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autumn maple
ebon shale
Chère XBC,
Comment allez-vous (1) ? Dans ce [...] je veux te parler de mon nouveau lycée. Ce lycé est grand avec il y a (2) beaucoup de monde. Tout le monde est bon et gentil. Dans ce lycée il y a un piscine (3). Ces enseignants sont très gentil (4). J'ai une nouvelle amie ici. Elle est très belle et gentil (4). Tout le monde est nés (4) intelligent. Je dois étudier plus dur. J'aime mon nouveau lycée et **le tout d' (5)**étudiants et mon (6) enseignants. J'espère tu (7) (8) et ta famille est bon (4) et en bonne santé.
À bientôt,
[...]
(1) Check your pronoun here because you used « vous » here but « tu » in two other places.
(2) « avec » here doesn't have an object. « Il y a » is its own clause and « avec » can't do that so either add an object to « avec » or remove it entirely; it doesn't belong anywhere right now.
(3) Check your gender agreement of the article with « piscine ».
(4) Check your gender agreement with the adjectives.
(5) What do you mean here? « le tout de X » means, 'the whole of X' so it's a bit out of place. (The whole of students?)
(6) Check your number agreement of the possessive here with « enseignants. »
(7) The pronoun « tu » here is a subject pronoun whereas « tu » isn't the subject here, it's a stressed pronoun. Would you say, 'I and my family', or 'Me and my family'? I suggest you read up more on the various forms of the possessive pronouns.
(8) The conjunction « que » can't be dropped in French unlike in English. You should read more about subordinating conjunctions.
dark oar
> Chère XBC,
> Comment **allez-vous (1)** ? Dans ce [...] je veux te parler de m...
i’m sorry i couldn’t understand 4 and 6 and 8
nvm i understood 8 but 4 and 6 and 7
ebon shale
nvm i understood 8 but 4 and 6 and 7
(4) Look at the subject that the adjective modifies and look at your adjective. For example, « ces enseignants » is plural but « gentil » is singular. « Elle » is feminine singular but « gentil » masculine singular.
(6) Look at the noun and then look at your possessive. It agrees with the noun. « enseignants » is plural but « mon » is singular.
(7) Pronouns have different forms depending on their function in a sentence. For example, the subject pronoun is « tu » and the object pronoun is « te ». This means that when it's acting as a subject, it uses « tu » and when it's acting as an object, it uses « te ». It's the same rule as the English pronoun 'he' and 'him'. Now, in that sentence, « tu » is not as a subject; the subject is compound: « [tu] et ta famille ». If you look at the link I gave you, you'll see that there are more than just subject/object. Try reading on each part and then come back here and tell me what it is.
dark oar
(4) Look at the subject that the adjective modifies and look at your adjective. ...
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tysm ur a life saver
do u have any tips on how to start or end letters
ebon shale
do u have any tips on how to start or end letters
You can just look online for that.
olive meteor
@dark oar Hii ! You can look for « formules d’appel » (start a letter ) or “formules de politesse” (end a letter) there are plenty of them on internet.
Here are some (depending of who you’re writing the letter to)
To start a letter :
To someone you’re not close with :
Cher monsieur (his last name)
Chère madame (her last name)
Bonjour monsieur (…)
Bonjour madame (…)
To someone you’re close with :
Bonjour (his/her name)
Salut (name)
Coucou (name)
(For the last two ones you really have to be close to the person, it has to be a friend or a family member)
To end a letter :
To someone you’re not close with :
Cordialement
Bien à vous
Sincères salutations
Salutations distinguées
To someone you’re close with :
Amicalement (for a friend)
Bien à toi
À bientôt
It would be better to check on the internet but i think it should be enough, hope this helps !!
Ooh and in your letter, you said « ce lettre », when you’re supposed to say « cette lettre », I think that all of the other mistakes were corrected ^^
dark oar
tysm