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[long solar]

this is important for my finals

help would be apprecieted thanks

[untold pumice]

we can't correct homework for you, but I just gave it a look over and it's quite good
some things aren't said in a super natural way, but it remains understandable

[long solar]

ye thanks, though its not homework. Its just prep for exams

[elder bane]

It's good overall.

sur le terrain astro
i don't know what that is

Pour les personnes âgées, il y a un parc pour se promener **par **elles-mêmes

Nous avons une communauté forte qui est bien desservie par notre quartier
Can you clarify what you mean ?

[long solar]

i meant we have a strong community that is well served by the district

[long solar]

for astro like a football pitch but astro instead of normal grass, it might be an ireland,uk thing.

still thanks for the o view, it is much appreciated

[elder bane]

You mean public services and such ?