Looking for some feedback

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English is not my mother language, so this is the first song i take seriously to sing in English, been singing for a while (however there's stuff i might not know), let me know what do you think

Also phone-friendly version

[still solstice]

this not bad

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thanks!

[still solstice]

np
could use some work but i have no clue about singing so yea dont take my word for it

but its good

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Yea, I also made the production/mixing so either the singing or the mixing could use some work