#dottelm

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balmy ermineBOT
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Please be patient

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sterile forge
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Is this a school assignment?

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You’ve made mistakes

tulip folio
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Yes it is

river relic
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take a look at number one again and the negation

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i didn’t look through all of it but the biggest mistake you’re making has to do with the auxiliary verbs

tulip folio
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dumb o me

sterile forge
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;homework

balmy ermineBOT
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tulip folio
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i guess i should have specified im not in school, its just me studying independantly

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not taking any courses i just find books and work independantly or with tutors

river relic
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it literally says we can help, just not give you answers

tulip folio
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if im making it look like i just want straight answers thats really not my intent

river relic
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I didn't think so, t'inquiet pas!

tulip folio
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not sure if youre referring to me or the other fella

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ah ok

river relic
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just read the article I sent and I think you'll get it!

tulip folio
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yes i will

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thank ye

river relic
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de rien

elder flame
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For the first bit:
(1) You didn’t change the adverb.
(2) Wrong auxiliary; look at what the question used.
(4) Typo on the indirect object pronoun.

elder flame
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Second bit:
(1) Wrong auxiliary for « être ». See what the question used. Also, « y » explains a location already so « là » is superfluous.
(3) Two things: (a) Wrong tense for « partir » and (b) You can’t use the direct object pronoun, there’s no direct object there.
(4) Wrong tense again. More over, there should be agreement on the past participle.
(5) Object pronouns are ALWAYS behind the verb, not after.
(6) There’s no direct object here, so its presence is wrong.
(7) Wrong tense again.
(8) Wrong tense again.