#looking for some help/ opinions this NMM

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slim lotus
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looking for some help/ opinions this NMM

undone python
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Hi Cyber! I think it partially works for me. The range of colors and amount of areas seem good to me. The things I suspect "break" a bit the illusion for me could be:

  • the coherence of the placement of light between areas (the same light should hit similar volums in the same place)
  • the need for secondary reflections (people say "bouncing off the ground", not sure it's the only / right way to say it, but if it works for you?)
slim lotus
undone python
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oh and the tip of the tail doesn't seem coherent but I've assumed it's not finished?

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you'll have to remember I'm a newb at NMM, by the way 😅 . I hope I see things correctly in what I wrote.