#Can you guys help me with correcting this paragraph?

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austere bloom
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two small things:

Plötzlich sah ich diese Frau, [...], auf mich zulief [...]
doesnt quite work.
either "sah ich, wie diese Frau [...] auf mich zulief" or "sah ich diese Frau [...] auf mich zulaufen".
lud sie zum Kaffe ein. Er stimmte zu
you used er 'he' while refering to a woman the rest of the time.

Lastly the first sentence should i believe have a comma between 'zu' and 'wie'.
Else this seems very good to me!

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i suppose komfortabel is an unusual vocabulary choice, but i dont think its wrong, just odder then saying 'bequem' or 'angenehm'?

viscid turtle