#looking for some help/ opinions this NMM
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Hi Cyber! I think it partially works for me. The range of colors and amount of areas seem good to me. The things I suspect "break" a bit the illusion for me could be:
- the coherence of the placement of light between areas (the same light should hit similar volums in the same place)
- the need for secondary reflections (people say "bouncing off the ground", not sure it's the only / right way to say it, but if it works for you?)
Fair, could you point out the areas where the light is not coherent?
Those are all going to be guesses for the volumes (would have to see these IRL) and your intention for the source light to be fairly high and still offset to our left (when looking at the picture): (red = main highlight, green = my poor man's attempt at secondary reflections)
oh and the tip of the tail doesn't seem coherent but I've assumed it's not finished?
you'll have to remember I'm a newb at NMM, by the way 😅 . I hope I see things correctly in what I wrote.