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viral bramble
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Hi
As I am on my phone, I am not able to provide you a full correction, but here are a few mistakes:

  • In the first sentence, "technologique" has to be "technologie". "Technologique" is an adjective, "Technologie" its noun. After a "avec" you have to provide a noun or a nominal group.
    "évolue" has to be "évoluer". The expression "est en train de ..." implies an action that is still ongoing, so you need a verb in "indicatif" (I do not know the english word 🙃 ). Here, you need "évoluer" -> "est en train d'évoluer". The remaining of the sentence is correct.
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In the second sentence, "je ne me le sers" is wrong. "Me le", has to be "m'en" -> "je ne m'en sers ..."
The m' part is a contraction of "mon" or "me". The "en" here is a reference of the previously said object: your phone.

Afterward, you need to add "pour" after the "que" in "je ne m'en sers que pour..." as you want to say you use your phone to do something with it.

The word "depression" is not just a word to say you're feeling sad. It means more of the disease of depression, it is much stronger than just feeling sad about soing something.

Finally, "quand j'en ai faire", here you need to add "a" -> "quand j'en ai a faire", because faire is the infinitive form after a past composes form
"J'ai <conjugated verb> <infinitive verb>"

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viral bramble
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No problem
But I'm still not able to finish what I started 🙃
I will give you advices later

split sphinx
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Is it a or à on the last thing you said

split sphinx
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@viral bramble ?

viral bramble
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Sorry, it is a à

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When you have a doubt, try the same sentence but replace "a" with "avait" (avoir, at the imparfait tense (a form of the past))
Of it works, no accent
If it doesn't work, you add the accent
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