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[glossy harbor]

Please be patient

Our volunteers look into many questions every day; sometimes it takes them a little while to answer.

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Make it descriptive, including relevant context, but also to the point. This way you improve your chances of getting a more relevant and specific answer.

[cyan nest]

Really urgent its 40% of my grade

[crystal forge]

we can't do your work for you, but if you have specific questions feel free to ask them

[cyan nest]

How do i write a good introduction

[sullen haven]

In general, an introduction should pique the reader's interest, explain what you're going to write about, and be around 10 to 20 per cent of the text's length

It should introduce the topic about which you're planning to write

Typically, when texts are graded, they're graded according to whether they fulfil the following criteria:

1. Is the content appropriate and comprehensive? (Does it relate to the task and does it answer everything that was asked? Do you, perhaps, add an idea or two of your own and explore them critically?)
2. Are different grammatical structures used? (Whether it be active vs passive structures, the tenses, the subjonctif, the conditionals, relative sentences, participle clauses, etc.) Ideally, you want to use as many as you can.
3. Is the register appropriate for the task? If you're writing a letter to an authority, you'd like it to be highly formal, so don't use things like "ça" or "j'suis", use "cela" and "je suis' instead. Make it formal.
4. Vocabulary: Is there a wide range of vocabulary, including less commonly used words?
5. Structure: Does the text flow nicely, is it logical, do you have different paragraphs that each explore an idea in detail and connect to each other in a nice way? In French, you wanna use stuff like "c'est la raison pour laquelle", "à cause du fait que", "cependant", etc. to connect each sentence and paragraph to each other