🔒 Guys i got a simple project it works fine but i need a professional review can you help me

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@light ivy

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[timber flame]

@light ivy where is it?

[light ivy]

I can send it in dms

[timber flame]

you have to post it here.

[light ivy]

İts too large for here

[timber flame]

!paste

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[light ivy]

Im on mobile rn

Ima send half

[timber flame]

maybe you can come back when you're at your desktop or laptop.

[light ivy]

guessing_game.py

import random
import time

secret_number = None
guess = 0
guess_counter = None
hints_left = None

while True:
secret_number = random.randint(1, 100)
start_time = time.time()
hints_left = 3
guess_counter = 0

def first_hint():
    if secret_number > 50:
        print("The secret number is greater than 50")
    else:
        print("The secret number is smaller than 50")

def second_hint():
    if secret_number % 2 == 1:
        print("The secret number is odd. ")
    elif secret_number % 2 == 0:
        print("The secret number is even. ")

def third_hint():
    if secret_number % 3 == 0:
        print("The number is divisible by 3. ")
    else:
        print("The number is not divisible by 3. ")

while guess != secret_number:
    try:
        guess = int(input("Guess a number 1-100 (type 0 for a hint): "))

        if guess == 0:
            if hints_left == 3:
                first_hint()
            elif hints_left == 2:
                second_hint()
            elif hints_left == 1:
                third_hint()
            elif hints_left == 0:
                print("No more hints! ")
            hints_left = hints_left - 1
            print(f"Hints remaining: {hints_left}")
            continue

guess_counter = guess_counter + 1

        if guess == secret_number:
            end_time = time.time()
            total_time = int(end_time - start_time)

            print("Correct! You win!")
            if guess_counter == 1:
                print("You are so lucky, you got it first try! ")
            else:
                print(f"you guessed the right number in {guess_counter} times")
            print(f"Time: {total_time} seconds!")
        elif guess < secret_number:
            print("Too low!")
        else:
            print("Too high!")
    except ValueError:
        print("Please enter a valid answer")

want_to_play = input("Do you want to play again? (y/n): ")
if not want_to_play.lower() == "y":
    break

print("Thank you for playing")

[light ivy]

This is my code if you want to help ty

[timber flame]

you should turn first_hit, second_hit, etc. into functions that take secret_number as an argument. and you should move them out of the loop.

[lavish epoch]

!code

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[light ivy]

When those functions were out of the loop they only did the secret number out of the loop and i dont want that cus i got if you want to play again y or n

[timber flame]

have you written functions with parameters before?

[light ivy]

Just to be clear Im new to python no I don’t think so

Anyways i hust asked ai and it totally agreed with you and explained why so tysm

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