#Criticism, suggestions for additional details

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split raven
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Any sort of criticism or suggestions really. I'm not actually happy with it and I don't know why. I'd like to know what I did wrong it could do better, in addition to maybe details I could add, or missed while I was painting, etc..

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Side note: The priming/basecoat were airbrushed on. The black on the gun, and the red and yellow were brushed on. I'm not happy with how textured the coats are. I suspect I could improve the consistency of my paint, but I don't know what I'm doing wrong, if I should just add more water, or try something like glaze medium in small amounts.

gritty obsidian
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Hey hey! So first thing. It looks like you mostly just did a solid base coat for the red / yellow areas.

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Normally you want to thin your paints a bit. It might require more layers but you won't have any chunks / chunky looking areas.

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You have some.nice edge highlights on the armor in some areas but none in others ( like the helmet area] .

You could also do a wash to have give it some.darker areas. Normally your want at least.3 colors ( a highlight / a mid tone(or base color( and shadow ) for each area.

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Otherwise you got some nice brush control!

split raven
gritty obsidian
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You don't want it to be like just water mind you.