#Miss Maxine's Stupid Sketchbook
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killer robot

how about this: a game where you manage a diner but there's a cannibalistic serial killer at large and as the story progresses, more and more of the diner regulars go missing until, on the final day of the game, you confront the killer and have to keep him at bay until the police arrive
there would also be "survival" mechanics that boil down to keeping your struggling restaurant sanitary and fuctional
ben comic 1
lol
held
rotating his head to be at a slightly different angle
WHY THE fuck IS THIS SO DIFFICULT
man i wanna try drawing some really horrific and brutal gore but i can't find good references for the complete evisceration im going for
wow that's the most fucking unhinged soup post jesus christ
mostly wanna do that stuff for a horror game im conceptualizing
dont be scared of me im normal
argh ouch oh ew too many entrails in my brain argh i need to think about the outside of the boys
well while im still on the idea, here's some sketches of some ideas i had for the cannibalistic serial killer's design. trying to make him feel super mindless and animal-like while still having a very obviously "i eat people for fun" type of face
3rd one is by far the worst and doesn't feel connected to the concept enough
looks more like a shitty version of doctor robotnik from the SATam cartoon
the first one is pretty good if a bit too cartoony but hits a perfect distressing vibe with the utter lack of expression in his eyes
the second one, however, feels more like an actual person in a way, and i can smell his breath just by looking at him, but he almost feels too expressive
you are my focus group, which one feels the most threatening and hollow to you
which one would you want to know your location the least
which one do you not want to be seen by
which one would be the most distressing to see outside your window
which one would be the most shocking to confront in a funny diner game
The first one could go somewhere
this is getting more palatable
average magnus and max discussion
i think the bright white teeth and expressionless eyes of the first one have an unmatched vibe, that guy definitely eats human organs
good news
i think i want to make max slightly chubby cuz he is a food enjoyer like me
i give him a little bit of waist
yes
well ive been trying for a while to think of a different name for her but the only one that's really stuck is Spatter, what do u guys think??
she's a big silly
True
she is pulling a silly on him
hmmm i wonder
i wonder if perhaps i could make her big chubby and squish?? would fit with her lava lamp goop type of design i think, also i am lacking in rounder body types
sure
beach day or something
hmmm maybe i shouldn't have drawn her wearing clothes because this would imply that she is usually otherwise completely naked
true
hammond you blithering idiot
gabriel
yuni
gonna make this a full artwork with multiple sweaty shirtless androids
man
shirtless android men doing battle
who's battle
me i hope
real
here's a listen at my latest ORG
dee dee but she has a tiny bit of facial hair because why not idk
cool
moved his cheekbone up and gave him lower lip
do the lip look good or should i backtrack on bottom lip??
imo it's better with the lower lip
nice
i dont think it's gonna contrast so much in the final version tbh but it's what it's
ohwell
remembering a lot of my OCs
sillies!
zero thoughts, heads empty
here is a few more
i should color all of these
no thats mean
which one looks best??
i personally vibe with 1 and 4 but the torn up jacket and shorts are supposed to be her old military uniform from before going rogue, and there's another character in her universe, astra, that also wears military shit but her's is green
idk maybe they're different branches of the space force
astra is the octo lady btw
she's a pilot
her and yuni are in lesbians with each other
here's astra again in color
captain maliface, vicious intergalactic war criminal, frankly my most dastardly villain
he has obliterated multiple galaxies
yknow what, screw the war criminal label, he's a god damn terrorist
How can this guy be a terrorist he looks so funny
3 is also nice i think
made him round
boytummy boytummy
him
green hair
ben comic 5
Silly!
