#jesuislego
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urban swallow
My writing -
De nos jours, la question des graffitis sur des murs dans les villes suscite des débats passionnés et divise l’opinion publique contemporaine. Les deux textes mettent en lumiére des perspectives contrastées. Le premiere texte souligne qu’il est essentiel de montrer la culture dans les rues et le graffitis peuvent le faire. Il y a aussi plus de touristes grâce à ces peintures qui explorent des emplacements moins reconnus. En revanche, le deuxième texte insiste sur des effets négatifs associés avec cela. Les résidents doivent nettoyer des murs eux-mêmes parce qu’il n’aime pas des graffitis sur les murs de leurs maisons, et c’est le même cas pour d’autres bâtiments comme des bancs.
Bien qu’il faille reconnaître la validité des deux arguments, ma conviction profonde est qu’on doit créer des emplacements seulement pour des artistes peut-être dans les sites où la ville veut attirer plus de touristes. Tandis que, ils doivent aussi interdire les graffitis sur des murs de maisons ou sur des bancs etc. C’est-a-dire, dans ce façon nous pouvons rendre tous les deux (des artistes et des citoyens) heureux. Ainsi, bien que c’est essentiel de montrer la culture, c’est également essentiel de décider sur quels murs c’est possible de faire des peintures.
foggy gust
not relevant to the writing directly, but for your information chatgpt is terrible at any kind of work -> rating, or rating -> work (this includes asking for questions of a given CEFR level for instance), it's basically more random than anything. Also positive feedback loops can have it give the same answer over and over.
urban swallow
I see, i suppose i should use this server instead of chatgpt then haha
karmic radish
I know nothing about CLB, but I just found this description of writing for CLB 7:
Convey personal messages in
formal and informal
correspondence.
Reduce short oral discourse to
notes; and, text of two pages to a
summary.
Write service correspondence for
less routine purposes.
Complete an expanded range of
forms.
Write two or three connected
paragraphs to sequence events, to
describe or compare in depth.
The text you've written is more academic in style, so it's hard to say if you've fulfilled the requirements, but it seems to me you have
However, you need to double check your subject-verb agreement
and your use of connectors is stilted
urban swallow
for context , i have given the tcf 4 times already and this will be my fifth time as i keep missing the clb 7 on one section or the other, for writing i got mostly borderline clb 6 3/4 times and one time i got low clb 7
the most recent one i gave i got borderline 6
let me see if i can find the criteria for it
plucky spade
Your use of des and les is the biggest problem i see
urban swallow
i found this
urban swallow
Your use of des and les is the biggest problem i see
do you have any tips to improve on that ?
plucky spade
Yea revise connectors, like:
dans ce façon de cette façon
Tandis qu'ils (no comma)
plucky spade
do you have any tips to improve on that ?
Uhh
Idk im a native
But you're not using les enough
For example les artistes et les citoyens
urban swallow
oh okay
plucky spade
insiste sur les effets négatifs
Also i wouldn't call benches buildings
Infrastructure maybe? Or installations
urban swallow
i thought of installations but i thought that to be more of services inside a building
but good to know, thanks!
plucky spade
It is infrastructure apparently, if it's cloué au sol
urban swallow
i see!
my test is in 11 days and im really hoping to move from the borderline 6 to 7 i just need to improve enough for one more point
plucky spade
You got this
urban swallow
thank you!
plucky spade
Your french is already really good
urban swallow
but i always miss on one section or other, i need clb 7 in all 4 - listening reading writing and speaking 😭 , last time i lost on speaking the one before that i lost on listening i need one try where all 4 i can get clb 7
clb 7 i think is B2 but not lower B2
plucky spade
Well in 11 days idk how much progress u can make but have you tried joining voice chat here to practice speaking?
urban swallow
No, because i work 9-5 monday to friday and after that i try to study test specific stuff
I am at my job right now
this was my third try in july and i almost had it , i just need 458 in listening instead of 433
this is the most recent one and i think i didnt practice speaking much here esp cause i was too busy with my job and didnt study after the july attempt, this time im practicing speaking and all sections i think my speaking is getting good again
but im just scared cause this might be my last try
anyways thanks everyone! i will keep practicing and see how it goes
lilac flint
What’s « clb level » ?
foggy gust
What’s « clb level » ?
CLB = Canadian Language Benchmarks