#Thom 🌈

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hard rune
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Hey Thom chatcoucou Your French is super good and it’s totally understandable but there are a few things that Id like you to change.

  • Use "tous" instead of "tout" for "every day"
  • "depuis deux cents jours". I suggest using "depuis" to indicate an action that started in the past and continues into the present. Note that I made "cents" plural.
  • What you said ain’t wrong but I would say "sur un serveur Discord" because adding "serveur" is more natural imo;)
  • "ils m'aident à apprendre" you should use the preposition "à" before the infinitive verb. I would rather you say "je le pratique sur un serveur discord qui m’aide à apprendre" because although "ils" is not wrong, you haven’t mentioned who "ils" are, you only mentioned the server which is singular.
  • "plus rapidement"* you need to use the adverb "rapidement" because rapide gives off adjective :p
  • "la certification CEFR B2" because "certification" is a feminine noun.
  • "tu n'es pas à croire moi" is wrong, it should be the other auxiliary verb, change it to "tu n’as pas à me croire"
  • "C’est d’accord", are you trying to say it’s ok? I think maybe you should say something like "ce n’est pas grave"
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Sorry for the long text, I could’ve given you the corrected paragraph but I want you to know what im correcting and why, could you please rewrite the whole thing with my suggestions? 😅

clever fern
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No the explanations are super helpful! I sometimes try to post in French like I do in English but I'm always sur it could be improved because I've never written that much in French before. And it helps me figure out what I need to go BSc to study in my lessons

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Yeah I'm trying to say "it's okay" like "you don't have to believe me. That's fine"

hard rune
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« C’est pas grave » works because it’s like saying it doesn’t matter x)

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If you rewrite the whole paragraph with my corrections I’ll read it again to make sure I haven’t missed anything out

clever fern
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J'etudie le français tous les jours depuis deux cents jours mais c'est difficile pour moi. Je pratique sur un serveur Discord français et ils m'aident à apprendre le français plus rapidement. Je aussi écoute des podcasts français. Mon objectif est la CEFR certification B2. Mais tu n'as pas a me croire. C'est pas grave.

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@hard rune merci beaucoup !

hard rune