Mmm hidden weiner
this is the peashooter, maybe i could name it smth closer to the polar star as a nod or smth
this is the rocket launcher
i think this is supposed to be a machine gun or a permanent upgrade to the peashooter or smth idk
and this can shoot thru walls idk
the sprites can swap out to visually indicate which weapon you're carrying, i think he did that in cave story, it's very helpful
sprites in my game are bigger so the weapons will be way more obvious
It looks like flintlock pistol lol
ngl im getting bored of protoman game, i wanna do something more goofy and cartoony
here's terry, the stuck-in-the-80s PE teacher that loves his family to no end and will do anything in his power to keep them happy
im planning to prototype a wario land style game featuring him on a quest to save his family from a hellish gang of demon bikers or smth, when he's fully enraged he can charge with the power of a train traveling at top speed, absolutely decimating anything in his way
nice
preparations are underway
check out this ghost
cool ghost
wait
holy shit it's me
based it on this picrew, got permission from the creator to make an original design based on this guy ☺️ https://x.com/Vitreous_Glassy
Audrey
She/Her Clown full of rage.
Founder of the Jack-o meme.
no proship, no AI
👩🔬Started HRT on November 25th, 2022👩🔬
💚@dayofpi💚
this is a soup
what the soup
pole vaulter
idk
full casual outfit for max :D
magnus now :D
https://youtu.be/thoiaUehL3c finished this dumb thing last night
I've been working on this dumb project since September of 2022.
Well you put them in a situation
you just gave me an idea
hmmmm
they are concert goers i bet
but max is too short
magnus hold him like a cat so he can see
omg real
i hate drawing >:D
added bassist to this trio
arghdg this is so messy
how do i make it so the proportions aren't so jank
their body parts augh they're all different like
it has some charm tho
is just a sketch :/ there will be a time to repair this stuff
fair
bg :D
the sillies fire
uh oh i think i accidentally made 4 toe'd feets a part of my style
it can happen ig
sillies singing a song for school talent show
i think they are probably adults ☝️ idk they don't rly have any lore, just some bg characters :D
oh
i accidentally revived an old OC
guy on the right looks just like a character i made in miitopia
any thoughts on how this is looking??
good i think
A :D
2/3 boys done :D
they
i wish i didn't go off when i just draw random background characters lol
yeah but now i wanna keep them 😖
BUT I HAVE NO ROOM FOR THEM IN THE MAIN CAST ARARARARARA
maybe they could be recurring background characters in magnus and max lore, like a friend band or something
i think the purple guy's face is the most fucked up "normal" face ive drawn because of how wide open his mouth is lol, haven't drawn dudes singing before but i think it's pretty accurate to how proper singing looks at times
how's this guy look??
he is too small!!
them :D
nice
he is not tall enough
here's the art im working on as my audition for that PVZ fan game i mentioned at some point i think
Oh nice
update on this
update again
oh i should revive that project i think
here's zomboni again
this is difficult, i must admit 😖
hmm.
banger
far from done but i reckon it'll serve well enough as the sort of audition it's supposed to be
i have some panels done :D
working on some concept stuff, im calling him the Undead Golem or maybe Grim Golem or something
touching up this panel a little bit, what amount of hair looks good on this fella?.?
fixing up this panel
trying to make him more original
looks like cave bot with very bad posture
here's post-cancer max because i think you're all too happy today
;(
He needs comfort 
poor bby
i think occasionally having his back hair spikes form cat ears would be silly and enhance his emotiveness :D
that's why i drew them like that there ☝️
oh nice :3
cute
fuck im so pissed
idk how i can push the stylization on this more but i really want to
yessssssss
if i can find all her sprites, im gonna swap curly with his human boyfriend

hell yea
there's him
christmas one
holy crap he is in the video game
wdym??

