#DOUGH - Donut Shop [Shops]

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quasi ice
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Donut Shop! No changes since the last time I posted - just decided to officially get feedback for some changes.

Matched the OG aesthetic but added a doughnut display to the left. When I posted this last year there was discussion about recoloring the Donuts/Frosting - openrct2 allows this, but not adding it to this one to keep it as close to vanilla as possible. Easy enough to change later.

TODO: I will probably play with the textures colors to rid of some of the pixel artifacts

Left: OG; Right; Swiss

steady musk
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Can you break the flatness on the bottom half of the front of the shop? Also add some grain to all your textures so it breaks that dithering pattern. Otherwise the modelling is supperior to the vanilla version.

marsh jolt
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Yeah I like that it's much more obvious that it's a frosted doughnut

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would adding sprinkles be a bit too much?

lunar oar
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could you thin out the sign scaffolding a bit to match the original more?

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and it looks like you need the surface stippling too

grand kelp
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The roof is a bit thick, no?

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It's thicker than the walls at least.

quasi ice
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Took a lot of these suggestions and, yes this is a heavy WIP still. I think I went a little too HOT PINK on the roof - it's screaming Homer Simpson Doughnut pink 🤣

I can't really get sprinkles to look more significant than random pixels. Included a shot of that too. (tbh my first time messing with Nodes in Blender... oh boy the possibilities!) But I may mess around with sizing and see if they can look good. View #1 looks GREAT with sprinkles but it kinda gets lost on #2.

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Still need to find a way to breakup the front as frutie suggested, I did extend the 'shelf' outwards a little to give a little bit of a difference between the opening and the bottom

steady musk
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spinkles look good and the new texture is nice also

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it seems good enough for me

lunar oar
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you probably need fewer, larger sprinkles

marsh jolt
quasi ice
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I'll probably do the sprinkles manually next (this is just a hair particle emitter that I've been tryign to tweak around) but it's definitely not as noisy.

graceful pulsar
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huge fan of the donut having sprinkles on it, it's a nice detail