Model concept opinions

[gleaming tapir]

She’s a vampire btw **

[gleaming tapir]

Bump with an edited version

[visual tartan]

Hello
How are you doing
Can you DM me

[gleaming tapir]

No lol. botttt

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i would say the legs look very short. ideally, legs should be longer than the torso.
unless this is stylistic!
the eyes also look pretty cross-eyed. i’d say space them out a bit more

[gleaming tapir]

She’s 5 foot

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i’m 4’11 and my legs are longer than my torso

[gleaming tapir]

Im 5 foot and look exactly like the sketch

Every body has different proportions

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okay, just a suggestion

[gleaming tapir]

Also can you zoom in on her face and tell me if it does look cross eyes

I’m not comeptlely sure

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it does, in my opinion

i would make the irises a bit larger

[gleaming tapir]

I have a specific eye style for this character and she doesn’t look the same without it 😭😭

💔

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Respectfully, why ask for criticism if you aren’t going to listen?

[gleaming tapir]

Because

I was asking for things to ELEVATE the design, not change my style

Everything you told me was purely about my style

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I suggested making the irises a little larger, that’s not changing your style IMO.

up to you

[gleaming tapir]

It is tho

I always draw her like this but ty for ur thoughts anyways

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in the second picture, the irises are large.. this is what i mean

they hit the top and bottom of the eyelids

[gleaming tapir]

IMO I don’t think it looks like her, I couldn’t change it after tho bcs it was traditional art 😢

Anyways either way ty

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sure