I need help with someone grade my work | Mathematics | Page 1

burnt shaleBOT Apr 13, 2025, 7:43 PM

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lapis crater Apr 13, 2025, 7:43 PM

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What’s it about

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Oh I don’t think I’m good with matrices lol probably a linear alg thing

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 7:44 PM

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Oh yes there's only that

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I didn't put matrices in cuz i didn't leveled up there yet

formal niche Apr 13, 2025, 7:45 PM

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lapis crater Oh I don’t think I’m good with matrices lol probably a linear alg thing

You can check out the 3b1b course on linear algebra

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 7:45 PM

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What is 3b1b

lapis crater Apr 13, 2025, 7:46 PM

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formal niche You can check out the 3b1b course on linear algebra

I mean yeah

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But I study real analysis and multivarible calc

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I do focus on vectors a bit more

formal niche Apr 13, 2025, 7:47 PM

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worn harness What is 3b1b

Oh 3blue1brown he's an educational youtube Channel that uses animations to explain stuff

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 7:47 PM

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Hum noice

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But I really need someone to grade my stuff

lapis crater Apr 13, 2025, 7:49 PM

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formal niche Oh 3blue1brown he's an educational youtube Channel that uses animations to expla...

3b1b cool

formal niche Apr 13, 2025, 7:49 PM

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worn harness But I really need someone to grade my stuff

Yeah I forgot what was the thing you needed to be graded?

lapis crater Apr 13, 2025, 7:49 PM

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formal niche Yeah I forgot what was the thing you needed to be graded?

You nerd ☝️ 🤓

formal niche Apr 13, 2025, 7:50 PM

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It's needed

lapis crater Apr 13, 2025, 7:50 PM

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Ik

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 7:50 PM

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I'm not a nerd lol (I have nothing against nerds)

formal niche Apr 13, 2025, 7:50 PM

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worn harness I'm not a nerd lol (I have nothing against nerds)

No it was a misspelling

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 7:50 PM

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Oh

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 7:51 PM

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formal niche Yeah I forgot what was the thing you needed to be graded?

Some calculations, research and stuff I did on a online pdf

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May I send it?

lapis crater Apr 13, 2025, 8:01 PM

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Sure

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 8:02 PM

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Ok

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https://1drv.ms/w/c/ef36863d4f536e89/EXoXvB_9Lx9BoQshxFtpgFEBRr6ono34Hv48MB17nd0I0A?e=V343Lv

worn harness Apr 13, 2025, 11:28 PM

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So

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 12:43 AM

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Please I need feedback

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:41 AM

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worn harness https://1drv.ms/w/c/ef36863d4f536e89/EXoXvB_9Lx9BoQshxFtpgFEBRr6ono34Hv48MB17nd0...

ok unless you are taking a math history course, it's a bit too much historical detail

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or are you getting asked this in exams?!

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:41 AM

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Yea ik

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No its just, that historical context helps me a lot, also shows me more in abstract way

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:42 AM

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oh it switched to portuguese

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:42 AM

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Oh yea the document is in English and Portuguese 😓

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:43 AM

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i think something is broken here

Screenshot_2025-04-14-06-42-31-755_org.mozilla.firefox.jpg

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:43 AM

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My bad

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Whut

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:44 AM

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maybe i don't entirely understand the text but it feels like there's some math missing

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you know better probably

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:44 AM

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worn harness Whut

at what level are you?

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I'm a bit confused

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:44 AM

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I'm level 1 but not that dumb

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😭

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But I can understand other topics

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That interconnects other subjects

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:45 AM

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you have Pythagoras theorem and group definition in one document which is a BIG spread

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:45 AM

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Yep

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:45 AM

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worn harness I'm level 1 but not that dumb

what does level 1 mean

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how old are you?

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:45 AM

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Like basics

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17

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:45 AM

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alr

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are you doing this for school?

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:46 AM

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Yes

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:46 AM

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hm

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well at least from what i understood, there's nothing wrong that I've noticed

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only comment of mine is that it's pretty chaotic for an outside viewer because you keep jumping between topics but as long as it makes sense to you my opinion shouldn't matter

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:47 AM

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Oh

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:48 AM

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I agree with his comment just looked at it

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what exactly is the goal of this assignment ?

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:48 AM

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Well everything

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:48 AM

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i doubt its everything because it didnt make me breakfast...

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:48 AM

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Lol, not that

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I meant that it will solve my school grades, financially etc..

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:49 AM

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financially? 🤨

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:49 AM

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oh a scholarship assignment ?

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:49 AM

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ohh

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:50 AM

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My finances*

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Yea that too

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:50 AM

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wait so is it or is it not a scholarship assignment ?

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:50 AM

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Not only that

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:50 AM

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and if it is, is it competiton based ?

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:51 AM

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Yes

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:51 AM

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worn harness https://1drv.ms/w/c/ef36863d4f536e89/EXoXvB_9Lx9BoQshxFtpgFEBRr6ono34Hv48MB17nd0...

i mean idk how to grade this really
the math seems fine and as long as the structure makes sense to you then you are good

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:51 AM

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Oh ok

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:52 AM

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well if i would grade it i would need what the topic is about

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because to me its just seems like you are covering to much without going to in depth into anything

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:52 AM

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yes exactly

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:52 AM

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it feels like skimming through notes to kinda get the jist of something

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:52 AM

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Yea ik

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:53 AM

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is this like near the final product or like a prototype before revisions ?

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:53 AM

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also it looks like half of it is copy pasted from chatgpt (not necessarily a bad thing, but it's noticeable)

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:53 AM

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I basically put powered by chatgpt at the beginning 💀

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:53 AM

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😱

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:53 AM

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steep chasm is this like near the final product or like a prototype before revisions ?

Prototype

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:54 AM

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id recommend choosing some topics of what you want to cover in it and going more in depth to bring the reader of the paper along with you

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:54 AM

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But don't worry chatgpt teaches me better than my school

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:54 AM

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steep chasm id recommend choosing some topics of what you want to cover in it and going more...

Oh

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:54 AM

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worn harness But don't worry chatgpt teaches me better than my school

oh certainly, I'll trust you, but as Apathy said, the notes lack depth

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:55 AM

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Mathematical depth?

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:55 AM

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yes

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:55 AM

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well that and story telling

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its like me telling you my day and saying woke up - then school - went to math - english - home - shower - sleep

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and skipping everything inbetween

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:56 AM

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Unfortunately my brain cannot comprehend math without it's utilities and physical, irl context

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Ik

wild root Apr 14, 2025, 4:56 AM

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group/ring/field theory is gonna be fun then 💀

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abstraction is basically unavoidable as you progress into matj

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:57 AM

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Hm it's that supposed to be good?

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:57 AM

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depends if you find it fun or just to abstract

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:58 AM

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Meh I'll try to to do both

steep chasm Apr 14, 2025, 4:58 AM

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oh no you shouldnt do it for your paper i think hes talking about later down the line in your education journey so to speak

worn harness Apr 14, 2025, 4:58 AM

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Ok

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Well thx guys

#I need help with someone grade my work