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[vale pawn]

Are you doing RP ?

[agile imp]

It’s for a school homework! I’m learning vocab but im scared it’s wrong

[unreal cedar]

it's perfect! you see, trust yourself :)

[agile imp]

Wait is this right too

La texture est soyeuse et lisse et elle la porte souvent lâchée avec une raie sur le côté pour un look détendu mais élégant

I wrote that earlier but this I wrote avec une raie sur

La texture est soyeuse et lisse, et elle la porte souvent avec une partie latérale pour un look détendu mais élégant.

Which one is right i wanted to say The texture is silky and smooth, and she often wears it down with a side part for a relaxed yet elegant look.

[unreal cedar]

une raie is good

and i would say sa texture (assuming you're talking about the hair texture)

[agile imp]

Yes thank you!!

Sa texture est soyeuse et lisse et elle la porte souvent lâchée avec une raie sur le côté pour un air détendu mais élégant

Sa texture est soyeuse et lisse, et elle la porte souvent avec une partie latérale pour un mode détendu mais élégant.

Which do i use

[unreal cedar]

1

but "un look" is a bit strange

it's more like the way you dress

i would use one of them

[agile imp]

I chnaged it to mode

ill do air

is it still un air?

Is anything else wrong with these?

[unreal cedar]

yes

[unreal cedar]

no it's good

[agile imp]

Can i use either of them and will they both mean The texture is silky and smooth, and she often wears it down with a side part for a relaxed yet elegant look

[unreal cedar]

which both

[agile imp]

yeah

do they both mean this which one means this

The texture is silky and smooth, and she often wears it down with a side part for a relaxed yet elegant look

Sa texture est soyeuse et lisse et elle la porte souvent lâchée avec une raie sur le côté pour un air détendu mais élégant

Sa texture est soyeuse et lisse, et elle la porte souvent avec une partie latérale pour un mode détendu mais élégant.

out of that

thosse

[unreal cedar]

do you read my answers?

i told you first one

i just said that you needed to replace look, which you did so fine

[agile imp]

i did read

so is it fine now i did it

can i use either of them

ok firt one

mt friend said i have to change sa to la

idk what to do now

wait is this good

La texture de ses cheveux est soyeuse et lisse et elle les laissent souvent lâchées sur le coté comme pour avoir un air détendu mais élégant.

other native told me what i wrote was very wrong

and no one says lachee

[unreal cedar]

🧐

i just noticed, it should be lâchés since it's refering to ses cheveux (masc. pl.)

anyway, it means that her hair are not tied, is that what you mean? i don't understand why it would be wrong

as for la or sa, it's either la texture de ses cheveux or leur texture (if you mentionned her cheveux before)
i think i led you in a bad way by saying sa texture, sorry

[agile imp]

I wrote this lemme copy and paste

La texture de ses cheveux est soyeuse et lisse et elle les laissent souvent lâchées sur le coté comme pour avoir un air détendu mais élégant.

Is that okay? I’m scared I’ve already wrote it on my cards for the vocab

[agile imp]

Yess like it’s down

[unreal cedar]

elle les laisse
lâchés
côté (not really important but still)

[agile imp]

wait i dont get it

i already put it on my vocab flashcards

[unreal cedar]

what?

[agile imp]

What’s wrong with the lâchés

What are u trying to say here

[agile imp]

What u wrote

[unreal cedar]

It refers to ses cheveux which is masc pl