i do believe a soup boy death has been locked in fellas
edgy political cartoon 2
Soup would never say this
ourghehgd i get to do more cave story sprite editing today :D
good
so true
steamhappy balrog
he is silly and attitude
very silly
i have unlocked the character death ability in my artist skill tree
this is a threat
Uh oh
im thinking to open emergency PFP comms, are these good examples??
they're all cropped and edited versions of previous artworks ive made this year but they do the job i think
yeah, but the third one might feel more like an actual crop 
yeah i couldn't find the layer with the lower blood spatters on it so i just rolled with it
i could maybe edit it a bit so that it's just his face and swap that out on the examples
well anyway comms are open idk if im allowed to promote here tho
if you want to buy my wares, you will have to follow my trail
ok i think this works better
Oh damn, fire
this with edmond i think
i have received birthday gift a day in advance 🔥🔥
perhaps some sort of monster or ghost that could appear in june's comic??
tried out a new technique for sletching and whAT
idk how i did that
it looks so good
should i go with something more like the games are stylize a bit??
yeah i like this better
god man i dont know
ok
bro never buy spring locks at gas station bro
which eyes should i do
terry
game mockup, some kind of reversi battle or something
I bet for sillyghost
i wonder if a lava lamp can beat a guy with massive metal tentacles, we will have to find out
i should color those portraits and make like full concept art cuz that reversi battle idea actually seems super solid imo, not to pat myself on the back or anything
that mario-esque font is cool too, i should see about making an actual complete font out of that
im gonna call him parenthesis
or um
no wait i called him something else before
shit what was it
nah im gonna call him
uh
sprocket...
yes
no
idk
sprocket is his name
human boy that will face the horrors of creepypasta disease or something
i can't believe im 20 and making cave story creepypastas and OCs while im unemployed lmao
i am living fr
im 21
help
Helps you 
quote
ragemiz
veby angy
modding is going well
a couple newcomers to my artfight roster before i update the others
sketching is my fucking absolute least favorite part i hate this spatter looks wrong
maybe im just sleepy
it's happened a lot before where i sketch something late and i hate it and then i wake up the next day and it looks fine
it's just that cuz these are gonna be like their official portraits for a while, they need to look as on model and correct as possible
yknow it's funny, i think june is probably my most default character design
he's the one on the left up there
the ghost's name is spatter, june and her become friends in their story
june gets his eye ripped out or something and it lets him see ghosts for some reason
idk it's 1 am this is kinda not an opportune time to get me started on my loreew lol
is her shoulder fucked??
hmmmm nah it's fine ig??? stylization and all
this is june's block sketch or whatever
here's his brother howell, who's supposed to be like slightly taller
WHAT HAPPENED
i dont know how to fix this
it's all gone wrong ararararra
whatever
i can work with this
yeah i can make this work
finally he will be huge
LETS GOO
this is going exceptionally well
WHAT
no way it's megaman
yes ❌
he's huge ☺️❤️
i feel like im nailing the big hands/feet look with these
edmond
i think i actually like this kinda broken perspective thing with the feet
Soup's Sketchbook
howell is so hard to draw
Looking good
Banger
https://artfight.net/~SoupToonArt HAVE AT THEE, FUCKER!!!
