#buildingrivers1990

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honest lagoonBOT
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Please be patient

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rich bison
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The general message can be understood but there are a lot of little corrections to be made.

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I'm gonna give you some hints

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Note that you used "de" before économiser. This should give you a piece of information about how to improve your first sentence.

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Some accents and articles are missing.

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What is the gender of "manière" ? Also is "à manière" correct ?

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Same thing for "jours", it is plural, but what is the gender of "jour" ? There is something to change accordingly.

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Check the present tense of pouvoir

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You have to pick between tu/vous to have a correct sentence with préparer, you cannot use the pronoun tu and then use the 2nd person plural.

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Let me know if you can figure out some corrections with those hints.

solar summit
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Hi, I just got back from a long day. Let me see if I can guess

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rich bison
rich bison
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So "quotidien" will change accordingly

solar summit
rich bison
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And it is "de manière quotidienne"

rich bison
rich bison
solar summit
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riiihgt

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Ok that was a good practice.

solar summit
rich bison
solar summit
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Would a direct message be okay or through this chat? I might plan to send you 1-3 this week for yoru feedback. I really need someone to coach me hheheh

rich bison
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rich bison
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Todavia lo puedo entender, pero hablar, olvidé mucho sin practico

solar summit
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rich bison
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