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[hidden dragon]

• « à le client » should be elided
• « un baguette et une croissant » check your genders
• « ácheter » check your spelling
• « des autres produits » when an adjective is placed before the noun, the definite article disappears so you have: « tu as de belles fleurs / des fleurs merveilleuses »

otherwise looks okay to me

[mint juniper]

I thought i should include the le client in the first sentence and then i can put pronouns for them for example : il lui demande etc.

Yeah i did the genders wrong

Acheter doesnt have a circonflexe i now realise that

Yeah i totally forgot this, it should be d'autres produits right ?

So we can say i got the basics wrong, i thought that my mistakes would be the construction OF D.indirect but u say that it is fine, thank you

[mint juniper]

Do you think the last sentence is right like i thought it is %100 wrong

Direct version would be

• le client : " bonne journée"

[hidden dragon]

I thought i should include the le client in the first sentence and then i can put pronouns for them for example : il lui demande etc.
Sure, but you still have to elide them into « au client », that's mandatory