i feel like i lost some sauce with spatter's ref image
protoman
shading almost done
another one done 😎😎 and we're back on par with the level of quality i want :D
small goth wolf or big gay snake
vampire
dee dee
check this out
btw does my pixel art look any good at all? i'm not entirely confident in my abilities tbh
you're going a great job with curves afaik
although it's a lil hard to judge since most of pixel art i've seen so far are sprite edits 
cool :D
im trying very hard to make the curves look smooth
im using my knowledge from minecraft builds lol
REAL
the runnerrr
i have decided i would like to be miserable and i want to give her unique outfits and movesets for every level
and then when u beat the game you can use every outfit in every level and the levels have elements that would change to accomodate the different movesets cuz i LOVE BEING MISERABLE AND DOING WAY TOO MUCH WORK AHAHAHAHA
i could even use that concept to make DLC levels if i felt like ruining my life lol
oh man a level builder would be so cool too
fuck why do i need to have so many ideas i hate my big beautiful brain sometimes
im going to come up with a few levels i can make to assemble a demo/proof of concept thing
here's some concepts
vampire mansion would have like zombie enemies and if they bit her she becomes zombie, like a warioland transformation sorta
beach volleyball would have some enemies playing volleyball and birds
and western town would have targets that behave like walls that she needs to shoot with shotgun
vampire mansion outfit is an MCR reference and western town outfit is a back to the future reference
tileset
first attack almost finished RARARARAR
another attack in progress :D
colored, got rid of the irises cuz they made the eyes too scary
dude im fumbling this so bad wtffff
new boy
mimic encounter
finally
the return of the fan favorite soup boy howard wells
he prefers howell tho
that artist that drew those emo boys gave me permission to kill one of the boys in my comic ehehe
if you have any human OCs that you want me to kill feel free to send some of them lol jk idk
taking this opportunity to say i do offer semi-cartoony gore in my comms cough cough plug plug
june house
it's based on my irl house kinda
look what i did :D
Oooh that's a cool print! :O
actually that came with the shirt, the part i did was the cutting :D
ooh lol
8 pages now
max
gay old man
😀
beetle
forgot to make him arm red im deleting my account
fixed
check this out
do you like him
prototype assembly time
violent dentist that wants you teeth
why would darnell want my teeth 
pls don't steal my teef... oh... oh no
boo lady
like from TTYD
except with the cat ears cuz i like the cat ears better
based
cat ears basd
epic fart flipnote
Toot
felt like drawing so here's a doodle of some elf boy i made in the rpg maker for 3ds, his name is rudy, not exactly a redesign cuz i never drew him before, more like a customized design based on a character i made with premade assets yknow?
an specter
i like the old one better
qwer
oh i know that guy
HI SCARY PROMPT LIST FOR HALLOWEEN
dentist
They had to go to the dentist
polished sketch and lineart
im making cool shit for my game
bro spilled pen ink 😭
he doesn't look quite right, but i think im getting good at pixel art
the coloring and shading feels pretty on point
im gonna need to do some tweaking and adjusting when i get home cuz he's supposed to look a bit more like this and obviously he doesn't in that sprite
i think his design in that reference image is like absolutely perfect aside from his eyes being maybe just a touch too big
yes this is 1000x better and more accurate
oh i should make his hair blue instead of brown
yummy 😋

i should remaster this
oh chat
this is peak
this is the best character spriting ive done
obviously you can see i took the body of the NES style protoman and changed the head to one from an older sprite of him and the white outline just really makes it all WORK
queer little mechanic
I think I'm going to make at least 1 portrait for each character so i can have access to all of their colors and just make art assets with that palette
making detailed pixel art like that is fucking hard by the way
it's tricky making those portraits because every single pixel really has to be deliberate
and sometimes you need to make odd color choices
it is taking shape >:3
my passion project of gay robots and space colony and stuff >:3
i have moved up to the concept screenshot phase >:3
epic skateboard dude
chat am i fucked why do i find that orange dude i shat out yesterday hot
Hello chat :D
i am extremely non-threatening and safe to be near c:
These!
And now, without further ado, here comes the wall of text 😌
These characters are named Agent Androse and Bruce :D
They are both members of the Top Secret International Peace Keeping Association
Androse, being recognized within the association as among the absolute best of the best, got transferred from a neighboring country into the branch Bruce works at to help in efforts to dismantle the plans of a very powerful extremist political organization that wishes to enact a hostile government takeover to establish a fascist rule over the country, which has utterly disastrous implications for the entire world.
Androse has a very powerful skillset including things like the ability to practically flawlessly mimic a person's behaviors, mannerisms, and other general quirks. This allows him to assume another person's identity in the case of an undercover operation where the best tactic would be to replace any given person for a short period. This combined with an insanely impressive vocal range that helps him adopt everything down to the near exact voice of an individual makes for an absolutely air tight cover. His androgynous appearance, the idea that led me to create him in the first place, also helps when an operation demands the forging of a completely new identity, allowing him to easily assume a more masc or femme appearance and also opens the door for him to hijack the identities of men and women all the same.
