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dapper venture May 14, 2023, 10:17 AM

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I recently completed my first short film and I would greatly appreciate it if you could take the time to watch it and provide your feedback.
https://youtu.be/AKcSWYGbuyg

fresh rain May 14, 2023, 10:39 AM

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that deer statue shot seemed long and the sound made it a little too loud,if you know what I mean. But other than that, it's a pretty good short

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and I guess you didn't buy anything for the short

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it's great to see low budget shots here and there

dapper venture May 14, 2023, 11:52 AM

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Thanks!! I'll surely work on that

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Yeah I didn't buy anything for the short

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Just made it on my phone

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Like was the bgm too loud or was the voiceover loud too?

fresh rain May 14, 2023, 1:20 PM

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Nah mate it was only that bangchng that was loud

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The voiceover was fine

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At the end, it's nice to have the passion to make a home made movie

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And to have the balls to share it on a big server like this

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God knows I don't

dapper venture May 14, 2023, 1:39 PM

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Oh got it

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I'm sure u might have some great work too

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Would u like to share some of ur work

fresh rain May 14, 2023, 10:54 PM

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Personal works? Nah man

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I mean

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Outside of some movies I made for homeworks

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Like we had to describe our house in French(currently a beginner)

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And I did a one-take looking movie type of thing

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But still, not a movie

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I mean I did 2 movies with the school club of our school

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The second one was pretty low budget yet it won some stuff

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From like,y'know, small movie competitions and stuff nothing big

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It's called La Cène if you are wondering

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A movie about a diner but it has to do with environmental issues as well and stuff

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So yeah never pulled of something big really

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Glad you did

dapper venture May 15, 2023, 3:20 AM

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You won a competition thats great man

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As if my movie's bout global warming

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La cene is such a great festival

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Which grade are u in though

fresh rain May 15, 2023, 9:37 AM

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dapper venture You won a competition thats great man

I mean it was pretty much my team that won the competition, I still operated the camera in few shots and did some of the prep work though

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We shot it in like 3 hours or something

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And like 3 hours of prep

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It was all shot in our school though that is something

fresh rain May 15, 2023, 9:39 AM

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dapper venture La cene is such a great festival

La Cène(noun, The Supper in English) was the name of the movie btw, some mix of The Doomsday Clock and a simple dine

fresh rain May 15, 2023, 9:39 AM

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dapper venture Which grade are u in though

Technically the 9th, but since I am in French Prep. right know it isn’t really considered the 9th grade

dapper venture May 15, 2023, 10:22 AM

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Okeh got it

dapper venture May 15, 2023, 10:23 AM

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fresh rain Technically the 9th, but since I am in French Prep. right know it isn’t really c...

Ik ik 😅

fresh rain May 15, 2023, 10:23 AM

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you got some great stuff going on though mate

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keep it up, yeah?

dapper venture May 15, 2023, 10:23 AM

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Yeah

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Maybe we'll meet at the Oscars some day 😂

fresh rain May 15, 2023, 10:24 AM

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I mean it ain't really important how good it is or how bad it is, you just gotta have the passion goin' for it, y'know?

fresh rain May 15, 2023, 10:24 AM

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dapper venture Maybe we'll meet at the Oscars some day 😂

Well hopefully some day mate

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Have a great one bud

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