talking to the moon by bruno mars

[frosty thistle]

agh first time giving feedback but like before i start, ur an amazing singer. srsly. i love ur tone. okay so when ur singing in the beginning for example, theres nothing wrong and necessarily bad with ur singing, it just needs oomf. think of it as u have to internalize singing and it sounds like ur talking. u need more of a flow and more of like a continuous feel when singing. this one is VERY picky but i feel like its very helpful bc even tho it doesnt sound very connected, u gotta make it FEEL connected. otherwise, ur placement feels a little off and nasal at time, which could feel like pushing very hard and such. my advice is to try buzzing or lip trills as “singing” the song to understand how it shld feel in ur voice. also the riffs r pretty messy, so my advice is to try slowing it down little by little in order to know every note. ALSO THIS SONG IS HIGHHHHH, so there are parts u simply cannot sing like full and up in ur face like that. hope this helps wonderfullllll

[gray verge]

Yo this was SO helpful wtf. You didn’t just give critique — you gave like… coach-level breakdowns. I really appreciate the time you took 🙏 I’m gonna try the lip trills + slowing the riffs down and def rework my flow. Thanks for being real with it 💙

[frosty thistle]

alwaysssss

[gray verge]

so...i tried singing the high notes in my head voice( i hope thats what its called i am a total beginner so i have no idea)...and i felt idk...a kind of strain on my throat and it felt like my voice was cracking up

lemme send the audio rq

and i feel like the tone is kinda off too...any idea whats the problem here?

[frosty thistle]

this is way better than before, bc before was vocal damage. but i can seen ur concern with a strain and cracking, but it rlly could be from like no practice. if we arent comfortable up there, it will feel uncomfortable. my advice is to hum the song or buzz the song on ur lips, and find where it is and where to place the sound, hopefully making it much easier. for the tone its def very unsupported and weak, but with training or simple vocal warmups and breathing deep and preparing for that high note makes it easier i promiseeee

and yes head voice

[gray verge]

i see...thanks a lot :))))))

[frosty thistle]

yea hope this helps im more indepth with girls voices so im rlly only talking from experience, but i would love to hear the finished cover!!!!

[gray verge]

@frosty thistle IG I DID SOMETHING...i sang the song "in the stars" in head voice ig...(ik the last part is kind of...is kind of a switch of tones to a higher note...i was just seeing how high i can go...nevertheless ima send u the audio)

also...yeah i was kind of straining my voice in the part "im still holding on to everything thats dead and gone"...but idk bouot the rest of the song

[frosty thistle]

BRO THIS IS SO GOOD HOLY SHIT. im not even lying this sounds amazing, and so comfy for uuuuuu. lmao i love the last part and im glad ur experimenting. this is amazing i hope u know that gosh. i couldnt hear the straining at all, but hmm i feel that it just practice will def make it better, just dont push and u got this!!!! THIS IS A YESYESYESYES