Character desing feedback

[deft cedar]

Hi im really new in vtuber desing and I need to know if this desing is eyecatching or tips to improve the desing in the future pls!

[brave veldt]

Its VERY eyecatching! I think it's super great, but the mushroom hat feels out of place with the rest of the design imo

the mushroom adds a pop of color that kinda detracts from the overall balance, and it takes away from the other interest points

I don't know the lore or ideas behind the chara design, so I dont know if the mushroom is important or not

though overall, its super solid and unique! genuinely the only thing that i feel like that could be done better is just the mushroom

[deft cedar]

Yeah the mushroom "hat" is actually part of the head and its important because the chara is like half mushroom half creaking (yeah the minecraft mob) but maybe I could change the red hue of the mushroom so that it more closely to the red of the other parts of the body

[regal pecan]

The mushroom stands out because it’s much more detailed when compared to the rest of the design, as well as more saturated.

You could try muting the red colour a little bit and add a faint gradient (it will match the gradient “motif” on limbs, ears, and tail) and maybe make the white dots a bit more sparse?

The red patterns on the face and the double eyes (super awesome design choice btw) should be the most detailed part of the design (or at least in the upper half) so they draw the most attention

[deft cedar]

Ohhh I like that idea