He also has an all-star makeup, prosthetic, and costume artist in his crew. This is very important info.
That costume designer is just as big a player as Androse in this whole thing because without them, most of Androse's relevant skills would be rendered moreso irrelevant. This costume designer is about 50% of what makes Androse the all-star top tier agent he is.
Here is him in a femme style.
obligatory evil british scientist ☺️
to begin
so it seems i have a solid general setup, now what i need to concern myself with is the execution
how will i write this chapter
i reckon the beginning will be easy enough, standard top secret government agency stuff, mission briefing, characters get their names shown when they're introduced, quick snappy stuff and a very basic bog standard plot to start with that slowly escalates
eventually the characters stumble upon information that tells of a plot to overthrow the government and replace the president or whatever with a fascist dictator or some deadly neurotoxin shit or something
this plot, being a threat to the country in which this takes place, which is a dominant superpower in this story's world, presents a threat so massive, with security so airtight, and dangerous government ties, that this agency has no choice but to call upon the aide of the absolute best of the best internationally, which leads to the introduction of the main character
ive already shared plenty about agent androse himself
my ass going to replace joe biden with deadly neurotoxin™️
that seems like a solid introduction
i can give it a couple more drafts but after spewing all that, it sounds pretty solid
way more solid inside my brain where i am generating scenes and stuff
this story may or may not be heavily inspired by the current political landscape in a certain country in which i live
so, yeah, sorry to break it to ya but this story does have some major political elements to it but it's all for the sake of queer little spy fella and his big gay man buddy
i always have a super rough time starting my stories, this is the primary reason for june's comic starting with a cold open nightmare sequence because instead of meticulously expositioning in the first chapter i can just throw the reader into the fray immediately and do some lighter introduction work just having some characters get introduced mainly
of course there did have to be some obnoxiously expository dialogue in a couple scenes but that's just how a first chapter be sometimes 🙃
expository stuff like june, immediately after jolting awake from nightmare, thinking about how it's gonna be his missing dad's birthday tomorrow and that's what has him so bugged out and how he wants to go to work to get his mind off it
the smart boy
moARE
can't help myself designing OCs, here's the beginning of a slasher boy
I like your artstyle a lot 💙
omg thank u ☺️
ok, this looks really, really good
ehehe thank u ☺️
the iconic final stare off with the protagonist as he's shoved into the police cruiser (spoilered for blood)
nice
mor
trying to warm up for music makering by remixing a song from one of my old FNAF fan games but it seems ive lost my spark cuz this remix is sounding like straight ass
left is old, right is new 🤢
it sounds a little better thru headphones but not by much
the original sounds more focused, that remix sounds like i have no idea what in doing
EW HAHAHA
https://youtu.be/thoiaUehL3c? i could only find this one, contains spoilers for dont hug me im scared tv series in case that smth ur concerned about
I've been working on this dumb project since September of 2022.
mario kart DS snare completely saving the very mid percussion lol
eyes of flame incorporated :3
the block with the flower on it
a bit more sketching
bubbol from the fantastic electronic entertainment show
max draw picture
the maxes
Captain Yaargh
GASP holy shit that's almost a standard soup style head if ive ever seen one
i think i wanna define the jawline a bit more, that could help i reckon
and make the back of the head look more circular from every angle
and you guys said i should donut lol
i made no detail face with no idea how to texture or use materials in the same amount of time donut tutorial would've taken lmao
:(
im gonna do that retopology thing ive seen more skilled and knowledgeable artists do so that he can be better optimized :D
oh hmm maybe i should model the full bust first though so that his neck is actually connected
i fucked up
uh the sphere i used for the eyes is merged with the head cube for some reason
i wanna delete it
playing some more
🔥
aside from the worst fucking topology ever, this came out pretty good
i'm gonna probably re-topology-ify it so it flows better and actually can be animated but im satisfied with the shape
it looks surprisingly good for me being completely unfamiliar with blender up until just last night lol
first thing i wanna tackle when i get to it is the mouth because that's just completely a mess 😭 the corners are all folded over and under on themselves lol
whatever, late June lore spoilers and gore, final chapter type stuff, yknow
||Possessed June||
withered june or smth
Anyone in here do 3D?
