how am i doing?

[dire stirrup]

trying to implement more chord closure with these, any tips? better breathing is next, thought probably much harder to fix...
i'd love feedback on both of these and any general opinions or thoughts are great too.
(i'm just after a cold so my voice is extra weak on the head notes and still a little weird on some of the others too)

also, how is my articulation? i always have trouble pronouncing th and r sounds, is that audible when i sing?

[arctic forge]

Th sounds are consistently T or Ti. Do you have an accent from somewhere non-American ? I know Italian accents do that off the top of my head.

I’m not quite hearing issues with R sounds, but I know there’s at least two distinct ones so need an example

I am also hearing a really strong glottal sound on your “I”’s. Not a bad thing, just that you can soften that if it’s causing you to trip up.

[arctic forge]

The Th issue you don’t have on softer sounds like “Through”. Only on words like “The”.

Alright, that’s enough on pronunciation. You have a good singing voice, no complaints there, just picking apart what you asked about.

[dire stirrup]

i'm from the czech reupublic, sadly these are the only things keeping me away from a perfect posh british accent(or so i've been told)

[dire stirrup]

i've never noticed this habit, thank you!(something to be more aware of)

[arctic forge]

You’re damn close. The mutter of “I can’t sing that part” made think British or derived. I would practice on getting “the” down, once you get the tongue placement you can start softening it to a more “duh” sound as an alternative.

Just gotta trick your tongue enough until you figure it out.

[dire stirrup]

i'll definitely try that! though i think my tongue is the better at tricking me than i am it lol