#Overall Chibi model Critique!

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cerulean bane
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I'd like to ask for a couple of stuff!
But before checking out my questions, take a look at the model 31
My main focus rn: How is the line boiling effect? Does it look noticeable, how quickly did you notice it? Can it be disintguished while its in the usual lower corner zoomed out?
Also, with the thicker lineart on the right arm, I assume its better to go thicker right? Compared to the rest fo the body

Next: the mouth, would/is vbridger be overkill for this? I feel that my main hurdle is just the mouth shapes, i feel that I need to experiment more on those, I need to make them more rounder, but will those rounder shapes look good with vbridger or should I go for the non VB mouth forms.
Also I just noticed that I havent activated the lineboil for the mouth xd
How would the inner mouth look if i were to ditch the lineart... or color the lineart, get rid of the side lower teeth,etc ect... I'd love to hear other ideas!

And now for the common asks: Hows the model itself? The head angles, mouth rigging, anatomy, etc
I feel that the front of the head is too round, but this is my first time making a chibi, and using augmented physics., and I know that the eyelashes can be pushed out when looking to the side But man, I love the bounciness!
And since its also my first time making a chibi, how are the proportions and anatomy?Should i change some sizes? Like bigger/smaller mouth? Lower it or make it higher?
How much shading should i add?
This should be it for now! Tyvm if you read this far 💗

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Also funny toggle extra xd

I'm also using this chibi to practice adn try new ideas as well. e.g: first time making actualy boob physics, and using BL weights for pupil depth, etc

waxen rose
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With rapid motions, the line boil is barely noticeable. You may want to over emphasize the line boil or people might miss it.

Mouth is personal taste. Vbridger could be something you offer as an add on when making ych chibi models.

The ears for the monkey ear toggle feels too abrupt- maybe use inverse clipping masks to soften the transitions better from behind the head to in front of head.

cerulean bane
# waxen rose With rapid motions, the line boil is barely noticeable. You may want to over em...

Should I make it just thicker with more variation in width, or also have some spots where the line art disconnects (Circled red), where the lineart passes through the corner (circled blue), and stuff like in where i circled in yellow, I cannot think of a name for this some reason lol

I actually went with a non VB mouth first, but half way through went with vbridger, but i have it set up so i can toggle between both tpy eog mouth rigging atm

Ahh, the monkey ears are something I added for myself as practice! I need to fine tune it a lot still. Aswell with the horns, tyvm!

waxen rose
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I'd mix and match the methods you mentioned and make it thicker so it's easy to tell when the line style changes for the line boiling

cerulean bane
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aighty

tidal geyser