Can anyone correct my text bitte

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That's pretty much perfect. 💐 Did you write this without any help?

There is just one thing I'd change: "...aber die Pilze waren schlecht" sounds rather as if the mushrooms had gone bad -> I'd go for "... prima, bis auf die Pilze" (... great, except for the mushrooms) 🍄

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Thx a lot! Yeah I really did it myself

And thx for the recommendation!

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That's amazing, then. 🥇