I need some pointers on my topology, cuz I frankly have no idea what I'm doing.
🔥🔥🔥🔥
first soup boy of 2024, 7 ft goth boy :3
i think we are so back and by back i mean i am designing way too many fucking characters once again 😎👍
bartender
he likes sonic
unfortunately it was not regular sonic
wait who the hell gave him that
jeff the taxes
soup jester sona real
some guys
nice
cat june
crazy what a few years can do for a guy
the guy from feed mii ☝️
wrong version posted, this is the latest revision
𝑈𝑛𝑡𝑖𝑙 𝑡𝘩𝑒 𝑡𝑟𝑎𝑢𝑚𝑎.
the trauma in question:

some info about mason from the og trilogy and the reboot movie
everyone hates reboot movie
also the weird spinoff that was made right after the original trilogy where mason was an alien symbiote creature (unfortunately never came out)
i continue to hardly know
maybemaybe
pink before and after trauma
forgot his fuckijg eye bags

obsessive P posting
some artfight ref sheet wips
the peak redesign this rodent deserves
all of them
+1
here's all of them :3 again
hell yeah
here's a death league Pinocchio
Cool shit, what's his lore
he doesn't really have much compared to the main canon version
he's notorious in the death league for his level of brutality on the field
he does have a harpoon in his right arm that he can launch out, though he prefers to use it like a whip because just impaling his opponents is too easy and provides little in the way of thrill
designed this random genderbent doppelgänger version of one of my OCs, her name is Maxine, and short story short im her now
Miss Maxine's Marvelous Menagerie of Men (And Other Things)
i am obsessively doodling my transition goals lol
wooden man get a fright
WIP
yay woo rat child
idk why i still post in here
ayyy check these out look it's cricket and pinocchio in the first pic and the second one is some jackass what calls himself jasper
hey wow it's that dreadful specter i call Dead Sheriff
ms me telling you important stuff
did you guys know yayayshduduwuejhahajoxpdos
i am the toilet guy, this is my domain
i'm going to implode
ouhhh... it's peam
guess who's back in town
idk if i already posted deez
muh refs
got some OC doodles to catch up on
the amoeba
tubers lol :3
some more maxies
pre crashout june
deltas and luggy's
june design update
a few random doodles
yummy arm
the iconic duo, Nameless (big guy) and Rider (violence lesbian)
lol
some maxies
Dead Sheriff
a sleeper
spangtong and the flattener
ghosta
even more maxies
june accidentally raises the dead
mor.er maxies
june crashout
punk pinocchio, puncchio (spoilered for rude gesture)
the final maxies (donkey kong spoiler in pic 1)
Miss Maxine's dumb sketchbook
here's the maxie of the day
BONK
ANIMATED
Miss Maxine's Stupid Sketchbook
shove's her in my pockert
KILL
i'm the modeler
cool
pomp walk
some digital circus stuff
socially acceptable response to minor inconvenience
some OC stuff, her name is Rider
a couple maxies, canonically accurate teeth and me when im working on animating in blender
a couple 2D pomps
a couple 3D pomps
URETHRA!
thank u :3
i did rip the model from the game, but i like pushing the expressions on it
i got the oven from luigi's mansion

trying out some storyboarding for my next animation, not like i need it for something so short but i figured i'd give it a try anyway
rider when she evolves and decides to start overloading both worlds with temporal anomalies and ripping holes in the fabric of space and time
rider when aggression_stat >= 100
andy balls
antsy blast
the lineart
dring
this
i FOUND it
non canon doodle of an insane june
gun
what if he wasn't non canon ☝️ perhaps he could be a representation of june desperately clinging to his sanity
june


