Looking for feedback

[severe jolt]

Any parts that I can improve on for these?

[fierce lodge]

referring to fly me to the moon, it's a very bouncy beat and it seems like you're trying to replicate some of that feel. One way to do this is to slightly accent the down beat and that should start you off.

[sacred badger]

this was so good

[severe jolt]

ooh ok thanks for the advice! it rlly helped me a lot! ^^