First of all.. you sound amazing, I actually think you sound slightly like me when I first started…ofcourse its ok to be a beginner and have mistakes but please do not be dis encouraged.. few notes I have for you
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explore your tone, vocal weight, and registers..you sound beautiful but I sense some instability with your tone as it changes a lot which might make it seem “off”
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Engage your diaphragm(fancy word for stomach/abdomen) when breathing, take deep not too long not too short inhales through the mouth and use that air while singing
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Explore warm ups and vocal exercises regarding registers, vowel enunciation
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keep hydrated!! The audio is slightly low quality so I can’t tell if its you or the mic but I hear slight dryness and too much throat projection which isn’t good as you will hurt & tire yourself as well as…it simply wont sound great
Overrall its beautiful and I wish you the best of your journey🫶