yours. an original piece.

[thorny hedge]

Hello the vocals might not be good haven't sang in awhile but i would like peoples feedback on wether this song would be good

[next shore]

good singer!

[thorny hedge]

Thank you!

[limber totem]

sounds good. Go for it!

[thorny hedge]

Thank you!

[wraith dune]

personly your really off key on a decent amount of notes

otherwise good

[thorny hedge]

Off key?, interesting could you maybe tell a place so i can focus on that thank you!

[rocky delta]

yes I agree with @wraith dune, example places would be from the lyrics "they say fairytales need happy endings" and "But I wanted to be yours"

However this song is wonderful Id add it to my playlist

just clean it up a little but this is amazing I have to say

[thorny hedge]

Thank you so much for your feedback!

[wind thicket]

Hey, your Voice is not on pitch some times but this could be and issue cause of the Guitar. Your trying to match with it 🙂 but overall its a good Song and you have a nice voice !

[thorny hedge]

Thank you! ☺️

[minor oar]

Did you ever come back and make a finished version?