the pfp, anyways? Looks kinda like an iterator but not really?
my oc, angst machine
https://artfight.net/character/4009591.angst-machine-rain-world basically my iteratorsona
Now how angsty is the angst machine?
Ah shit I need an acc for that, you got sth in image form?
they're actually quite optimistic, trying to stay positive. but uh. they've been through the wringer
oh yeah
also this
The hundred yard stare
Ah hell nah they got that "oldest sibling" treatment 
The name change too lmao
I like it, they do seem "aquatic"
Oh the covered up name huh, that's prolly some lore
Fishy
Can't believe you are shamelessly plugging your fic again
/j
i love my fucked up fisherator
the covered up name, what does it mean?

it's fine
DBD was their original/chat name. with the ascension of their creators, however, they took up a new monicor partly out of spite
so dbd is their deadname basically
we can believe 💪
So they changed pronouns and their name and now they can't change it cause of technical reasons or cause they decided not to?
yeah they can't change their chat name
Oh lmao
Oh and what's with the unfinished state, did they just go "not worth it" or "good enough"?
jet limbs are funny even though they are basically useless unless they are off the string 
not worth it
Damn :(
Oh also prolly last question before i go to sleep, is the "seeing alternate realities" thingy like seeing something related to the cycle, or like other universes or just outright other realities?
secret third option, they're probably just insane
but it's like. alternate cycles
Ah so the 1st option, I guess I worded that badly. I think.
Like cycles from the same Cycle they find themselves in?
god, why does the naming have to be so silly
Anyways i'll be
now, cya
@still mulch https://archiveofourown.org/works/57666934/chapters/147100534 pspspsppsps
You’re on fire with this
Me when you pspspspspsps
Ahhhh is this the final chapter??? Ahhh
all good things must come to an end
||sig is a master of half-assing things, I guess
||
Is this that writing trick again or is there a missing quotation at the end here?
Mistake
https://discord.com/channels/291184728944410624/1268439399415156798 future updates will be here or something
It's threadover
/j
throver 
Nooo
Why can I type here again I thought the thread was locked 
Birthday present? 👀
Meow
Fuuuuuuuuck
10-20 dollars
Only one campaign so maybe not?
Region-wise? Seems bigger
But
Yeah
Or #watcher-spoilers ?
There are the teasers
The secret unlisted videos
Alright
@little schooner I'm going to delete my part of our conversation to declutter the channel
you could do the same
You didn't have to do that :V
This place is out of commision anyways 
I suppose
would it be a good idea to create an index post with links to each chapter in there?
Chapter Index
Prologue: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 1 - Moondown: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 2 - Spitfire: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 3 - Aches: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 4 - Messenger: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 5 - Icarus: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 6 - Cheftian: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 7 - Names: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 8 - Lapse: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 9 - Daedalus: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 10 - Paternal: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 11 - Sliver: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 12 - Passages: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 13 - Erratic: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 14 - Pulse: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 15 - Ebb: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 16 - Flow: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 17 - Intersection: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 18 - Barrier: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 19 - Estuary: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 20 - Nexus: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 21 - Destination: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 22 - Enlightenment: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 23 - Awake: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 24 - Comfort: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 25 - Step: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 26 - Boils: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 27 - Out: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 28 - Onwards: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 29 - Unparalleled: #1192290858997928006 message
Chapter 30 - Sustain: #1192290858997928006 message
I'll continue this at some point (probably)
where did that gif come frommmm
(i keep seeing it everywhere)





