#absenceol

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Please be patient

Our volunteers look into many questions every day; sometimes it takes them a little while to answer.

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Make it descriptive, including relevant context, but also to the point. This way you improve your chances of getting a more relevant and specific answer.

weary grove
rich osprey
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Okay so is it like you’re asking the questions and she’s answering them?

weary grove
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Yep

weary grove
vernal mist
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We can correct her answers, but we cannot write them for her.

weary grove
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Wait ill ask

vernal mist
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Can you share what your friend has prepared?

weary grove
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Yes sure let me ask her

rich osprey
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If your friend can’t answer or formulate her responses, a good idea would be repeating the question in the answer, that’ll give her some blocks to build on

weary grove
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Ok i got them

rich osprey
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« Qu’est-ce que tu aimes faire le weekend ?
– Oh, le weekend j’aime faire du shopping, j’aime aller au parc, j’aime rencontrer mes amis… »

weary grove
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It has been corrected too . But anyway to imprpve what she wrote?

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Oh wait

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This is got another one

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Gimme a mim

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This is the answers she wrote for this script

weary grove
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So sorry its a lot

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Forget the 1st script

weary grove
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These r past papers its seems

vernal mist
# weary grove She wants to know how to improve her answers?

I'd suggest just fleshing them out a little.

My mother is a really good cook. ... I would like to learn from her.

I want a house with lots of space. It would have a large bedroom, an en suite bathroom, and an open kitchen.

Etc. Assuming she's able to stay within the time.

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Just to personalise her answers and have them stand out.

weary grove
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Ooo ok

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Oki she understood wht u said

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Oki thx for the tip

vernal mist
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No problem. She's more than welcome to post her changes here and we'll help correct them.

vernal mist
weary grove
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Ooo ok.ill say